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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 14:50:59 GMT -5
I just finished a series I've been working on a for a few months, now, and I'd really appreciate some feedback from someone who has the time to read roughly 50k words in a timely manner.
It's basically an adventure story about how I met my Grundo, but it's also the personal story from his point of view of how he learned to let people into his life.
Also it has Werelupes, Dr. Sloth, magic weapons, and an ADHD Zafara in it. Fun times.
So if anyone feels like reading it relatively quickly and letting me know if there's anything I should fix before I send it in to the NT, that would be awesome.
I don't really want to post it here because of the length, but I could email it or paste it into forum PMs.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 16:02:43 GMT -5
I have a lot of time on my hands, so sure.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 16:04:01 GMT -5
Oh, awesome! Thanks so much! I'm going to give it one last readthrough and then send it off to you. Do you want it via email or forum PM?
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 16:13:44 GMT -5
Forum PM, please. I'm excited to read it!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 16:19:15 GMT -5
Sounds good! I'll get to you sometime this afternoon or evening. Thanks again for your help!
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Post by Breakingchains on Dec 19, 2013 21:43:21 GMT -5
If you still need another person, I can do eet. Might take me about a day or two but I'd like to help. PM would be fine for me also.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 21:45:34 GMT -5
Awesome, the more feedback the merrier. I'll send it to you, too. I'm about 2/3 of the way through editing, and I hope to finish soon.
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Post by Carolyn on Dec 20, 2013 16:46:54 GMT -5
I honestly wish I had the time. I'll look forward to seeing it in the Times, though!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2013 16:48:13 GMT -5
I honestly wish I had the time. I'll look forward to seeing it in the Times, though! Thanks! Here's hoping it gets in.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2013 16:49:47 GMT -5
I'd offer, but I don't know how useful I'd be as a beta reader. >w> I already have three projects running at the moment, myself. I'd love to read excerpts, though. :'D
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2013 16:54:30 GMT -5
I'd offer, but I don't know how useful I'd be as a beta reader. >w> I already have three projects running at the moment, myself. I'd love to read excerpts, though. :'D Heh, I do appreciate your interest. I've actually been quoting excerpts I think are especially amusing/cool to you over PMs, so... ;D Maybe I'll send you some longer excerpts of relevant portions, though. :3
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