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Post by Nimras on Nov 30, 2006 16:48:27 GMT -5
A Question of Worth: Part One
by extreme_fj0rd
Neo-Fu. *dies*
I’m getting the feeling that Christopher is going to be in for a bit of a culture clash when he learns the difference between how one really learns a martial art and how he thinks it’s going to be…
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Post by Nimras on Nov 30, 2006 16:51:36 GMT -5
Something Has Happened!
by frostcrystal and tdyans
Well, I gave most of my review over at DA, but I’ll post it here for Tdyans to see as well. *grin*
I. Love. This. Comic.
The pacing of it is just perfect, as is the little details that make it doubly enjoyable.
I also love that it’s a Christmas Kyrii….
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Post by Nimras on Nov 30, 2006 17:05:55 GMT -5
Card Collections - Shoonee
by iwantyours and yatomiyuka
*snerk*
….Sorry, all Air Faeries that might have seen that…
I do kind of wish the story closed with the text from card, since that’s what it’s about. “She inherited the bow and arrows from a Faerie. Now, she uses them to make Neopia a little friendlier, a little brighter, a little… huggier.”… I think it would have fit the story really well. Plus, it’s a nice way to draw the card back to the story.
I love taking TCG characters and giving them a personality and story of their own. *grin* It just adds so much life to Neopia.
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Post by Nimras on Nov 30, 2006 17:15:17 GMT -5
Annunciation, Arguments, and Airsprayby silent_snow The title scares me. *dies* The idea of all of the Faeries, talkin’ like dat is pure funny.  I’m so happy you managed to write it all down so that the accent was obvious, but still understandable. *grin* And Sloth being affect as well brings in very disturbing plots and ideas into my warped mind. …and the whole plot… *just dies* Love it. ^^
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Post by Nimras on Nov 30, 2006 17:41:06 GMT -5
CCR: Instincts P5 by Nimras - Awww, so sweet. All of it is described REALLY well. I might say that in the past, I often found your descriptions to be a little unbalanced, but this is excellent. HOLY &%#$ SHE'S NOT THINKING OF LEAVING HIM THAT WAY, IS SHE?!?!?! ;D Tashni? That last line is my favorite review, ever. CCR: INSTINCTS PART 5 I'll do this as I read because... well, just because. I don't know about you, but I like knowing what people think when they read. Illusen rants about Jeran's mischief as a cub... she takes the time to complain about a werelupe's history of trouble while the werelupe himself is possibly rampaging through the forests? And then she gets down to business. 0.o I love Danner's character. I really do. Even more than I <3 Jeran. Amazing, really. I mean, you've turned Jeran into such a hunk - oh wait. I never said that. >.> I like the "encouraging" Danner to sleep thing. Poor guy. Somehow I think the whole "cure" thing seems to easy to be true. We'll see, eh? "Perhaps she was also hunting for breakfast, Jeran hoped she was having better success than him. " Shouldn't that be, "having better success than HE WAS."? I'm really pleased with the gentleness Jeran shows with regard to Mareian - even as a werelupe, he thinks nothing but of how to make her happy. Say goodmorning to closet-romantic Psycho. Drat - the conflict has to be with *Mareian*?!?! You *had* to make her doubt herself. UGH! Overall comments - I like the pace. There was just enough suspense for me as I was reading - while I didn't make a conscious comment about it, it was there. I am really enjoying this series, Nim. Don't really have much else to say. What sort of review are you looking for? I can make a conscientious reader when I like the story. *chimes* Good morning, Psycho! Illusen's rant is mostly her frustration -- she can't do anything until something else finishes and he just won't sit still! Jeran is a bit of a workaholic... CCR Instincts Parts 4 and 5- I feel bad for not reviewing last week's installment, so I'll combine them here. ^^ Sorry! I love how easy it is to read these, it's like reading from a book. Your pacing is wonderful, and Part 4 was so tense I couldn't stop reading it. I love how you switched POV to Jeran at the end and his instincts. Those paragraphs were wonderful. The whole thing was. ^^ Part 5-ZOMG, she wouldn't let him be a Werelupe forever, would she? Hmm...I thought the instincts of Jeran in this part were a little too...human, but that's ok. This story's still amazing nonetheless. Remember wayyy back at the end of chapter two, when I said this was my favorite chapter ending? Nice to know that everyone else didn't hate it. *grin* As for the too human part, I had to tone it down a little bit... I was worried as it was, with him getting all homicidal about Danner, and you might not have noticed his bright idea of running off and starting a 'pack' with Mareian. Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Instincts - Part Five by nimras23Ooh... She can't leave him like that can she?!?!?! Very good Nim  Hehehehehe! Thank you all for the reviews! *gives cookies* |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 1, 2006 22:10:01 GMT -5
I apologize for getting to these so late. What with beginning the week ill, and ending it with a mad-dash to finish NaNo, I have been pressed for time. But now, at last, I may lie back, rest a bit, and enjoy some good literature!
Card Collections - Shoonee by iwantyours and yatomiyuka
There is but one word that adequately describes this story: beautiful.
From the beginning, I could tell that this would be a brilliant piece at the end. It never truly moved, for me at least, in a fast-paced manner, but instead was more sophisticated and refined, yet the tone perfectly fit this and the literary atmosphere of the story was wonderful. You left intrigue in many places. You hardly touched upon what the Evil is or why the Guide had been sent, or who he was even, yet all of those lingering mysteries will keep this story in my mind long after I have finished it, and that makes this an amazing feat of literature.
To get down and dirty, to comment on the nitpickity things, you switched an off and an of, typed a period where there should have been a comma, and capitalized "just" when it should not have been... but, setting aside all of these malicious typos, this story was incredibly well-written and was truly an amazing piece.
Annunciation, Arguments, and Airspray by silent_snow
There's few things I can say in response to this, I feel. Simply said, there just isn't much to comment upon. This was hilarious. I never imagined that a few Faeries and an evil mastermind with English accents and bad hairdos could be so gut-wrenchingly enjoyable, but it was. I applaud you. You wrote something amazingly humorous and did it perfectly well!
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