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Post by Nimras on Jul 6, 2006 13:08:12 GMT -5
Dusk in Tyrannia: Part Five
by alkuna_
“The Gruslen was now clinging to the brush with everything he had, his muscles flexing and working with determination to 'kill' the brush.”
Awwwww…. I miss my cat now. *grin*
Not sure if this chapter added much in the way of plot (like I’m one to talk *grin* ) but I adore Obsidian. Now I want my Morwen.
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Post by Nimras on Jul 6, 2006 13:13:04 GMT -5
Shad and Saura: A Week in Bogshot - Part Fiveby ssjelitegirl “ Shad's head had showed up by Saura's side. "Please don't say I ate some of it... please!" he muttered.” *snicker* Shad’s big fear.  Makes me wonder if the potion itself told on him after they’d left. I have to admit a little confusion at the end, was Shad’s package from the Werelupes instead of Sophie?
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Post by Nimras on Jul 6, 2006 13:20:14 GMT -5
The Lost World of Stnaltia: Part One
by silentbutterfly
“Now cast your line! If you really want to catch something that bad, you can catch me!"
"Are you serious?" Blackwingedbird replied. She certainly wouldn't mind catching Brave_Eyes, what worried her was reeling him in.”
;D You are my hero… Just thought you should know. ^^
So far it looks like a very interesting beginning… Can’t wait to see where you take it.
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Post by Nimras on Jul 6, 2006 13:22:42 GMT -5
Fur Flies in Terror Mountain Practice
by rookina
@_@ Poor Jubjub…. Just the idea of that makes me motion sick!
I really like the art style…. And I adore the Jubjub’s face in the last panel. I want to give him a hug… but I think it would barf all over me if I squeezed it.
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Post by Nimras on Jul 6, 2006 13:27:24 GMT -5
Land of Pacmanby pacmanite *snicker* That’s evil.  I like the art work, but I have a question about Shoryu’s eye in the second panel. It looked a little… odd.
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Post by Nimras on Jul 6, 2006 13:30:49 GMT -5
Dangerously Insaneby leah_51293  Veltru is going to be grounded I take it? *grin* Loved it Nut… just like always. Your expression in the first panel is priceless. ^^
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Post by Tashni on Jul 7, 2006 18:49:58 GMT -5
Dusk in Tyrannia
I won't go real indepth into this because I was a prereader a while back. Anyway, I still love it very much! You really emmerse me in the Tyrannian culture. My only big complaint is how quickly Dusk gets a command of the language. It wasn't too realistic.
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Post by Huntress on Jul 8, 2006 8:31:47 GMT -5
I have to admit a little confusion at the end, was Shad’s package from the Werelupes instead of Sophie? Yus. I suppose they might've asked Sophie to send the package for them as, well, if you were working at Bogshot's local post office, would you rather see Sophie or a huge Werelupe stepping in? ...not sure what I'd prefer o.o But thanks for the review ^^ Eh, I've been so very lazy lately. Or busy. Generally a bad combination. Maybe once the weather gets colder, I'll get a bit more active. |
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Makes me wonder if the potion itself told on him after they’d left.
Veltru is going to be grounded I take it? *grin* Loved it Nut… just like always. Your expression in the first panel is priceless. ^^
