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Post by Draco on Feb 8, 2003 23:52:23 GMT -5
This is just the beginning of my story, I have the rest done, but I just don't want to put the whole thing in To hear the rest you will just have to wait till its posted, if it ever gets posted This story is told by my pet Fira. He has many different adventures around Neopia. This is just one of many I will right. So here it is, I just wanted to add a little bit of info for all of you _______________________________ It started a while back before the war. I was sitting in front of my computer playing, Escape from Meridell Castle, and suddenly I got an idea. Is that blue draik Valrigard real? I called for my partner Gandalf, but he was with Draco at the Lab Ray. That meant that today I would set out alone. I heard that the dungeons of Meridell Castle were inescapable, so searched my computer for all known files of Meridell Castle, but they were all old and useless. I decided that I would just have to think about the dungeons later. I gathered my supplies, some small items, a forest cloak, and a sword of domar for defense. I put my gear on so I would look like a cloaked wanderer. I hid my sword so it was unnoticeable to anyone who passed by. I left a note for Gandalf that told him I was off on another mission, and after that I set out.
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Post by Draco on Feb 8, 2003 23:59:15 GMT -5
I've decided to add a little bit more of the story I just keep out the best part _____________________________________________ When I got to Meridell everyone was acting normal, potatoes being counted, berries being picked, petpets playing, and mortogs exploding. I walked up to the castle and entered. I snuck past many guards, and then I found a dirty old door. I checked it, but it was locked. I looked around to make sure no one was around, and I rushed the door. I hit the door with full power, and knocked it open. I entered the dark and dusty dungeons. I slowly made my way down the flights of stairs, and run into no guards. Just then I heard running, and before I knew it I ran into someone. I slowly placed my hand on my sword, and raised my head. What I saw was none other then Valrigard himself.
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Post by Lappi on Feb 9, 2003 9:00:53 GMT -5
Cool. You've got nice detail there.
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Post by Draco on Feb 9, 2003 16:33:27 GMT -5
Thanks, the rest which I didn't want to tell Is when Fira starts to talk with Valrigard, and some more stuff. I'm just thinking of rewriting things here and there, because when rereading I noticed a few mistakes. Than I will resend the story, and hopefully this time it will be posted....... After a older post I did, someone suggested that I should wait about 3 weeks before giveing up the wait, and resending. So thats up now Time to go rewrite.
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Post by Draco on Feb 9, 2003 16:37:05 GMT -5
I almost forgot, I need a new Title to The last one I didn't like that much. It was Firas Adventures: Search of the Rouge Draik To to add a little bit more detail on Fira, you can go to his webpage at, petpages.neopets.com/~FiraWolfneoThat goes to more detail about him, and a little bit more about his story, and the next one I'm trying to write
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Post by Draco on Feb 10, 2003 21:33:17 GMT -5
ok, from what you read, do you like the story? I was just woundering
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2003 13:12:26 GMT -5
its cool
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Post by Lappi on Feb 15, 2003 15:12:47 GMT -5
Oooo, special!
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