Read and Comment on This, Please...

[bludragn3]

I just completed my second story, Lost in the Blizzard. The story in its entirity can be found at the address below. You'll also get a little background about the story.

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. If you feel there's something that needs to be done, please say so. If you feel that the story should be trashed, so be it.

Have at it.

home.swbell.net/gatten/shtstr2.html

[bludragn3]

Since no one has felt like saying anything about the story, I have taken the liberty of submitting the story to the Neopian Times.

[pichuthegreat]

congratulations bluey it got in