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Post by The Wanderer on May 29, 2006 17:16:25 GMT -5
Kyubi never leaves my body (anymore), if you wanted to know.
However... it is possible for him to take control of my actions, when I'm incapacitated, or even near-death.
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Post by Ikkin on May 29, 2006 17:17:36 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]The illness would have to be Kyubi-related. Because if Sev randomly got sick just as we need him most... that'd be ironic. Very funny, though. XD The ending has to be happy. Because we're like Disney, only dumber. ^_^ Bude, you and Duckey get murdered together. You don't die in the earthquake. XD I'll be sure to add in the love scene. If there's any special way you want to die, post it now. ^_^ Should these all be comical and stupid, or what?[/glow] Heh, Irony would have to hate us for that to happen... So, Kyubi should be the one who creates whatever illness we use? Yay, happy ending! ^_^ Sev'll be good for that, once he's all healed up, methinks. j;) Phoenixes make great deus ex machinas... The love scene thing should be awesome... XD Sort of depends on the effect we want to go for, right? I'm all for comical and stupid, after the other murder mystery... j;) When I said sickness, I meant more of a mental illness than ... the flu for example. Though he could have physical symptoms too. (Aww, poor little birdie is sick, he couldn't hurt anything! *coos* ) So in the beginning, Sev is just irritable (which from I understand could be considered normal for him) and it leads into paranoia or something. It could also explain why he can't heal throughout the plot - he can't focus enough. Until he snaps, when his abilities are completely out of control. (Die! *hiss* ) Couldn't delusion and dementia also explain an eroding bond? Meh, I'm trying to explain, but I'm afraid it's not coming out too well. I think we need an entirely made up mental illness. Maybe something that makes people irritable and moody, but has a slightly stronger impact on Sev, due to not being human. We could EVEN broadcast it as a radio transmission very subtley near the start, so people begin to get the hint. Maybe a few mods also catch it. We could also add a side affect so it's easier to spot... like bad cold, faded looking eyes, a weird rash on the back of the hand, that kind of thing. And Stal wears sunglasses too, right? ^_^ Long, hand concealing trenchcoat... a hankerchief? >> I like that idea... Having other people effected by it too would work nicely... especially if the effect on Sev isn't just a little stronger, but quite a bit stronger. It would make people need to connect a couple more dots, if the disease wasn't normally supposed to make people that crazy. The radio transmission and the side effect ideas sound good... We can have the ones who have the disease hide it at first, then slip more and more as time goes on, until people get the hint. |
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Post by Ikkin on May 29, 2006 17:20:03 GMT -5
Also, can someone write a detailed description of all the associate entities (Like Lycos, Sev etc.) and their physicality and connection with their "creator" as it were. Basically, everything possible. It's quite hard to plot around characters you only have the vaguest of ideas about XD I've got part of the description of Sev already done, with the emphasis on the connection. I sent it to Rider for opinions, and need to make a couple changes, but I'll do that. ^_^ Kyubi never leaves my body (anymore), if you wanted to know. However... it is possible for him to take control of my actions, when I'm incapacitated, or even near-death. I think that's where the sleepwalking thing came in... Kyubi takes over when you're asleep, or something. |
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Post by Rider on May 29, 2006 17:21:16 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]You guys can decide whether or not we use the rodent.
Ventratta: General of the Meepit Army. Small, pink, and very vicious. Married to Elvie, but likes staring at Nalia. Occupations include army general, barber, minister, and chef for the old Galleys and Gardens. Has many other untapped skills. Little is known about his life before he became Rider's petpet, but he must have learned to fight, cook, etc. somewhere. He at times can be very expressive, and he clearly hates Stal. (Think about all Stal's done to him, after all.) Sometimes, even Rider can't tell what thoughts and intentions lurk behind those big, black eyes.
(Maybe Ventratta is convinced that Stal is the murderer, but since Rider is convinced that it's Wandy and Ventratta can't communicate easily with any of the other mods, Ventratta tries to kill Stal on his own. Ventratta can make several attempts to tell the mods that Stal is the killer.) [/glow]
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Post by Rider on May 29, 2006 17:23:03 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Ikkin, there are just some forumers who can't pull off comical and some who just can't pull off serious.
Maybe we ought to go for a blend. ^_^ I can just picture Tracy dying of overexposure to James Blunt, but that sort of death wouldn't be appropriate for the serious Crystal-sama.[/glow]
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Post by Tracy on May 29, 2006 17:24:35 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]You guys can decide whether or not we use the rodent. Ventratta: General of the Meepit Army. Small, pink, and very vicious. Married to Elvie, but likes staring at Nalia. Occupations include army general, barber, minister, and chef for the old Galleys and Gardens. Has many other untapped skills. Little is known about his life before he became Rider's petpet, but he must have learned to fight, cook, etc. somewhere. He at times can be very expressive, and he clearly hates Stal. (Think about all Stal's done to him, after all.) Sometimes, even Rider can't tell what thoughts and intentions lurk behind those big, black eyes. (Maybe Ventratta is convinced that Stal is the murderer, but since Rider is convinced that it's Wandy and Ventratta can't communicate easily with any of the other mods, Ventratta tries to kill Stal on his own. Ventratta can make several attempts to tell the mods that Stal is the killer.) [/glow] I like the Ventratta idea. Maybe after a few attempts to try communicate with the mods, he inexplicably disappears? A few episodes later, he could be found pinned to the wall or something XD I dunno, I think Stal would take great malice in killing Ventratta. |
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Post by Tracy on May 29, 2006 17:25:28 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Ikkin, there are just some forumers who can't pull off comical and some who just can't pull off serious. Maybe we ought to go for a blend. ^_^ I can just picture Tracy dying of overexposure to James Blunt, but that sort of death wouldn't be appropriate for the serious Crystal-sama.[/glow] ;__; But I like James Blunt. JUSSTT TEAARRSS AND RAIIINNN!!! |
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Post by Ikkin on May 29, 2006 17:25:41 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Ikkin, there are just some forumers who can't pull off comical and some who just can't pull off serious. Maybe we ought to go for a blend. ^_^ I can just picture Tracy dying of overexposure to James Blunt, but that sort of death wouldn't be appropriate for the serious Crystal-sama.[/glow] True... A blend sounds good. ^_^ Overexposure to James Blunt? Oh my... XD And, Ventratta sounds like he'd make a good addition... ^_^ |
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Post by Rider on May 29, 2006 17:27:36 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]You guys can decide whether or not we use the rodent. Ventratta: General of the Meepit Army. Small, pink, and very vicious. Married to Elvie, but likes staring at Nalia. Occupations include army general, barber, minister, and chef for the old Galleys and Gardens. Has many other untapped skills. Little is known about his life before he became Rider's petpet, but he must have learned to fight, cook, etc. somewhere. He at times can be very expressive, and he clearly hates Stal. (Think about all Stal's done to him, after all.) Sometimes, even Rider can't tell what thoughts and intentions lurk behind those big, black eyes. (Maybe Ventratta is convinced that Stal is the murderer, but since Rider is convinced that it's Wandy and Ventratta can't communicate easily with any of the other mods, Ventratta tries to kill Stal on his own. Ventratta can make several attempts to tell the mods that Stal is the killer.) [/glow] I like the Ventratta idea. Maybe after a few attempts to try communicate with the mods, he inexplicably disappears? A few episodes later, he could be found pinned to the wall or something XD I dunno, I think Stal would take great malice in killing Ventratta. [glow=red,2,300]Ventratta would have to make at least one attempt on Stal's life, then yes, Stal could kill Ventratta. Sounds shiny. ^_^ Also, I can't summon Meepits because of the earthquake. Don't ask why. I just can't. *plothole'd*[/glow] |
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Post by Tracy on May 29, 2006 17:28:08 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Ikkin, there are just some forumers who can't pull off comical and some who just can't pull off serious. Maybe we ought to go for a blend. ^_^ I can just picture Tracy dying of overexposure to James Blunt, but that sort of death wouldn't be appropriate for the serious Crystal-sama.[/glow] True... A blend sounds good. ^_^ Overexposure to James Blunt? Oh my... XD And, Ventratta sounds like he'd make a good addition... ^_^ I gotta say, I'm all for the comedy, but I'd LOVE to add some real horror bits. With overblown suspense and stuff. *Possibly should not have watched the Da Vinci Code* THE PENTAGRAMS! THE FIBONNACHI! THE OVEREXPLAINATION OF EVERYTHING! |
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Post by Tracy on May 29, 2006 17:29:47 GMT -5
I like the Ventratta idea. Maybe after a few attempts to try communicate with the mods, he inexplicably disappears? A few episodes later, he could be found pinned to the wall or something XD I dunno, I think Stal would take great malice in killing Ventratta. [glow=red,2,300]Ventratta would have to make at least one attempt on Stal's life, then yes, Stal could kill Ventratta. Sounds shiny. ^_^ Also, I can't summon Meepits because of the earthquake. Don't ask why. I just can't. *plothole'd*[/glow] At what point would you want to summon Meepits? If when Stal was attacking you, then maybe your body could be found surrounded by Meepits, their dark eyes torrent of secret and mystery. I mean, Meepits can't stop Insane Stal! |
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Post by Rider on May 29, 2006 17:31:39 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Ventratta would have to make at least one attempt on Stal's life, then yes, Stal could kill Ventratta. Sounds shiny. ^_^ Also, I can't summon Meepits because of the earthquake. Don't ask why. I just can't. *plothole'd*[/glow] At what point would you want to summon Meepits? If when Stal was attacking you, then maybe your body could be found surrounded by Meepits, their dark eyes torrent of secret and mystery. I mean, Meepits can't stop Insane Stal! [glow=red,2,300]Have you ever had a Meepit chewing on your pants? Dude, Meepits can stop ANYTHING. ^_^[/glow] |
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Post by Tracy on May 29, 2006 17:32:38 GMT -5
At what point would you want to summon Meepits? If when Stal was attacking you, then maybe your body could be found surrounded by Meepits, their dark eyes torrent of secret and mystery. I mean, Meepits can't stop Insane Stal! [glow=red,2,300]Have you ever had a Meepit chewing on your pants? Dude, Meepits can stop ANYTHING. ^_^[/glow] Maybe you can't summon the Meepits in time? Maybe Stal still kills you, but has ominous tears in the bottom of his jeans? I dunno, it's a much easier plothole to fill than "Uhh... earthquake took my powers >>" |
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Post by Rider on May 29, 2006 17:35:40 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Have you ever had a Meepit chewing on your pants? Dude, Meepits can stop ANYTHING. ^_^[/glow] Maybe you can't summon the Meepits in time? Maybe Stal still kills you, but has ominous tears in the bottom of his jeans? I dunno, it's a much easier plothole to fill than "Uhh... earthquake took my powers >>" [glow=red,2,300]I'll consider. ^_^ It does sound good. Also, I don't want to summon the Meepits because I don't want to endanger thier lives? I know Ventratta is the best fighter I have, a completely ruthless opponent. I know he can take care of himself, so I don't worry about him. ... Dude, it would be so funny if Ventratta was the murderer. XD [/glow] |
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Post by Tracy on May 29, 2006 17:37:11 GMT -5
Maybe you can't summon the Meepits in time? Maybe Stal still kills you, but has ominous tears in the bottom of his jeans? I dunno, it's a much easier plothole to fill than "Uhh... earthquake took my powers >>" [glow=red,2,300]I'll consider. ^_^ It does sound good. Also, I don't want to summon the Meepits because I don't want to endanger thier lives? I know Ventratta is the best fighter I have, a completely ruthless opponent. I know he can take care of himself, so I don't worry about him. ... Dude, it would be so funny if Ventratta was the murderer. XD [/glow] If Ventratta does indeed attempt to kill Stal, it will be an awesome red herringo!  Soooo... Sev gets ill... and... How does this affect Stal again? |
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