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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2003 12:07:26 GMT -5
I need an ending for my series...Although I've barely started writing, I like to get a story outline done early. That's the way I am. My story's a twist on the whole Sloth-Destroy-World plot: The Chia Polive find Sloth's lair, and try to capture him. Sloth barely escapes, and the only place in sight is the neohome of quite possibly the most shallow neopets around: Ajennsis and Junivelle. Ajenn and Juni have previously foiled Sloth's plan (I'm going to do a prequal about that after I write this one, IF it gets in, which is doubtful  ) and so Ajenn and Juni are less than afraid when he comes to their house. He begs for help, but they refuse him. All Ajenn and Juni want in life is to be on MTV, have a really famous band, go on TRL, etc. So, Sloth has to form his own band in order to gain Ajenn and Juni's help. When they finally agree to help him (Only if he lets them join his band) they start plotting how to get him back to his lair. How should the end be? Where should Sloth go? Should the good(?) guys win? HELP! |
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Post by hippiesoul on Jan 3, 2003 10:44:41 GMT -5
This has nothing to do with your story, but your biggest dream is to go on TRL?  Oh gosh... |
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Post by hippiesoul on Jan 3, 2003 10:45:30 GMT -5
Now back to the story, I think the good guys should lose. Honestly, I like when evil wins. =)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2003 12:12:44 GMT -5
But who qualifies as the good guys? Are Ajenn and Juni good, because they're being helpful, or are they bad, for helping a bad guy? And going on TRL is their biggest dream, not mine. These pets are meant to be shallow. My purpose in life is to annoy idiots.  |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Jan 3, 2003 16:27:48 GMT -5
IF your purpose in life is to annoy idiots, then I will gladly help you.
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Post by Tdyans on Jan 3, 2003 20:04:53 GMT -5
But do Neopets know about MTV and TRL? I mean, those are Earth things... maybe you could come up with a Neopian equivalent?
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Jan 3, 2003 21:40:43 GMT -5
But do Neopets know about MTV and TRL? I mean, those are Earth things... maybe you could come up with a Neopian equivalent? NTAG has beyond the music... |
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Post by Tdyans on Jan 3, 2003 23:46:18 GMT -5
NTAG has beyond the music... Which is not the same as Behind the Music. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2003 10:18:18 GMT -5
Aaaahhhhh...but what should happpen, though? I mean, should Sloth get back to his lair, or be arrested? Should Ajenn and Juni stay on stage as a band, or should they go back to home? What's gonna happppppeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnnnn??? (Wow, I bet you never thought you'd see an author asking readers what was gonig to happen ) |
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Post by wingoffire on Jan 4, 2003 10:32:57 GMT -5
Hey! Junivelle's my pet! I think you should make Sloth's band called Sloth Sync, that would be cute. Then, Ajenn can....fall in love with Sloth?!
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Post by L on Jan 4, 2003 11:31:09 GMT -5
Sloth could write songs about how good it is to be bad, and get a big cult following, and suddenly become popular in Neopia as a cultural icon instead of a mental green dictator.
All the fame and success makes him lazy and bossy, and he just basically orders the two pets around and pushes them out of the spotlight.
It gets on their nerves so much that -they- hatch an insane plot to try and take over Neopia, so that they can pin it on Sloth and everyone will hate him again and we'll go back to the natural order of things.
Sloth gets framed, and crawls back to his status as a bad guy- but he's sort of got the 'washed up star' thing going for him for a while (think old bloated Elvis before he died).
Story ends with the pets watching him on some Neopian Show that's the equivilant of Celeberty Death Match (Celeberty Battledome?) - Sloth vs Long John Kiko! They click off the tv in disgust, muttering "What a loser!"
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Post by Lappi on Jan 4, 2003 18:04:02 GMT -5
But do Neopets know about MTV and TRL? I mean, those are Earth things... maybe you could come up with a Neopian equivalent? Yes... what are those? MTV = Mad TV? o.O TRL... err... trusted, rusted, lusted!! Bwahahah..err... okie... Anyways, I think in the end Sloth should just go back in his layer and gets mad at those two or something... err... he could... uhh... like things return to normal. Like nothing happened. You can't really pretend you're a big hero, can you? |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2003 12:32:47 GMT -5
I really like your idea, Shidi! ;D
Wingoffire, you did HELP me write the series, after all, I would THINK that you had enough sense not to post what I already knew about Sloth Sync...And ahhhh!!! I don't know if AJennsis should fall in love with Sloth...I'm not really into the whole 'soap opera' thing...But I dunno.
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Jan 12, 2003 11:02:03 GMT -5
I really like your idea, Shidi! ;D Wingoffire, you did HELP me write the series, after all, I would THINK that you had enough sense not to post what I already knew about Sloth Sync...And ahhhh!!! I don't know if AJennsis should fall in love with Sloth...I'm not really into the whole 'soap opera' thing...But I dunno. No... please I think i'd be scared if anyone fell in love with sloth... He's like the Grinch's cousin from Texas! |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2003 14:18:38 GMT -5
Hehehe...Yeah, now that I think about it, he really IS like the grinch, now isn't he?
I don't get the whole 'Texas' bit, but...Oh well.
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) and so Ajenn and Juni are less than afraid when he comes to their house. He begs for help, but they refuse him. All Ajenn and Juni want in life is to be on MTV, have a really famous band, go on TRL, etc. So, Sloth has to form his own band in order to gain Ajenn and Juni's help. When they finally agree to help him (Only if he lets them join his band) they start plotting how to get him back to his lair.
Oh gosh... 
