Comic Series Overlook?

[Twillie]

So I've been working for the past two months on reconstructing my comic, organizing its order and fixing any loose plot threads. I've mapped out most of what I need for the first half, and I've broken down the comics into miniature arcs, basically. The arcs are all four-parters, and I have completed my first one recently.

Is there anyone who would like to look over and critique this arc? I want to make sure that the story makes sense and is entertaining, and that I don't throw any confusing jokes or plot points out there. I'll message the comics to the first few that offer. Any help would be appreciated!

[Layla "Nimbus" Karimi]

I'd love to help out! Your comics are always great fun

[Twillie]

Thank you so much, Layla "Nimbus" Karimi! I'll message the comics to you.

[Deleted]

I'd be happy to look them over for you as well.

[Twillie]

Alright, thanks I shall send them.

I'll probably send them to one other person if anyone else wants to look at them.

[Tiger]

I can take a look if you like =)

[Twillie]

Alrighty, awesome! I shall send them to you, and I think I have enough people now to look them over. Thanks!

[Carolyn]

I would offer as well, but it looks like you have plenty of willing betas.

[Twillie]

Thanks anyway I appreciate the thought!