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Post by Nimras on Jun 30, 2006 19:40:49 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 30, 2006 19:48:24 GMT -5
Argh! You beat me to it! I'll probably review something, I'm pretty bored.
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Post by Dan on Jun 30, 2006 20:17:25 GMT -5
Court Rogue Eight-
Wow. This is by far my favorite part of the series. Your writing is beautiful as always, and dialogue was spot on. And what a cliffhanger! Man, I can tell the last four parts will be great. I'm so excited!
EDIT: And there's like no one in the Times this week from the NTWF. How sad! ;__;
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Post by silentbutterfly on Jun 30, 2006 20:20:13 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 30, 2006 22:05:57 GMT -5
Congrats, silentbutterfly! I noticed your username when I was skimming through.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 30, 2006 23:46:22 GMT -5
I haven't reviewed anything for a long, long, time...I've just recently become re-interested in Neopets (and the NT) again. =) So I am apologizing in advance if my reviews aren't very detailed. ^.^ comics:Dangerously InsaneThe facial expressions are great and the joke is funny too. I'm probably going to check back to see your ealier work.  Land of PacmanI was actually reading through some of the comics before I decided to review and I really like this one. I really like your drawing style and your idea is really cute. ^.^ The Weekly SpontanianHaha! Nice joke and nice art.  Fur Flies in Terror Mountain PracticeI love the first panel! Your art is really cool, and your idea is unique. Poor Jubjub. ^^ stories:Wish for AuthorityA really cute idea and a nice moral. However, I think there was a lot of dialouge. Personally, I think you should have added a little more description to add to the story. Overall I think you did a nice job. New Series:The Lost World of StnaltiaI really liked this beginning. It flowed nicely and your characters had great personality and believability. It has captured my interest. Can't wait for the next parts. |
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Post by xdragonllamax on Jul 1, 2006 0:25:55 GMT -5
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flapdoodle
I really like flapdoodle. I luuuv the art. But yeah, cute wins all. >D
T.W.S
I made it! x)
bad carma
I really like this one also because of the art. haha tutu. xP
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Post by Tashni on Jul 1, 2006 11:36:43 GMT -5
CCR Part 8 by Nimras - I was with Jeran in still not being sure whether or not Athless was guilty. Good job! (Um, seeing as I'll be gone the next two weeks, I read part 9, too, so I'll PM you that review.)
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Post by Star on Jul 1, 2006 14:12:47 GMT -5
Oh my. I haven't written in sooooo long. Whoops...will write again soon, I hope. Anyway, here are some reviews:
Comic Reviews
Dangerously Insane by leah_51293
Hehe, I loved the Shoyrus expression in every panel. Just right and the joke was quite good too.
Land of Pacman by pacmanite
This was quite funny. My favourite part of your art was the Kyrii. He was so cute and his expression really worked well!
Fur Flies in Terror Mountain Practice by rookina
Heh! The Jubjub was so cute! I liked the idea very much indeed - it made me laugh.
Short Stories
Wish for Authority by kindheartedfairy
An original idea! Just I thought that I didn't get to know the characters well enough and there wasn't a lot of description at all. I thought some parts were a bit hasty and were a bit too coincidental. But overall a nice story.
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Post by Violin on Jul 1, 2006 15:35:45 GMT -5
I decided to do some reviews this week... I guess because some of you reviewed my story last week. Short Stories:Wish for Authority by kindheartedfairy I really liked the concept for this story. The idea of pets owning humans instead of the other way around was ironic and funny. I think the story would have benefited from more descriptions, though. Something I know I must constantly work on is showing to the readers what is happening instead of just telling them about it. Other than that, I enjoyed reading it. Comics:Dangerously Insane by leah_51293 This comic was funny and cute. I liked it. The art looked good. The expression of the Shoyru in the second panel is adorable! And I thought the perspective used for the last panel was interesting and mixed things up a little bit. Land of Pacman by pacmanite The art was nice on this and the joke was funny. I had always wondered what happened when you got that message from the Wheel of Excitement... now I know.  Fur Flies in Terror Mountain Practice by rookina Aww... I feel sorry for the Jubjub but joke is funny. We really need a furry Yooyu, though. That would be cool! New Series:The Lost World of Stnaltia: Part One by silentbutterfly Wow, I really enjoyed this first part! From your descriptions I could picture Brave_Eyes and Blackwingedbird quite clearly (of course the nice custom pic helped, too). The dialogue between them sounded very natural and the friendship between them both is sweet. My favorite parts though were the descriptions of the "chubby breadfish" and butterfish splattering itself all across the Pteri's face. I look forward to the next part and finding out what's below the water. |
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Post by leah51293 on Jul 1, 2006 16:55:07 GMT -5
Hehee, thanks ^^ Someone neomailed me today saying how much better my drawings have gotten over the years.
*nods* Gracias. ^.^
Heh, Veltru has her adorable moments. ;D The last panel was probably the hardest to do, because I didn't know how I was going to have the two positioned.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2006 20:21:31 GMT -5
Wish for Authority
by kindheartedfairy I <3 RoyGBiv. What an awesome name. ;D The idea for this was pure genius, and I honestly never would have got that from the title. Fyora's appearance caught me off guard a little, but hey, she's the Faerie Queen, she does what she wants! The dialog, the majority of the story, was very well written and entertaining. Usually, I just skim past quotation marks (I know, I'm bad) but you kept me very interested. Very nice! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2006 2:50:47 GMT -5
Fur Flies in Terror Mountain Practice by rookina Aww... I feel sorry for the Jubjub but joke is funny. We really need a furry Yooyu, though. That would be cool! Fur Flies in Terror Mountain Practice by rookina Heh! The Jubjub was so cute! I liked the idea very much indeed - it made me laugh. Fur Flies in Terror Mountain PracticeI love the first panel! Your art is really cool, and your idea is unique. Poor Jubjub. ^^ Thanks guys The JubJub is supposed to be Selwick Phoss, but I couldn't make that obvious without mucking up the joke. And yes, we should have furry Yooyus |
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Post by Huntress on Jul 2, 2006 7:40:09 GMT -5
I had even forgotten how many parts my "S&S: A week in Bogshot" had. Apparently five. So it's finished now and I'd love to get some overall feedback ^^
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Post by Achilles Deranged on Jul 5, 2006 12:14:40 GMT -5
Hey guys! I'm new to this forum (less than a day) and I'm not sure how everything works, but I'm pretty sure I'll pick it up as we go along . Anyways, I had an article published in 246. It was the Haunted Woods article (Team Haunted Woods: More Than Just an Ugly Face), and reviews would be appreciated. Thanks! |
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