Your Last Sentence!

[Celestial]

The necklace had split in two which was followed by the rest of the angel.

Don't worry, it was made of wood. xDD

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And he just stared at her, awestruck at her beauty.

D'aww. Justin... x3

[Tiger]

But he’d been wrong- he’d let Tori in too close, and now, if it wasn’t too late, he’d have to distance himself from her, back off into the corner of solitude once more.

And this time, he would stay there. It was where people like him belonged.

=( Poor Dimitri...

[Omni]

"Let's get going."

I'm getting a little tired of hawing phrases like that at the end of chapters. At least it shouldn't be much longer before I can break away from the repetition.

[PFA]

“Um, maybe it’s just my opinion...” Aryola spoke up, “...but I have the feeling this isn’t exactly a residential city.”

The brightly colored shop buildings are a pretty good indication.

[Tiger]

Dimitri turned away, and with his head down and shoulders hunched, walked away, vanishing into the rain as if he were made only of fragile ink, twisted into the shapes of the letters of every fairy tale about shape-shifters and people who could turn into cats, and people with green eyes and horrible, impossible secrets.

...Bit of ego-stoking here, but I really, really love that sentence =) But poor Dimitri.

[♥ Rain]

“I’ve already told you I like those.”

I learn new things about my characters every day. Apparently Haley likes cracks on sidewalks. And its all her parents' fault.

[Abra]

“L’chaim,” he whispered teasingly and clinked his glass into hers before downing it.

Had to go back a little bit and add in some possibly important dialogue. x)

[Zylaa]

With that, Death left the study via the large black door, into the antechamber, where, Marati guessed, another soul must have arrived. Probably a more cooperative one.

... And yeah, it's two sentences, but the last one is so boring on its own. XD

[seiyaryu]

“You flew too low! I could hear trees scraping the bottom! And you almost crashed into that building! And you broke President Roosevelt’s nose!”

This isn't one sentence at all! But oh well.

I bet you're all interested in the context of this quote now.

[Celestial]

She was a ruthless leader with no remorse.

Protagonist goes Captain Obvious on Antagonist.

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I don't.

Nice and long, eh? xDD

[Dice]

"Hell is empty, and all the devils are here," Salvador said, and pushed the speed up three notches.

Ah, the quote that describes my novel's world xD

[Tiger]

Tori wanted to believe him…not because she wanted werecats to exist, or for him to be one, but because he could be such a great friend otherwise.

This is the part of fantasy writing I hate; all the time you have to spend protraying the characters realistically reacting and adjusting to their new knowledge T_T

[Rikku]

“Peachy,” Scott muttered.

Peachy!