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Post by Deleted on May 30, 2006 16:07:17 GMT -5
Thanks, Nim! Yeah, I think I made a bashful face and apologetic comment around the NTWF somewhere about that. There was originally an extra space to mark the scene change, I could have sworn...  Anyway, I hope people figure it out. I also hope people like the end. It's a little different. But not in the least predictable.  |
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Post by nikki on May 30, 2006 16:31:06 GMT -5
Thanks for the review Luau! |
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Post by Deleted on May 30, 2006 18:11:34 GMT -5
Um, sorry if this comes out accusingly, but I remember seeing the comic "Lord of the Lost!" in the Neopian Times before... Impossible.  Okay, I thank everyone for the reviews, lol, and please no one feel bad for not getting. I'm not entirely sure there's anything TO get. It was my first comic attempt ever, and it embarrases me now, but I couldn't UN submit it once I had sent it in, and my second comic that SOMEhow got in the NT first ..was better, as are, Im hoping, my third and fourth, etc that will be in soon, so Lord of the Lost will just have to be one of those 'before I knew better; comics on my record, and hopefully, I'll escape the torment for it, lol. But my apologies.  lol. I suppose.. some-how.. the 'point' was.. poor shoyru.. thinks his rainbow gun is the bomb because the shop keeper said it was, and that's good, because that's all he could afford ANYway.. and then runs into sir royal draik who has not one, but THREE multi million neopoint weapons and is just playing around with them. lol. But.. like I said.. I apologise for the poorly written half-joke.  But I thank everyone for the reviews. ;D Comments on my shadowing? Eh.. I can't promise I'll do it 'right' ..I just 'do my best' ..I'm not an artist, self-admitedly.. and I put in too many hours of work getting them like they come out, and perfect shadowing.. ..whew.. well, I'd never NOT be working on them then, lol.. but I promise to TRY and do better? lol. I've been out of town all weekend, so I'll try to work on my own reviews tonight, and once again, thankyous and apologies to all, lol. |
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Post by Nimras on May 31, 2006 15:51:02 GMT -5
The Dreamerby dark_goddess_rising Ohh, Psellia, my favoritest air Faerie. But such a sad reason for her to be around when she was needed! About the only thing that nags me is: Maybe something like, “Until, that is, she found Altador. Psellia didn’t discover Altador” or a phrase like it. It just seemed to flow oddly to me. Other than that, it’s a nice new interpretation from the usual “depressed for no real reason” Faerie stories; she has a real reason that she was banished.
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Post by Nimras on May 31, 2006 16:01:20 GMT -5
Kois and Peophins: Long Lost Siblings?by lassie_nikki  I’d never heard of that before… Was it something you made up for the sake of the article? While there’s a lot of information in this article, most of it seems to be from the Peophins point of view… if that makes any sense. There seems to be more of what a Peophin is, and what a Koi isn’t. …. I’m probably not making any sense with that. A lot of research must have gone into this article; I really like the mention of the Neopedia articles. That’s something that I didn’t know.
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Post by Nimras on May 31, 2006 16:09:39 GMT -5
Awesome Aquatic Petpets, Dudeby tashni Awww, all the cute little aquatic petpets… I actually used to have a Catamara, but my Aisha was scared of it. While I liked the tone of this article, the … beach speak? (What would you call that, anyways?) started to grate on my editing skills about half way though. The temptation to scribble out the apostrophes and add the remaining letters when I have a sharpie within reach does not bode well for my monitor. I didn’t recognize all the species in the article. Yey, I learned something! The Dartail is just adorable.
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Post by the_darkjedi on Jun 1, 2006 10:35:25 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews, everyone. Much appreciated, as always.  The Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi The sound effects were great, I couldn't help but hearing the old Batman tv series noises in my head! XD I don't have any recommendations. ^^Yup! That's the exact spirit I was trying to channel. I loved the old Adam West Batman show! (Eep... showing my age here...) Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie: I guess I don't have to say that the art pwns, we all know it by now x3 So many details and such a nice shading *is obsessed with details and shading* And those different fonts used for the sound effects really add a lot to the comic. Not to mention that the plotline is getting really interesting. There will be another comic in the next issue, right? Right? *frantic glare* *smack'd* o.o; Thanks very much... more sound effects coming next issue! Whee! Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerieby the_darkjedi Oh man, serious Batman flashbacks here. Bam! Whap! Kazow! … Sorry, got a little carried away there. (Did I mention I liked those old Batman episodes?) It will be interesting to see how they pull out of this. Guess the "Adam West" effect I was going for worked! agents of the faerie: the drawing is amazing, but you know that. however I DID notice something, I started writing behind closed doors before the first comic of this and I've just realised they're both working undercover for fyora.. sorry about that, great minds think alike? Definitely. The Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi *wants to be able to draw like you* Awww.... you guys are making me blush... or something... |
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Post by darkgoddessrising on Jun 1, 2006 18:13:31 GMT -5
The Dreamerby dark_goddess_rising Ohh, Psellia, my favoritest air Faerie. But such a sad reason for her to be around when she was needed! About the only thing that nags me is: Maybe something like, “Until, that is, she found Altador. Psellia didn’t discover Altador” or a phrase like it. It just seemed to flow oddly to me. Other than that, it’s a nice new interpretation from the usual “depressed for no real reason” Faerie stories; she has a real reason that she was banished.
I could have sworn I put something between there along the lines of her discovering Altador in the sense of finding it for herself. I must have been mistaken. *checks* Oops, looks like I did forget to change it. Now that's going to nag me too... Anyway, I haven't had as much time to do reviews as I would like, so I only have one: The Dark Before The Dawn: the Beginning by jambammer This was pretty sweet. I love how the four stick together to make things work and are willing to invite a stranger into their home even when they didn't have enough money for food. The part where she gets out the clothes for the ball, however seemed a bit contrived, especially after the comment about not having any nice clothes. Bringing the owner back into it at the end is a nice touch, connecting the end of the story back to the beginning. Now I have to go laugh at the pets that got thrown out of the palace. |
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Post by Nimras on Jun 2, 2006 9:30:00 GMT -5
Court Rogue-Part 3: Good part once again. I liked the poker game at the beginning, it was described very well. I also enjoy the endings of each part, the added humor really lighten the story. I'm intrigued on what the story is with Mareian's brother, and how that's going to tie in. Good part, you're definitely building up the plot.  *grin* Thank you! Especially thank you for noticing that plot things are happening (or at least being set up) without my killing off anyone... As for Khalyen... Um... He does show up one more time... But he's really leaving for most of the story. |
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Post by peri on Jun 3, 2006 0:58:50 GMT -5
Sorry so late! Land of Pacman - ROFL! Now that is a funny comic Love the expressions of all the characters, especially the cardboard petpet as he is sent down into the hole. Great job! Lord of the Lost! - hehe If I don't lose money, I win about as much money from Black Pawkeet Slots to buy a Rainbow Gun Cute! Trapped - Great drawings of Kanrik. Nice touch of a palm tree shadow in the first panel. Beautiful artwork as usual. And funny joke What a way to teach a thief to bring a flashlight hehe The Shoyru Squadron - I cannot get over how great this comic looks, it is just amazing artwork Just waiting for one of the cute little Shoyrus to ride up on Terask and breathe fire on all the other NQ villains Today in Neopia - Nice artwork, I like the characters' expressions as they are fleeing |
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Post by Tashni on Jun 6, 2006 0:25:03 GMT -5
Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews of "Awesome Aqautic PetPets," even though I was away and unable to beg/bribe/threaten. Yes, I was a little worried that the surfer dude talk would go too far, but I thought it would be worse to lose the voice later in the article, when it could have gotten tedious without the voice.
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Anyway, I hope people figure it out. I also hope people like the end. It's a little different. But not in the least predictable. 
lol. 
I’d never heard of that before… Was it something you made up for the sake of the article? While there’s a lot of information in this article, most of it seems to be from the Peophins point of view… if that makes any sense. There seems to be more of what a Peophin is, and what a Koi isn’t. 
