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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2008 13:53:09 GMT -5
Lillia Ann Moore Lillia is a fifteen-year-old sophomore, sister to Vans, and the youngest of the perspective characters. She is a little more social than Vans, but she does consider her sister to be her only truly friend (apart from her teammates, that is). Lillia is more accepted by her classmates than Vans is, but the primary reason to that is because she is the only heterosexual in her family. Still, some classmates do shun her just for being the same blood as Vans and her two mothers.
Lillia is a big tomboy. Hardly ever does she try to make herself seem acceptable. She wears boyish clothes, will NEVER wear makeup other than eyeliner (which she has on every day), and she is a highly-talented guitarist of five years. But because she is very much like a boy on the outside, that doesn't mean she isn't a girl on the inside. Lillia has several moments during the story where she complains about not being pretty enough for anyone to like her, and even tries to change her image just for one boy.
Ever since seventh grade, Lillia has been harboring a heavy crush on Morgan Tailor, a boy in Vans's grade. Here's the problem: Lillia has a major confidence issue. She can't stick up for herself. She has a horrible body image. She can't speak her mind. She's very introverted, and very shy. For three years she would blow off a situation that could possibly put the two of them together, all because of her lack of confidence. At the beginning of her story, Vans and Lillia are talking about their love lives (Vans hasn't met Angie yet, and she's still dating Kev). Vans finally gives her sister enough advice that her spirits are lifted, and she decides that it's about time to tell her crush that she likes him. Lillia makes the perfect plan to tell him the next day, but everything goes horribly wrong when she sees Daisy Rodriquez with her crush.
Lillia doesn't know Daisy all that well, but she does know that she's a troublemaker and a horrible student... And a senior. Lillia is broken-hearted and decides that he probably wouldn't have even liked her back, anyway.
For the next few months, all she can think about is Daisy and Morgan, Daisy and Morgan. Half of the school year passes by, and Lillia is still in a funk. But things take a turn for the...better.
Lillia enters the bathroom one day, just thinking that she'll be peeing. But when she enters, she sees Daisy and her best friend sitting on the sinks and talking. They ignore her, and she continues on with her duties. Daisy starts talking again, something about having sex with someone. Lillia assumes that she's talking about Morgan, and gets even more discouraged. But then her friend says, "And this is Kevin, right?" Daisy answers yes. "But what about Morgan? I thought you really liked him?"
Daisy softly cackles. "Yeah, right. That kid is a cold fish, straight up. I can't get him to do anything with me, but Kevin wanted some action right away."
"So why are you still with Morgan?"
"Why was I with him in the first place? He hurt you really badly, and now I'm going to hurt him."
Lillia is horrified at what she hears, but she's afraid to say anything to her crush. The bell rings. School's over. Lillia and Morgan leave their class, and both walk into the biggest trap ever. Daisy and Kevin are making out a few feet next to the classroom that Morgan has just walked out of, and he's furious. He demands an explanation, and Daisy says that he kissed her first. Kevin protests that she's lying, and thus Daisy's plan backfires. Morgan believes his best friend over his girlfriend, and immediately calls the relationship off. Kevin thanks Morgan for believing in him, but he isn't very happy. He knows that Kevin knew that they were dating, and that he's just as wrong as Daisy was.
Morgan storms off, and Lillia chases after him. She says that she saw the whole thing, and she's really sorry for what happened. She isn't even thinking about her crush on him.
He's happy of her sympathy, but he really doesn't do anything more than thank her and run off. Still, she's on his radar.
Over the next week or so, Morgan talks to Lillia, he sits with her at lunch, and finally invites her over to his house.
Lillia, who is going insane because of her reality coming true, asks Morgan about Daisy's friend, and how he hurt her. He sighs and tells the story; she wanted to do thing that he just wasn't comfortable with, and immediately broke up with her because he knew that it wasn't going to stop. He tells Lillia that she probably twisted the story around so that she was the poor victim, and thus Daisy wanted revenge.
Morgan turns on his stereo and asks for Lillia's help. The Spring Fling dance is approaching fast, and he really doesn't know how to dance without making a fool out of himself. He says that he knows she's pretty rythmic, and wants her to help him. She does, and eventually they get down to slow dancing. Lillia's extremely nervous, and nearly stops dancing with him... Except that Morgan then kisses her. He admits that he's liked her for a while, but he wanted her to say something, first. And though she really didn't tell her feelings, she did admit her sympathy for him, which showed that she cared. And that's all that he really needed. Lillia hears gunshots, and she immediately starts to panic. While the rest of the class freaks out in the room, she makes a mad dash for Morgan's classroom to see if he's okay. When she arrives there, most of the class is dead; others are wounded and unconscious. Lillia screams, but when she looks twice, Morgan's seat is empty. Perhaps he's still alive, and she continues her search.
As she turns the corner, she sees Sarah coming out of a classroom with her hands in her jacket pockets. She asks Sarah if she knows what's going on, but Sarah just smiles. She asks if she's seen Morgan, but Sarah just keeps smiling.
"Looks like everything's come full circle," Sarah says. She takes her hands out of her pockets, and reveals that SHE is the one with the gun. She shoots at Lillia and runs away, not even looking to see if she had killed her.
Morgan had been in the bathroom when the shooting began. His classroom was the one right next to Sarah's, and that's when it all began. She was long gone by the time he returned, but once he saw what had happened, he immediately called the police and then also went to see if Lillia was okay.
When he came upon her, she was writhing in pain in the hallway. She had turned to run at just the right moment, and the bullet grazed the side of her cheek. He panicked and laid by her said, telling her that everything would be okay. Lillia opened her eyes and saw him over her, and that's when she said, "I love you." And he loves her, too.
She passes out from the pain, and where the bullet went past leaves a slight scar, but she survives. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2008 15:51:46 GMT -5
I dunno what to do right now. XD I came up with this really brilliant idea, but it's in the rough right now. Like, hardly developed at all. I want to write it really badly, but I don't have a lot of time to plan it. XD I think I'll just stick with what I have already for the time being.
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Post by Zylaa on Oct 15, 2008 11:37:05 GMT -5
What do you mean, you don't have a lot of time to plan it? You've got two weeks! XD *wants to hear your new idea*
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2008 15:40:26 GMT -5
What do you mean, you don't have a lot of time to plan it? You've got two weeks! XD *wants to hear your new idea* That's true, but I don't know if it would be substantial enough to be a NaNo. Well, since I have notes about it already, I'll share them with you: Okay, so this would be a futurefic. A disease is spreading quickly throughout the U.S., killing off people like flies. Our beloved president passes the law that those found to have this disease are to be locked away in a city of their own (for example, Trenton is evacuated and, using the technology of the future, is made into a playground for the sick). But the government has gone corrupt, and some that are locked away aren't sick after all. Seven girls have found out about the plot to kill the weak and leave the strong to thrive, and they're condemned to die in the cities. They successfully escape and their vendetta begins. They want revenge on this cursed world, and it isn't going to be pretty.
America, say hello to the Sins. I've always been obsessed with personifying the seven deadly sins according to my imagination. I've also always been in love with my interpretations of fairy tale characters. This is where they're combined.
Each of the seven girls in this story is based off a Disney heroines, and each of the seven girls has a problem that pertains to their own sin.
Snow White/Vanity/Adriana
Adriana's backstory is unknown as of right now. She is obsessed with her looks, and is always carrying a mirror on her. Usually talks to her reflection.
Meg (from Hercules)/Wrath/Megaera
Megaera's boyfriend was taken away from her wrongfully and locked up in the cities. She has the largest need for revenge out of all the girls.
Princess Jasmine (from Aladdin)/Greed/Jazz
Jazz has a love for gold and shiny things, and is a kleptomaniac. She puts her powers to good use, and is in charge of all heists and thefts. A bit on the twitchy side.
Princess Aurora (from Sleeping Beauty)/Sloth/Dawn
Dawn is addicted to sleeping pills. She's also very apathetic to most things, except for her need for revenge on the Government.
Ariel (from the Little Mermaid)/Envy/Arielle
Arielle is the heaviest of the gang, and envies her "friends" highly because of their skinniness and beauty. She especially envies Adriana.
Belle (from Beauty and the Beast)/Gluttony/Bella
Bella contradicts her name very muchly. Once a beauty, she is now a glutton for drugs and alcohol and on the edge of insanity. She's a big junkie, but she's very dangerous even when stable. She's second in command, supplying the gang with explosives and firearms.
Alice (from Alice in Wonderland)/Lust/Alice
Alice, being my favorite character and carrying my favorite sin, is the leader of the gang. While her sin does have a literal meaning behind it, it is more about her lust for power. She's also on the lookout for her boyfriend, who ran away from the cities. |
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Post by Zylaa on Oct 15, 2008 17:25:19 GMT -5
What do you mean, you don't have a lot of time to plan it? You've got two weeks! XD *wants to hear your new idea* That's true, but I don't know if it would be substantial enough to be a NaNo. Well, since I have notes about it already, I'll share them with you: Okay, so this would be a futurefic. A disease is spreading quickly throughout the U.S., killing off people like flies. Our beloved president passes the law that those found to have this disease are to be locked away in a city of their own (for example, Trenton is evacuated and, using the technology of the future, is made into a playground for the sick). But the government has gone corrupt, and some that are locked away aren't sick after all. Seven girls have found out about the plot to kill the weak and leave the strong to thrive, and they're condemned to die in the cities. They successfully escape and their vendetta begins. They want revenge on this cursed world, and it isn't going to be pretty.
America, say hello to the Sins. I've always been obsessed with personifying the seven deadly sins according to my imagination. I've also always been in love with my interpretations of fairy tale characters. This is where they're combined.
Each of the seven girls in this story is based off a Disney heroines, and each of the seven girls has a problem that pertains to their own sin.
Snow White/Vanity/Adriana
Adriana's backstory is unknown as of right now. She is obsessed with her looks, and is always carrying a mirror on her. Usually talks to her reflection.
Meg (from Hercules)/Wrath/Megaera
Megaera's boyfriend was taken away from her wrongfully and locked up in the cities. She has the largest need for revenge out of all the girls.
Princess Jasmine (from Aladdin)/Greed/Jazz
Jazz has a love for gold and shiny things, and is a kleptomaniac. She puts her powers to good use, and is in charge of all heists and thefts. A bit on the twitchy side.
Princess Aurora (from Sleeping Beauty)/Sloth/Dawn
Dawn is addicted to sleeping pills. She's also very apathetic to most things, except for her need for revenge on the Government.
Ariel (from the Little Mermaid)/Envy/Arielle
Arielle is the heaviest of the gang, and envies her "friends" highly because of their skinniness and beauty. She especially envies Adriana.
Belle (from Beauty and the Beast)/Gluttony/Bella
Bella contradicts her name very muchly. Once a beauty, she is now a glutton for drugs and alcohol and on the edge of insanity. She's a big junkie, but she's very dangerous even when stable. She's second in command, supplying the gang with explosives and firearms.
Alice (from Alice in Wonderland)/Lust/Alice
Alice, being my favorite character and carrying my favorite sin, is the leader of the gang. While her sin does have a literal meaning behind it, it is more about her lust for power. She's also on the lookout for her boyfriend, who ran away from the cities. =D FUN. I love it-- as I've said before, I love dystopias and overthrowing the corruption and such. And I love Disney, and I have been trying for the past two weeks to remember what all the seven deadly sins are, and I kept forgetting Vanity. XD Thanks! |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2008 19:43:43 GMT -5
That's true, but I don't know if it would be substantial enough to be a NaNo. Well, since I have notes about it already, I'll share them with you: Okay, so this would be a futurefic. A disease is spreading quickly throughout the U.S., killing off people like flies. Our beloved president passes the law that those found to have this disease are to be locked away in a city of their own (for example, Trenton is evacuated and, using the technology of the future, is made into a playground for the sick). But the government has gone corrupt, and some that are locked away aren't sick after all. Seven girls have found out about the plot to kill the weak and leave the strong to thrive, and they're condemned to die in the cities. They successfully escape and their vendetta begins. They want revenge on this cursed world, and it isn't going to be pretty.
America, say hello to the Sins. I've always been obsessed with personifying the seven deadly sins according to my imagination. I've also always been in love with my interpretations of fairy tale characters. This is where they're combined.
Each of the seven girls in this story is based off a Disney heroines, and each of the seven girls has a problem that pertains to their own sin.
Snow White/Vanity/Adriana
Adriana's backstory is unknown as of right now. She is obsessed with her looks, and is always carrying a mirror on her. Usually talks to her reflection.
Meg (from Hercules)/Wrath/Megaera
Megaera's boyfriend was taken away from her wrongfully and locked up in the cities. She has the largest need for revenge out of all the girls.
Princess Jasmine (from Aladdin)/Greed/Jazz
Jazz has a love for gold and shiny things, and is a kleptomaniac. She puts her powers to good use, and is in charge of all heists and thefts. A bit on the twitchy side.
Princess Aurora (from Sleeping Beauty)/Sloth/Dawn
Dawn is addicted to sleeping pills. She's also very apathetic to most things, except for her need for revenge on the Government.
Ariel (from the Little Mermaid)/Envy/Arielle
Arielle is the heaviest of the gang, and envies her "friends" highly because of their skinniness and beauty. She especially envies Adriana.
Belle (from Beauty and the Beast)/Gluttony/Bella
Bella contradicts her name very muchly. Once a beauty, she is now a glutton for drugs and alcohol and on the edge of insanity. She's a big junkie, but she's very dangerous even when stable. She's second in command, supplying the gang with explosives and firearms.
Alice (from Alice in Wonderland)/Lust/Alice
Alice, being my favorite character and carrying my favorite sin, is the leader of the gang. While her sin does have a literal meaning behind it, it is more about her lust for power. She's also on the lookout for her boyfriend, who ran away from the cities. =D FUN. I love it-- as I've said before, I love dystopias and overthrowing the corruption and such. And I love Disney, and I have been trying for the past two weeks to remember what all the seven deadly sins are, and I kept forgetting Vanity. XD Thanks! Actually, Vanity isn't really supposed to be a sin. It's actually Pride, but I think Vanity is way much more cooler than Pride. XD |
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Post by Zylaa on Oct 15, 2008 22:57:44 GMT -5
=D FUN. I love it-- as I've said before, I love dystopias and overthrowing the corruption and such. And I love Disney, and I have been trying for the past two weeks to remember what all the seven deadly sins are, and I kept forgetting Vanity. XD Thanks! Actually, Vanity isn't really supposed to be a sin. It's actually Pride, but I think Vanity is way much more cooler than Pride. XD XD Yes, that confused me, because later on in the day I was reciting the seven deadly sins and came up with eight. Shame, Sammy! (I was actually forgetting Envy). |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 16, 2008 15:18:00 GMT -5
Actually, Vanity isn't really supposed to be a sin. It's actually Pride, but I think Vanity is way much more cooler than Pride. XD XD Yes, that confused me, because later on in the day I was reciting the seven deadly sins and came up with eight. Shame, Sammy! (I was actually forgetting Envy). Hehehe... Alright. So, since I don't have the motivation to entirely sketch this plot out, nor the time, I'm deciding to stick with my original idea. This'll either be saved for NaNoWriSu, or just for my own enjoyment. 8D |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 29, 2008 20:09:35 GMT -5
Sarah can hardly take it anymore. Kevin has gone way too far with her, and it all has turned into rape and abuse. She blames Vans first, for recognizing what he was after and breaking up with him (which, in the end, made him turn to Sarah), but then she also adds in Lillia for messing with Daisy's plan and making Kevin single and craving for more, along with his ego severely bruised.
Finally, she snaps.
She comes in late to school one day, wearing an extremely baggy hoodie sweatshirt. Her hands are in her pockets, and she enters the classroom she'd have Physics in. Kevin is in that classroom, but Lillia and Vans aren't. She figures that Kevin might as well pay for what he had done, and opens fire at the classroom with the pistol concealed in her pockets. Kevin is the first dead, along with the teacher and two other students who had always tinkled her off. Morgan was lucky as hell; he probably would have been dead, too, if he hadn't asked to go to the bathroom just minutes before the fiasco.
Deciding that she needs to buy time, she rushes to the main office and kills all the staff members there. No one to stop her now, but she knew that she didn't have the Police on her just yet. Finally she stumbles upon Lillia, who was searching for Morgan. Sarah shoots once, and assumes that she's killed her. She runs off, and classrooms who have heard the gunshots are thrown into panic. She tries to blend in with the crowd and goes on the hunt for Vans.
Eventually she finds not only her, but Angie as well in a vacant hallway. Now is her chance. She raises the gun, ready to fire...
But then she hears sirens. Too late.
Sarah shoots herself in the head. It's all over, but both Vans and Angie are left scarred by the image that was implanted in their minds. Perhaps that was even worse than death itself.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 2, 2008 16:47:02 GMT -5
Guess what time it is. EXCERPT TIEM. Robin turned around to face her friend, arms folded across her chest. “So,” she said, “what’s up with this newbie?”
“You mean Sarah?” Vans asked.
“I would assume so. I haven’t heard much about her, but I’ve seen her around with us for the past month.”
“Well, you know how Katie needed a new team member badly, after Mikey took that spill? Well, Sarah and her family moved here this summer. They live in the apartment just below Katie, so she took her aboard.”
“Interesting,” Robin said. “I heard she’s quite the rebel.”
“Yeah,” Vans said. “Her family is conservative, straight up. Her daddy works for Wall Street, supposedly, so they’re loaded. But Sarah is just as much of a prude as Eris is.”
Robin laughed. “Oh, man, that’s harsh.”
“It’s true!” Vans cried, adding to the laughter. “The funny part is, she told me she has this twin sister who is the golden child. I can’t wait to see this.”
“Why’s that?”
“I dunno. It’s sort of ironic. Yin, Yang, all that crap. I’unno.”
“Two Mocha Frappuccinos!”
Robin turned back around and grabbed the cup that had no whipped cream in it. As Vans reached over to grab hers, she laid a twenty on the counter.
“I got ya’, Birdie,” she said when Robin looked at her quizzically. “Don’t worry about it.”
“Thanks,” Robin said.
Mama, we all go to hell...
Vans grabbed her pants's pocket. “It’s Lex,” she said in reply to the My Chemical Romance song that was playing. “Grab the change.”
“Right,” Robin said, snatching up the leftover money from the Starbucks employee. “Thanks,” she added, and followed after her friend.
“Yeah,” Vans muttered. “Yeah, I’m with her. No, coffee. Starbucks. lousy’ stupid, man… Then tell her to calm the hell down! Jesus! Yes, we’re on our way. Okay, bye.” She bitterly shoved the Voyager back into her pocket. “She’s so stupid…”
“Eris yelling for us?” Robin asked.
“She’s so ridiculous!” Vans said, kicking the door open and letting Robin go by first. “We’re just across the street, and she’s getting all worked up. Really, from the time she sent her text, we still have three minutes to get over there.”
“Don’t aggravate her,” Robin sighed. “It’s not worth the trouble.” Only a few steps into the store, an obnoxiously loud cackle reached Robin’s ears, and then the words, “Well, if it isn’t about ****ing time!”
There was a rush of colors and loud noises that caught her eye, and thank God that she turned to look at what was going on. The hockey stick struck the floor, just missing Robin’s head from overhead by a hair. She couldn’t remember exactly what happened because of how quickly it happened, but she was pretty sure she screamed.
More laughter as she tried to come to her senses. She was nearly killed by a hockey stick… A very familiar hockey stick. It was decorated very nicely. The handle was bound by bright colors: yellow, light blue, neon green, not to mention the beautifully clashing glow-in-the-dark, and the black duct tape that topped it off with a bow.
Oh. It was the key. Eris had tried to kill her with the key.
She was definitely having a hangover.
“Jesus Christ, Eris!” a deepened male voice cried. “Calm down!” There was a struggle, and the owner of the voice successfully wrestled the hockey stick out of Eris’s hands. It sounded like it was Lex, but Robin couldn’t entirely be sure. She was still in a near-catatonic stupor.
She rubbed her eyes, and finally the world stopped spinning. She looked up at the crowd around her; her familiar friends, along with some curious passersby.
“I’m guessing I’m alive,” she muttered.
“Just barely,” Vans said. She held out a hand and helped Robin up off the floor.
“You’re lucky you jumped,” a brown-haired teenager said. Lillia Moore. Vans’s sister, and a sophomore. Just like her.
“Gerroffme!” Eris cried. Robin glanced over at her and saw the struggle continue; Meg was fighting with her. Wrists were being grabbed, faces were being smacked, and fists were flying.
“Are you ****ing mad?” Meg screamed, pushing her best friend down to the ground. “You nearly killed her!”
“She was late!” Eris protested, though she stayed on the ground. “Her and Vans!”
“You’re insane,” Meg cried. “I swear to God, if you ever have another drink again, you’re going to die! If my parents hear what happened, they’re going to ****ing disown you. And they don’t even own you in the first place!”
“Calm down, both of you,” Lex growled, cutting in between both of them. “Set an example, for the younger ones.” He nodded in the direction of Karissa, Drew, and Candira; the three freshmen on the team.
“Fine,” Eris grunted. Lex grabbed her arm and forced her onto her feet. “But tell that little ****er over there to not be late next time.”
“What’s the big deal?” Vans asked. “If anything, she was on time.”
“Listen, you,” Eris said, pushing past Lex and Meg and approaching the back-talker. “We’re a team, here. If one of us is late, we’re all late. They have an advantage over us, now. We have less time to think.”
Vans snorted a laugh. “That’s a good one. Like you could even think in the first place, with the way you are right now.”
Before anything drastic could happen, Meg grabbed Eris’s arms and pulled her backwards. “Swallow your pride,” she said to Vans with Eris struggled in her arms.
“The entire team is falling apart,” Karissa muttered to Candira, “just because she gets drunk.”
“All of you,” Lex said sternly, “just calm down. Forget about what just happened. Who’s got the key?”
Lillia waved it in the air, showing off its clashing colors and decorations. I'm enjoying that last scene a lot. XD |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 2, 2008 22:03:57 GMT -5
Alright. I've got 4320 for my wordcount at the end of day two. 8D Exciting!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 5, 2008 18:57:28 GMT -5
Guess what I just had fun with? MAKING MEEZES. 8D Fun. I shall share them.  Her hair is more like how you see it in the Sims2 pictures (first page), but with things like this you have limitations. I love her shirt. XD  The hair is much more like the drawing I did (see above), but once again, you have to work around the limitations.  Eh. Not all that impressive. XD  This is Angela, at the very beginning of the novel. She's modeled very heavily off of my friends Sarah and Audrey. XD  And this is Angie more towards the end. Vans definitely brings out her wild side.  The hair is exactly how I picture her hair. Omg. That made me so happy. Whore.  Another whore. I'm glad she dies. WHOOPS SPOILER. XD  OMG. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE. IT'S DEFINITELY MY FAVORITE. The hair, the outfit, the position... It's absolutely perfect! I'm quite proud of this'un. My favorite, deff. Unfortunately, I couldn't get Meg or Robin done (since I'm just about to leave for somewhere). So hopefully tomorrow or something I'll finish those two and then work on the guys. 8D FUN. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 8, 2008 14:36:18 GMT -5
So I'm planning on putting several allusions and references to Death Note in the shooting, along with this song called Zetsubou Billy by Maximum the Hormone that I'm ADDICTED to. 8D It makes me very happy. Well, anyway, here are my plans. In the song Zetsubou Billy, the drummer -- the only female in the group -- has a solo verse part. She sings it all soft and sweet and stuff like that, and then she goes into the fast screamy part with another person in the band. It reminded me so much of Sarah. akairo steamy dunga hakai no uta
owaranai no?
itsu kara hanbun NOIZU?
yo no naka ni hisomi rakka steamy dunga "are" wa nee ka?
dare ga kakikaeru sekai no kegare wa?
shoumetsu no rensa ni zawatsuku gekai
MASUTAA massatsu unmei no jibaku Well, in English, it is: Crimson-colored song of destruction
Won't it end?
How long has it been half noise?
Have ya got "that" which lies dormant within society?
Who can overwrite it, the filth of the world?
The earth astir from a chain of annihilation
Master, obliteration, fated self-destruction Absolute perfection. Fits Sarah to a T. So I'm planning on scattering these lyrics throughout this part. Also. Throughout the story, Angie and Vans will notice things that are attributed with Death Note. E.G., they'll notice the word shinigami written over and over again in Sarah's notebooks, along with peoples names (Kevin, Caroline, Vans, Angie, people she doesn't like) and very interesting situations. Of course, this is mainly for my amusement. XD Because Death Note is just so amazing. The icing on the cake is that when Lillia finds Sarah, she calls out her name, but Sarah says that she is Kira. ISN'T THIS JUST SO MUCH FUN?! |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2008 18:21:34 GMT -5
I think I'll be cutting Eris's story from the NaNo.  Unfortunately, I fell really behind and I don't think I have enough time to add in her part as well as the other three, with Robin's transitions as well. And, sadly, her story the least planned. D: So I think it'll just be Rae, Lillia, and Vans as perspective characters for right now. Maybe in the future I'll add Eris back in. |
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Unfortunately, I fell really behind and I don't think I have enough time to add in her part as well as the other three, with Robin's transitions as well.