Story Summary Help?

[Bianca <3]

Hi guys!

So I've been working on a novel and it's almost done. And although I'm keeping my hopes low, I do want to try to query it out and get an agent. Right now, I'm trying to work on the story summary to include in the query, and I was wondering if any of you would be interested in reading it/critiquing it for me? In particular, I want to know if it sounds intriguing. Would you be tempted to read this? Is something confusing? Does some detail seem erroneous?

Please let me know and I'll PM it to you!

<3

[Twillie]

I'd be happy to check it out

[Deleted]

I'm willing to take a look at it for you. I'm part of a mailing group of writers - a number of whom are professionally published - and a lot of people in the group ask for critiques of story summaries for query letters, so I think I've seen enough of them to have a rough idea of what works and what doesn't. I've also looked into the agent querying process myself, so if you need any help with any aspect of it, let me know.