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Post by Rikku on Nov 4, 2012 5:33:05 GMT -5
this scene was gonna have a downer ending but then Burns had to ruin it by being all cheerful
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2012 16:26:09 GMT -5
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Post by Yoyti on Nov 4, 2012 17:09:31 GMT -5
Don't worry, I intend to spend the next several sentences explaining the anvil. I just haven't quite gotten there yet.
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Post by PFA on Nov 4, 2012 17:19:29 GMT -5
I considered making this sentence less redundant but then I decided I'd keep it
just because
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Post by icon on Nov 4, 2012 22:13:19 GMT -5
Mysterious figure this is no time to be sarcastic, there is plot advancement to be had :I
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Post by M is for Morphine on Nov 4, 2012 23:41:46 GMT -5
Oh, she mad.
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Post by PFA on Nov 5, 2012 2:24:36 GMT -5
You apologize too much, bro :I
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 5, 2012 16:44:51 GMT -5
Delta. <3 You are so much fun to write, and it's weird how easy it is to keep you physically grounded even though you're a datasprite or nymph of the net or some other accurate epithet that I haven't come up with yet because nobody's needed to name what you are.
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Post by Kristykimmy on Nov 5, 2012 18:19:03 GMT -5
Yeah, even though it is set in fictional world, I kept the names of days and months.
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Post by icon on Nov 5, 2012 21:06:32 GMT -5
I love footnotes
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Post by Yoyti on Nov 5, 2012 21:30:48 GMT -5
I love you... Yes, that's more than one sentence. I think the tagline for my story should be: "Where meeting new people is more exciting than engaging in vicious battles with them!"
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Post by Rikku on Nov 6, 2012 0:45:07 GMT -5
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Post by PFA on Nov 6, 2012 2:21:59 GMT -5
:U
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Post by Jayeee on Nov 6, 2012 4:27:25 GMT -5
#TwinWorldProblems
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Post by Yoyti on Nov 6, 2012 10:41:01 GMT -5
Courtroom scene. Neither party speaks the same language. Hilarity (hopefully) ensues.
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