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Post by Speck on Nov 2, 2010 3:51:05 GMT -5
"Dr. Bugston’s kitchen faces the backyard with a window full of half-dead plants."
I don't even have one page yet. Writing is going very slowly. Oh look, a bit of setting description that tells you about how well Dr. Bugston can take care of living things. That doesn't particularly bode well for him later on.
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Post by Zylaa on Nov 2, 2010 12:25:00 GMT -5
"He gets so affectionate when he’s drunk, thought Captain Starbell, with the sort of expert denial that only comes after ten years of practice."
I threw a random party on board the ship into the story. Because, hey, why not? =D
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Post by Deleted on Nov 2, 2010 12:27:01 GMT -5
"'David Broole is dead.'"
It's okay though; he was old.
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Post by Rikku on Nov 2, 2010 14:28:25 GMT -5
His sly smile. “Precisely.”
... I will leave you to wonder what that's about. =D
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Post by Tam on Nov 2, 2010 16:55:21 GMT -5
"Sam, are you not even capable of looking at your own wanted posters without ripping them down and thus breaking yet another law in the name of being dramatic?"
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Post by Ian Wolf-Park on Nov 2, 2010 17:02:40 GMT -5
“So basically, until we get the approval, we’re going to be sitting idle for the time being, right?”Jade inquired.
Ooh, wonder what this is all about?
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Post by PFA on Nov 2, 2010 17:05:05 GMT -5
Piet was going to be a knight someday, and nothing was going to stop him from that. Drilled this into our brains enough yet, Piet?  |
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Post by Jayeee on Nov 2, 2010 18:18:11 GMT -5
"It was then that he looked in front of him and laid eyes on the beast once more."
LE GASP!
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Post by PFA on Nov 2, 2010 20:24:10 GMT -5
King Martus did seem like the kind of king to keep his servants in good health, after all.
apparently piet is a patriot because he won't shut up about how great the andarian castle and the residents therein are
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 2, 2010 20:27:47 GMT -5
Lionel tapped his fingers on Augie’s chest, resisting the temptation to tap his friend’s nose or forehead for emphasis instead.
I refuse to 'ship the two of them. *refuse refuse refuse* It wouldn't make sense at all in any way.
...yet I then put scenes like this in for the sheer fun of it. xD
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Post by Kathleen on Nov 2, 2010 23:13:12 GMT -5
"He flips his tail to acknowledge my words, but doesn’t open his eyes or otherwise budge."
... it's the cat. I swear. xD
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 2, 2010 23:15:22 GMT -5
He’d ended up so scared that he’d killed himself rather than wait for the rat to finally take him.
...dude, do I ever post /normal/ lines here, really? xD Augie's past is a bit... creepy, to say the least. :3
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Post by Amneiger on Nov 2, 2010 23:17:11 GMT -5
"Kept patting me on the head and talking about how I’d look in a pink frilly dress with a cup of tea and a bunch of stuffed animals for company."
No context for you. =D
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Post by Stephanie (swordlilly) on Nov 3, 2010 0:38:05 GMT -5
"He listened to her, as always."
I really hope the stuff I'm writing isn't turning out too wishy-washy. =S
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Post by Butterfly on Nov 3, 2010 0:41:20 GMT -5
I wasn't curious enough to invade her privacy, even if it would have been quite simple to find out.
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