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[lemmykoopa300]

Wheee! Thanks for the reviews guys! ^_____^ I feel so happy!

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Dear Neopia by star_29791

To be honest with you, I really don't like reading letters and other first-person POV pieces. This gives you the unfair disadvantage of having my bias from the very beginning. I'm sorry, but I don't want to give you a review because it really wouldn't be a review. You're a fabulous writer; I'm just a very picky reader. I will say one thing, however - I think the story would have been better off without having been in letter-format. My first piece was written like that and it was very similar, plot-wise, to yours - with the whole imploring-you-to-not-make-the-same-mistake thing at the end. So my advice is what was given to me (and now I think I understand it) - your plot would have been better without the letter thing. The story itself is interesting, but the morose, regretful tone of writing a letter is sort of unappealing.

Hmmm...well I've written a lot of letter format stories and I have to say, the others have worked much better. I personally don't like this story myself, as it's a little too depressing for me, even though I wrote it (but then again, not every author likes every of their own pieces). But thank you so much for the compliment! Thanks for the review and for being so honest.

Dear Neopia by Star
When I began reading this, I had thought that this mopey acara would be a bore. To be honest, the first few paragraphs were. But, towards the end, things did pick up and get better. I can't say I like Jane, but there is a quality to her that is admirable. That is nice. Mechanically, this story was successful, though I would have probably written a few things differently to be more concise. However, everything fit with Jane's character, and in a first-person story, that is essential. Though not my favorite story, this was still a good one. Nice writing.

As I said above, I didn't like this story myself. I wrote it when I was feeling a little down in the dumps. It is definitely not my best and I'm surprised it even got in. But somehow, it's popular judging by the fanmail I've got. Strange...I never get as much fanmail for the pieces I actually like. Thanks for being so honest though.

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Needed Adventure: Part Two by tdyans
I know it's a bit late for a review, but I finally had time to read this!
It's interesting how there are twenty-four hours in a day...and yet so many pass by unnoticed...

This was a great second part, Tdyans!
Being the second part, though, I really have little to comment on.
After all, my initial thoughts I said last week.
And, until it ends, I cannot give my final feelings.
The most that I can say is I crave now part three.