We were talking on Skype about how all the Jades have long sleeved clothes, and how they would get really hot in the summer. So then I tried sketching some short sleeved outfits! Some look better than others.
I can't words, so here's my suggestion on the bear via drawing.
Red bear is just a basic "this is the basic shape of a bear" (I always doodle out some shape practices first before diving in to a pose)
Blue is me trying to draw the scene using said bear anatomy. Bears can't lift their head and neck above shoulder height, a big muscle prevents it. The bear in your version needs a longer neck, and a more horizontal positioning of its head. The rock it is standing on is also very steep, I couldn't get my bear to stand comfortably on such an angle, so I made an adjustment to the slope in my version. Also, I attempted an angry bear face. :X
So this guy just kind of willed himself into existence halfway through the story, as characters like to do. He's pretty nice though, good friend of Rafael's.
...also I started an intro sequence for Medieval game and made these rough sketches and I think they're pretty accurate imgur.com/a/H0Jxd (CelestialLizzieAvery I guess since your characters are in it lol)
So I played Deltarune chapter 2! I liked it so much that it possessed my drawing hand for like two weeks straight. Expect spoilers ahead! Especially for the bonus boss!
I did it myself just to see it (and because I somehow got good enough at the Spamton NEO fight to beat him consistently), and you have to be EXTREMELY deliberate about it? No wonder he takes it personally.
More "Spamton as Dealmaker" doodles
AND THEN I DOVE HEADFIRST INTO THE ANGST, OOPS. I spent WAY too long on this, please never let me do a fully cel-shaded comic again lol