Puzz the Magnificent
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Post by Puzz the Magnificent on Oct 16, 2003 19:17:01 GMT -5
Here is the first paragraph. This is also the approximite size of what your paragraphs should be. (It doesn't have to be a paragraph, you can make line breaks.)
It was a dark and stormy night in downtown Neopia. Inside a house on Neopia's busiest street, there lived an Acara named Sadiyah and her Angelpuss, Cuddles.
"I wanna go outside," Cuddles said to Sadiyah.
"No," said Sadiyah. "It's a monsoon out there. You will get very wet."
"I REALLY wanna go outside!" said Cuddles, who had the urge to get out and splash in those puddles.
"Okay, fine," said Sadiyah. Cuddles walked out the door of the Neohome. As Sadiyah watched her Angelpuss walk away, Cuddles suddenly disappeared in a puf of smoke.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2003 17:06:15 GMT -5
....Sadiyah let out a scream of horror, and ran out into the rain, slipping in puddles and getting soaked to the bone. She looked around in disbelief, swatting at the air that Cuddles had disappeared into with dripping paws. Sadiyah finally gave up, and plopped down in the middle of a very large puddle with a sob. 'What happened? I don't understand...' Suddenly, her paw touched something soggy and smooth. Sadiyah lifted it up, and found a piece of note paper. Beginning to read, she found that written on the sodden paper was this hastily scrawled note....
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