273 Reviews

[Trilly (18426 words)]

Gaw, here I am, on the forum and I finally have time to maybe do a couple of reviews.

Food Science:

Oh, the irony! I feel sorry for the poor litle petpet. I liked the background art and the shading a lot in this comic. Variations of the same joke may have been used in other comics, but the joke was still fresh, so it's really no big deal, I think. ^_^

Don't Blame Me:

Squee, the artwork is adorable! *wants a pink oven*
I didn't see the punch line coming at the beginning of the comic, and that's definitely a good thing. It was a surprise.

Follies Follies:

My favourite part of this comic is the yurble janitor's expression in the second panel; it's totally priceless. Poor janitor, looks like he's doomed to be unappreciated wherever he goes.

Game Over:

Incredibly fantastic artwork. ^^ I wonder how that meepit got there in the first place...

[ohmandoh]

micrody said:

Comics!

Follies Follies by Manda314 and Renrenthehamster
That Moehog should run... I sense a lot of anger from Bob... and not the scarecrow one, either! The art was really nice and I liked the joke. The expressions on Bob (the Yurble) were pretty good.

Thanks xD

nimras23 said:

Follies Follies!
by manda314

No wonder the Yurble is so irritable all the time. He spends all day running in the hot sun, then the inanimate object gets all the credit. And the first panel under the title made me laugh, how he’s just got that crazed expression on his face. The white pupils make him look even more unbalanced, I think.

Hehe. I love drawing crazy closeups. Thanks

trilly said:

Follies Follies:

My favourite part of this comic is the yurble janitor's expression in the second panel; it's totally priceless. Poor janitor, looks like he's doomed to be unappreciated wherever he goes.

Thanks!

And thank you Dan for putting the comic up for review! I didn't even have to ask. Fwee.

And thanks to Renna for being so patient. Yeesh.

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Weepit WAS here! *gasp* The lines were all pretty good and the joke was pretty funny, it's just a shame that it wasn't a real Weepit... Good job, though.

I didn't know a weepit actually existed until recently

Thanks for all your reviews!

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The Unsung Faerie by goosher
This was an amazing first piece, Goosher, and I really enjoyed it. The Library Faerie is often forgotten, yet here she was made the focus of the piece. The trip to Thade's castle was quite fun and inventive, and her subsequent riddle-solving flight around Neopia was simply astounding. I particularly liked how she communicated with the Space faerie and how quickly Sloth gave her what she wanted.

On the grammar side of things, let me give you a few pointers, if you don't mind:

“How,” he said slyly, “Do you hurt someone with rubies?”

That "do," I believe, had no need to be capitalized. Elsewhere, I saw a quotation mark that was an apostrophe, so watch out for those. Your use of the word "faerie" was, I felt, inconsistent; in some places it was capitalized, in others it was not (and I am excluding it when referring to the Library Faerie). Traditionally, I have seen, it is capitalized, but if you prefer to write it lowercased, then at least keep it consistent. Those few bits aside, you had good grammar and spelling, and your word choice was superb.

I quite enjoyed this, as I said, and I look forward to reading your future work.

And, of course, welcome to the NTWF!

[Goosh]

micrody said:

The Unsung Faerie by goosher
This was an amazing first piece, Goosher, and I really enjoyed it. The Library Faerie is often forgotten, yet here she was made the focus of the piece. The trip to Thade's castle was quite fun and inventive, and her subsequent riddle-solving flight around Neopia was simply astounding. I particularly liked how she communicated with the Space faerie and how quickly Sloth gave her what she wanted.

On the grammar side of things, let me give you a few pointers, if you don't mind:

“How,” he said slyly, “Do you hurt someone with rubies?”

That "do," I believe, had no need to be capitalized. Elsewhere, I saw a quotation mark that was an apostrophe, so watch out for those. Your use of the word "faerie" was, I felt, inconsistent; in some places it was capitalized, in others it was not (and I am excluding it when referring to the Library Faerie). Traditionally, I have seen, it is capitalized, but if you prefer to write it lowercased, then at least keep it consistent. Those few bits aside, you had good grammar and spelling, and your word choice was superb.

I quite enjoyed this, as I said, and I look forward to reading your future work.

And, of course, welcome to the NTWF!

^__^ Thanks a bunch! I need to brush up on my grammar a little bit, but a lot of the things you told me I didn't know, so thanks! I'm glad someone reviewed my work, and you totally got what I was trying to say. My mom didn't ^_^ Thanks again!

[Goosh]

Is anyone else going to review it, or does a review thread die after the week?

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goosher said:

Is anyone else going to review it, or does a review thread die after the week?

Typically, reviews are done for an issue until the next comes out.

Don't worry, though, the more you're in, the more you'll be reviewed.
And, it never hurts to do a few reviews yourself. Plus, it's fun to read NT stories, articles and comics!