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Post by aerisangel01 on Oct 3, 2006 16:33:49 GMT -5
Inspired by Pam who was inspired by Lulu who was inspired by Mlle. Doofus x3 Me and Scar MAY do something together for NaNoWriMo(even if it's not sure at all right now), so I added him in the title. If we do, we'll write different stories, however linked to each other. Here is the story I have so far ^^ Hurray for quotes, and I'll likely put more things later. I do have a small idea right now, inspired by Buffy the Vampire Slayer. No idea if I'll use it xD The world where it happen is not too different from our... or at least it was. Magic was thought to be nothing more than a myth, as were ghost and monsters. Technology ruled supreme, in the absence of magic which had been destroyed long ago, in many Witch's hunt during their Middle Age. Until, one day, demons and vampires seemingly appeared from nowhere, crushing human civilisations, leaving them to terror when night came... Many, many years later, a human is raped by a demon. When the other humans around her notice she is pregnant from the demon, they kill her, removing her fetus, and tossing it into a lake. Except such a being, half Human half Demon, is exactly what some humans are searching for. Having managed to get the body out of the water, and started experimenting... The body was dead, but using the help of (mostly evils) entities from other worlds, painfully contacted using some of the VERY few humans having magical powers, they managed to bring it back to life. First, a soullest body, but using more magical assistance, they manage to create a brand new being using the body as a base. The most notable help they got was from Déliana(those who read my story will know about her(Gave a Domino Potion)), and a Demon Lord(Gave essence from the Sun). All have their reason for helping. To quote what's in my brain: "I love suffering, I love to see tears and blood. This world is FULL of it... So why did I help create you? It's easy. I did it for fun. YOU are going to give hope to these peoples, defeating their opressors, one by one, you will make them believe the possibility of a better life... But you know what? You are one. One, sole, talented individual... against thousands of doubly talented individuals. You are bound to fail. You are bound to die, crushing their hope, their dreams, bringing them pain a thousand time worst than the one they had before. And bringing ME pleasure in seeing them suffering so much." -Déliana The story begin as a girl is walking, alone, in the night. She is attacked by a vampire. Scared, she tries running away, but is eventually cornered. When she stretch her arm in a vain attemps to protect herself, she unwillingly create a ball of light that, to her surprise, kill the vampire; it doesn't take her too long to realise the ball she is holding in her hand, is nothing less than a small sun. The story then start again, several month later, showing her life; How she cannot be accepted by humans(who seemingly see her as nothing more than a slave meant to serve them all), nor the Demons(who see her as a dangerous animal that must be destroyed), how she discover what exactly she is(having no real memory prior to the original attack), and much more(Including her meeting Déliana, who'll actually play a fairly important role). Yes, I'm an imagination factory. I come up with stories on a close-to-daily basis xD |
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Post by aerisangel01 on Oct 3, 2006 17:13:32 GMT -5
Did some calculation, if I want to succesfully end NaNoWriMo...
Chapter Lenght : 25 / 35 pages each
Approximate Number of Chapter : 7 / 5
Words per chapter : ± 7,142 / 10,000
Words to write per day : 1,666
Time to write one Chapter : 4 / 6 days
...can anyone say "Nerds"? =D
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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2006 17:24:24 GMT -5
I'm going to aim for at least 1000 a day, working on the theory that if I'm inspired I may write more... I hope! I like your idea - I'd really like to read it when you finish it  |
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Post by aerisangel01 on Oct 3, 2006 18:11:43 GMT -5
I'm going to aim for at least 1000 a day, working on the theory that if I'm inspired I may write more... I hope! I like your idea - I'd really like to read it when you finish it Good luck with it! I'm going to try and write as many words as I can, with hope that I don't procrastinate too much xD I'm going to try and publish it if I manage to finish it(thust why I'll write it per chapters), but I'm likely going to show it to people here ^^ ALSO, everyone, I need some help naming a character, I have three choices so far: Hersenschim - Schimäre - Quimera So far, Hersenschim and Quimera are the favorites to those I asked, even if I'm partial to Schimäre myself. |
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Post by Rider on Oct 4, 2006 16:39:32 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]I aim for 2000 per day, on the grounds that I shall be lazy.
I too am partial to Schimäre, because the first makes my throat hurt just looking at it and the third just looks awkward, with a Q and all...[/glow]
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Post by aerisangel01 on Oct 4, 2006 20:34:24 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]I aim for 2000 per day, on the grounds that I shall be lazy. I too am partial to Schimäre, because the first makes my throat hurt just looking at it and the third just looks awkward, with a Q and all...[/glow] Hu said "Quimera" reminded her of Quiggle xD Also, I did a list of the races there will be in my story, with descriptions =3 While in the end it'll be a bit different(subspecie of Demons, Werewolf, etc), it kinda run around that ^^ And no, these aren't the same, stereopical Monsters you're all used to =p Races: Demons - Being of Chaos, not every demons are bad. But the vast majority are, the good one being killed extremely fast, and no good demons are know to be present in this world. As a whole more powerful than Vampires, demons don’t nearly desire to kill humans as much as dominating them, with whatever it means. Many humans will in fact go to Demons for them to be protected from Vampires, but, according to many, life under the rule of Demons is even worst than life fearing Vampires. Althought they are weakened during the day, it is not drastric and the sun does not kill them. They are however afraid of calm water. Holy items affect only some Demons(the bad one). Zombies - Merely puppets, shell controled by Demons, Zombies have no will, no nothing. If you cut the magical threads linking them to the demons, they’ll simply fall back as the corpse they are... Unaffected by day, night, or the sun as a whole. Vampires - Main threat for humans. Unlike what is frequently believed, Vampire are as alive as every other humans. They have a beating heart, and breathes, even if to an extremely weak level compared to humans(one beating per minute on average). But almost everything that affect human has no effect on them - Sickness, poison, or even chocking. These CAN occasionally cause them to faint and/or seemingly die, but they’ll come back to life, as if nothing had ever happened. They also claim to also have a soul, but this is debated. Day has a different effect on different vampires, depending on their bloodline; some are killed by sunlight, other not. All are however greatly weakened by it. Sure way to kill them is stabbing them(Heart or Head/Brain), beheading them, burning them alive, and, in some case, sunlight. Holy items only affect some Vampires(the bad one). NOTE: These Vampires DO, indeed, drink blood. Blame Scar for making me need to add this note xD Werewolf aka Vampire Wolf - Nobody is sure if these are humans or animals. Incredibly loyal to their (demonic) master, “Vampire Wolves” don’t really care about humans, prefering to hunt Animals to feed themselves, however hunting no more than what they need. The Sun or the moon, have, actually, absolutely no effect on them, nor does silver. A simple bite or scratch by them will NOT turn one into a Werewolf, making one wonder how exactly they were created and how they can create more of they breathen. It is known they can turn into humans, but are rarely seen as such, therefore nobody know how to differenciate Were from REAL Humans. Many outsider see them as the most “Noble” race to actually exist in this world. NOTE: They aren’t the only good race of this planet. If their master ask them to kill humans or anything, they will without any hesitation. The most accurate description for them would be exceptionally loyal and intelligents pets. Again, blame Scar x3 Humans - Completely lacking magic due to them having destroyed it long ago, which in turn allowed evil demons to invade the world without any resistance, the rare few who actually possess it are, surprisingly enough, loathed and often killed. Described by Déliana as a specie that suffer from a major, “Collective ego trip, believing themselves to be the greatest, only beings capables of feelings, thinking, and creating act of beauty(aka art) in the whole universe and despite them having knowledge of other intelligent life form.” Which, in her opinion, make them worthy only of being spat on and tortured. NOTE: Humans DO have good points, which will be shown in the story. But the majority is, more than often and even here, jerk. Scar. Need I say more? x3 Animals / Plants - Animals and plants aren’t left alone by the Demons, vampire and others. The ground and water is poluted by them, forest burned, the animal killed, partly by werewolves, but mainly by desesperate humans, killing more animal for food than they actually need. Many animals, however, are mostly unaffected, such as lions, being capable, even more than humans, to protect themselves from Demons. Some of these “Protectors” animals also have seemingly formed community simillar to that of many Demons, protecting the weakest animals... So long as they can kill some once in a while to feed themselves. Other - Even if they cannot reach them(or at least not without MUCH difficulty), the people in this world are VERY aware of the existance of other worlds, with many other races, which they anyway dub as “inferior” and “Worthy only of destruction”, making them no better than the Demons attacking them, and explaining why the other species of different worlds make NO attempt to defend them at all. |
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Post by Scar on Oct 5, 2006 2:20:06 GMT -5
All those little notes are gonna bury me some day XD
And looks like someone's given a lot of thought to this. Statistics! ^_^
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Post by aerisangel01 on Oct 5, 2006 20:19:18 GMT -5
All those little notes are gonna bury me some day XD And looks like someone's given a lot of thought to this. Statistics! ^_^ Oh, because they didn't already? And you should know that I LOVE calculating stuff x3 You should've seen some of the calculations I did on Subeta... *COUGH* And OMG CHARACTER =D I won't put their story since there are many spoilers in it, and I'm not sure I'll give you all spoilers yet x3 Name: Hersenschim - Schimäre - Quimera(Still have to choose) Nickname: Miss Halfling(Zevi) Age: None(appear 18) Specie: Half Unknown Demon/Half Human(Base), many Magical “races” About: Heavilly confused describe her well. She doesn’t understand much, especially about herself. She knows she is different from Humans and Demons, but not exactly how and especially not WHY. She doesn’t understand where she comes from, having no memory prior to walking in a alley and being attacked by a Vampire, killing him by creating a small sun in her hands. She doesn’t understand where her powers come from, especially some as strong as hers are, and most importantly, she doesn’t understand WHY she cannot be accepted, neither by the demons whom she share the power of, nor by humans whom she protect. She feels drawn to doing good by protecting them since they are powerless, but she doubt it is worth anything due to the way most treat her. More than anything, she is searching for reasons to do what she wants to do, people to help her when in danger, and maybe, reasons for her to be... Name: Zevì Nickname: Vì Age: 12 (Appear 6 at first) Specie: Werewolf About: Zevì is, above all else, extremely loyal. While Weres more than often have an image of mindless animals who only follow their master’s order, Zevì is the proof that this idea is false; he has a strong moral sense, shared by Schimäre*, which explain his attraction and loyalty to her. He would fight to the end to destroy anything going against what he view as just. As a Shaman Were who managed to become a real were, inhabited by the spirit of a real wolf, he is actually one of the most powerful Werewolf currently in existance. Depiste what he lived during his childhood, Zevì is probably much stronger mentally than Schimäre*. Name: Déliana Nickname: Del Age: ??? Specie: ---- OMG CURRENT STORY SPOILERS!!! Not telling x3 About: According to Zevì, Déliana is as heartless as a Chainsaw and as dangerous as one, which is actually a fairly good description. She has no remorse in murdering, raping, torturing, even if she tries as much as possible to do that on the bad guys, otherwise “My friend won’t be happy at all”. As long as she is concerned, however, good or bad makes no difference, all would deserve nothing more than being destroyed. Even if she DOES do good deeds, it is never for the greater good, but rather because they fit her own, secret agenda. Still, most came to the conclusion that she *can* be trusted, at least to some extend. *Schimäre was used to name her in the others text for now, even if I didn't yet decide what her official name will be |
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Post by aerisangel01 on Nov 3, 2006 23:45:36 GMT -5
Work is leaving me VERY tired, still I wrote a (very short) prologue for fun. Have fun reading! x3
(NOTE: This prologue is likely full of various errors due to me being too dang tired to correct them. Thanky G'night =p )
Everything’s so dark, so empty… My mind isn’t yet open, that already I know how miserable everything will be…
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He grimaced as he forced himself to feed of a rat, so, oh so disgusting... Where was it gone, the wonderful time where his pray would wander around innocently, and he’d only have to pick up one, like he was at a giant... How was it the old one called it? Buffets? Throwing the corpse of the rat away, intact except for the skin of it’s neck being ripped, and a trace most here would be able to identifie, he saw his own arm. Frail, underfed, it was easy to tell this much, simply from his arm.. A shame for his own kind, of which there were, according to him, too many. A very unhealthy competition...
His ear twiched, interrupting his thought, as he heard footsteps down a nearby alley. Slowly, he crept to it... His close to dead heart froze for a second, as a wide smile crept on his face. A pray, a perfect pray... He looked at it’s delicate, graceful body. The long hair, whom color he was unable to tell in the dark of the street, as if it really mattered... It’s only clothing, a very long t-shirt, seemingly with nothing underneath, showing not-so-generous curves... What really caught his eyes, however, were it’s eyes. One red, another a deep purple, both empty voids where no emotions, no thoughts, not anything, could be read. It’s lips moved, saying silent, unexistant words...
Some would call it a sentient being. A “Her”. For him, she was nothing more than an animal, a meal her would soon delect himself with... He crept by her, his tongue moving around his lips, making it’s way to caress his sharp, long canine, caressing them with delight... Who knew, maybe he would be able to eat her in both possible ways... No bother if she wasn’t up to his standart, her being there was already a miracle of the lower...
One blink, and her eyes truly opened. No longer voids, but eyes of a being who was aware. He hid behind a trash can as she turned around, looking at all surrounding her. Fear, incomprehension... Her eyes were full of it, making her seem even more delectable, to him...
“Is... is anyone there?” Never before... She who walked blindly saw, she who put her bare feets on sharp glasses, felt. She who understood nothing, knew.
“Calm, you children...” She saw him rise from his hide, grinning widely, showing his sharp teeth... He laughed, walking closer. “So rare to find pearls like you... Treasure are to be cherished, they say... Me, I say they’re to be consumated... Don’t you agree?”
”G.. go away! ... GYAAA!!!!” She shouted as she ran, the being laughing madly behind her. Left, right, front... She didn’t care as she went throught differents alleys, making her way as she tried to escape her pursuer. She tried, but was in vain. She felt the blow on her head, along with a warm, sticky liquid that seemed to flow from it.... Sent flying to a corner, she saw the being jump at her, the intend to kill written in his eyes, and his fangs glaring under the few moon rays piercing the clouds...
She had the reflex most living beings have. Extending her arms in front of herself in a vain attempt to protect herself. Except that something that doesn’t normally happen with living beings, happened. As her hands touched, a ball of light appeared in front of her. A shriek. A blood freezing scream, and then silence. Only silence, and the light and warmth of the small, Orange Yellow ball burning in front of her... Slowly, she reached her trembling hands to it, her eyes fixed to where the male previous was... Now all that was left were ashes flying in the wind and some burned up bones...
Taking the ball in the palm of her hands, she shivered from the warmth of it. She stared at it a bit, before looking around her, confused... Just what had happened?
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Post by Strife at Grandmas house on Nov 4, 2006 0:14:55 GMT -5
Ooh, very good. ^_^ There's some spelling/grammar things that should be fixed, but other than that, I think it explains the beginning of the novel quite well.
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