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Post by Nimras on May 22, 2006 14:16:23 GMT -5
A Weak Heart: Part One
by literalluau
Aww, a very cute and fitting picture – even if it is an old custom. I like how long it took for Dwennon to actually worry about her brother. It gave you the feeling that she really wasn’t one to worry about the small things and that she knew her brother fairly well. Abbi is funny; she’s just so … spunky. Can’t wait to see what happens next week. *grin*
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2006 18:59:31 GMT -5
Thanks, Nim.  Ehhh, Dwennon's a guy....the EGSROD strikes in the NT!  |
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Post by kinohi on May 22, 2006 20:51:22 GMT -5
Button the Slorg by rl337
The emotion was nice portrayed, the art is very good and the joke was funny. Good job!
Mealtime Kadastrophe by goten__10 also by frynr
This had good comedic timing, though I think a more pained or dramatic expression in the 5th panel would have done a lot to punctuate the punchline. Overall, an enjoyable comic.
Ouch! by howling_werewolf
Cute sums it up. Cute art and cute joke.
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
Awesome job on all counts. I'm loving that last panel.
Neopian Circumstances by nefily
The art looks very professionally done. I thought the joke was cute, though I hope there's more to future strips.
Never Trust a Lawyerbot by togepi_forever
Hmm... the art was very artsy... the joke was interesting. Either the bug brother event happened to the bug brothers who were on vacation or... I don't know what happened. -_0
DOOMed Adventures by ladyash782
lol! I like the look and feel of the art. The joke could have been corny, but the way it was handled struck me as really funny. Good job!
The Grand Adventures of Kirsya and Durnya by bluey_doodles
This is so cute. It's like a children's book illustration and Kirsya is so naive it's really funny. Good job!
The Gallion Ranch by pacmanite
This is just too cute. I love the panels and the tuskaninny's expression at the end. Great stuff! ^_^
Epic Proportions by jelly_bean_qween
Well, half of it is taken right off of neo. I get the joke, but it didn't appeal to my sense of humor.
Sanity Obsolete by myfallenrevival4
The art is decent enough, the humor isn't in good taste imo. The most appropriate thing about this comic is the title.
In the Shadows of Neopia by morrigan_a_aensland
The expressions are good, the joke is a very tired one, but it was ok. Due to the dark colors used, the art would have been better saved as a gif to preserve the quality.
Zeh Cute One:// Near-Sighted by glowing_banana
The art is nice, though the repetition in each panel along with a disjointed or weak story/joke fell a bit flat.
- Extreme Potato Counter - by pixiepuff
Cute art and a cute, if very simple premise.
Lined Paper MADNESS! by 8nlangen
Cute art and a funny, yet twisted joke. Good job!
No Comment by x_massacre_x
The art is very nicely done. The joke is simple, bordline bad taste, but funny. Good job.
Meepit War Tactics by cytherea007
I really like the different layers and dimensions in the art, and the premise is amusing. Good job!
Flapdoodle by obviousfakename
Nice artwork, coloring and expressions... and funny joke. Good job!
The Adventures of Help by raptor291
Prettyful art! This is one where the repetitiveness of the panels makes the joke. Good job!
Living in Neopia! by sensuke
LOL! This one is just adorable through and through! ^_^
Meowclops Mishaps by wsprite
Now this shows a slice of Neopian life! Great story and nice art!
The Callahan Files by caloriemuncher
Nice cheery colors and good comedic timing make this comic work. Good job.
Making the Stew by undeadqueen
The art is nice... the premise is confusing. Is the meowclops jealous because the spyder helped? I guess this one is over my head.
Silly Savannah Goes to Coltzan's Shrine by paola_7
The art looks great, and the joke is cute. I think the comic got cut off. It used to be easy to find out if there was another part that was missing, but they're naming the graphics files differently now. Good job, though.
Head in the Clouds by candykitty
Heh, cute one. Nice art and such a believable slice of Neopian life. I enjoyed it a lot.
Camouflage Paint Brush? Pffft!! by leeloo18
lol! Cute and quirky! Good job!
Anyway by wolfendusk
I like the style of the art and the layout for the most part. In the bottom panels I'm not sure if it's conveying that there is no other half to Neopia, or if the panels are split. o0 I would guess there's no other half to the planet.
Kawaii - New Toy by crow213
The expressions really make this comic. The art is very nice, the joke is a bit old, but looking at the art made it a worthwhile read.
Project Negative by unlawfull
The nice art and contrasting personalities in this comic make it entertaining. Good job.
Notions and Nonsense: The Argument by patjade
Nice art and a tricky joke make this an entertaining comic.
Best Insurance by ssjelitegirl
LOL! Great job on both the art and the joke! This is quality storytelling in a comic! ^_^
UnNormal by cozygen
Cute art and a cute if rather disturbing joke. Good job.
Usually abnormal by tristess
Nice art and a cute if not all that funny joke. It was entertaining.
Weird Brother by angelfish1985621
Hmm... I had to read this a couple times to find out that I didn't think the joke was funny. It was a good effort, though half of it is taken off the site.
Insanity Management by neon_neoni
lol! This is quite funny. Love those expressions.
Boochie Confusion by frost_faerie
Hopefully this comic gets posted sometime... either that or my computer went bonkers and I can't see it.
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Post by bryallen on May 23, 2006 11:10:46 GMT -5
I'm free of exams for the next two weeks! (YAAAAY!) So I'm free to do any reviews if anyone still wants them?
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Post by Nimras on May 23, 2006 11:21:46 GMT -5
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Post by bryallen on May 23, 2006 11:53:31 GMT -5
Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Treachery - Part Two by nimras23 Mareian is one cool character! I like Jeran's involvement in the plot too. Actually, I like all of the characters!! I had to go back and read the first part, but I'm glad I did because this is a really interesting story so far. It's well written and has a good pace. I'd say perhaps the first part had a slightly better pace than the second, as I thought it dwelt a little too long on the meetings, but I realise that was to do with Jevan and Mareian's character development really! Yay for thief protagonists. I can't wait for the next part! 
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Post by Kathy on May 23, 2006 16:10:11 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews!
Miss Earthwing by oldnavyfan10
Earthwing's lessons were cute. But there wasn't much character development. Overall though, it was pretty good.
Ezanna on the Edge by battlesunn
200 NP. I'm not working out exactly how much.
Good descriptions. Somehow, reading the story made me feel stressed. I think. I understood what Shelly was telling Ezanna about why he shouldn't worry about homework, but it didn't quite seem right to me (of course, I come from I place where I will eventually have to support myself, and where grades do matter). Keep up the good work.
Don't Cry, My Little Love by rainbow_daydreamer
It was sad. I like how Izzy gave Lynne all she could give her, it was sweet. It does seem to tie in well with the Starlight Invasion stories.
The Would-Be Detective: Where is Dr. Sloth? by silentbutterfly
I like the surprise ending. Although it is a little odd that everyone knew Sloth was being watched, who it was, and where they probably were, and yet Sloth didn't. The ending was funny, though. (But who in their right mind would let a snooper off for finding an avatar petpet?)
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Post by sunny on May 23, 2006 19:13:40 GMT -5
Ezanna on the Edge by battlesunn 200 NP. I'm not working out exactly how much. Whoa, it's actually possible to do? Heh, cool. (I know that it involves quadractics and stuff). Thanks for reviewing! |
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Post by Nimras on May 23, 2006 20:54:12 GMT -5
Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Treachery - Part Two by nimras23 Mareian is one cool character! I like Jeran's involvement in the plot too. Actually, I like all of the characters!! I had to go back and read the first part, but I'm glad I did because this is a really interesting story so far. It's well written and has a good pace. I'd say perhaps the first part had a slightly better pace than the second, as I thought it dwelt a little too long on the meetings, but I realise that was to do with Jevan and Mareian's character development really! Yay for thief protagonists. I can't wait for the next part! Thanks! Yeah, some of the parts later on kind of need that firm character development in place. And a lot of what goes on in chapter two is actually set up for the series I'm writing now. Because I have no life and do things like that. |
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Post by Nut on May 24, 2006 3:01:15 GMT -5
Thanks to all who reviewed my comic collab with Tyrannitar. ^^ Heh, I did that art many, many weeks ago, and it was an early foray into the world of markers. ^^; Thanks very much for the reviews, though! :3 Different light sources, indeed. o.o; Whoops. I paid less attention to light sources back then; now I'm trying to take them more into account. Thanks for pointing it out. ^^ I wholly agree with what you say about the cubicle. It's too... empty. o.o; I'll keep that in mind next time. ^^ As for the Shoyru's face, I meant for him to look determined, intent on his goal... but I see what you're talking about. ^^ And I'm glad you like how I drew Snowflake. =3 Nano? Roffle! XD She and her mallet got a brief paint job here.  And, the idea is that it was Whack-a-Staff Member.  Thanks for the review. ^^ |
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Post by the_darkjedi on May 24, 2006 11:28:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews everyone! I really appreciate them all - they are all very helpful in improving my comic strips. Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi I love the style. There isn't anything I would recommend, except that the two orange backgrounds on the bottom panels right next to each other doesn't look right to me. But that's probably just me. ^^Yup... that looks a bit off all right. Should've tried other color combinations. Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi - Ooh, look at all the pretty NQ characters . . . I just love the opportunity to draw the NQ villains... NeoQuest has a lot of really cool-looking characters. Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerieby the_darkjedi Favorite panel: the first one. The background detail on it is amazing. The only thing that kind of *tweaked* my reading was the third speech bubble, “Bah! Matters not.” It’s Yoda; good Jedi gone bad and painted himself red. Or maybe not. It just struck me as odd. I do like the Shoyrus reaction to their new armor. *grin* Thanks! I didn't think anyone noticed the little background stuff going on there. I love stuffing in as much detail as I could into my comics. Re: the dialogue... been watching too much Star Wars, I guess (caught red-handed... heheh...) Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi Awesome job on all counts. I'm loving that last panel. Thanks! Had a lot of fun drawing it! |
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Post by peri on May 24, 2006 14:43:01 GMT -5
Thanks to everyone who reviewed Meepit War Tactics! *hugs Suzuka* Welcome to the forum, sweetie! On to (my tardy) reviews: Shoyru Squadron - The beginning of the comic reminds me of "24" for some reason...all the computer hacking and interrupting and such And love the NQ baddies in the last frame. Waiting to see Terask in the next storyline. hehe (Congrats on the Random Contest win, btw! Recognized your art style right away ) DOOMed Adventures - ROFL! I love those pesky Meepits and that Chomby's expression in the last frame is perfect! Great job, love the art The Gallion Ranch - Shoyru's head looks a little small compared to body, but I love the look of both plushie pets. Joke is hilarious Sanity Obsolete - Ugh, I hate WASM...can never whack enough of them for that av Cute joke! Notions & Nonsense - heehee It really does sound like an argument siblings would have. I love Plessi's expression in the last frame Best Insurance - LOL! Gotta love those Meepits! I like the broken eggs on the counter detail. All of the characters' expressions are fitting, great job as usual! Never Trust a Lawyerbot - Cute idea I think I might have changed the SHH to the Lawyerbot jumps up and steals the nps though, just to show he took over their job Can't wait to see the next one! And congrats to the other NTWF Random Contest winners! I recognized quite a few names and characters |
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Post by Huntress on May 24, 2006 15:26:21 GMT -5
Thanks to all who commented on my comic :3 You rock. *hands out chocolate muffins* Infact, you guys all rock ^^ *hands out muffins to everyone* Infact, the Grarrls in the comic were supposed to be more like mafia, not salesmen but then again, that's pretty much the same, eh? x3
It's been a while since I read short stories (or reviewed them) so let's see...
Miss Earthwing: aw, such a nice story ^^ One of those casual smoothly-running stories I've always liked to read. The descriptions of Earthwing's drawings were awesome. The end was left hanging though... didn't really feel like an ending at all. A sequel would indeed be great.
Ezanna on Edge: am I glad that school's over for me. That story reminded me of my last spring break though I didn't take it as drastically... actually I still have two highschool finals coming up and I should be studying like crazy but I'm just too lazy for that. I still have time for that.
...and that was pretty much the point of the story, eh? xD Gotta say that I love your descriptive style. I could imagine everything very well as the story went on. Great ending too.
Half past eleven in the evening here and my brain can't take much more reviewing... x.x I'll try and carry on tomorrow.
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Post by Cara has gone insane again on May 25, 2006 8:39:41 GMT -5
Hurray! The Face Behind the Dancer is now held over to Neopian Times! Hail to Queen Kari! XDD
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Post by Deleted on May 26, 2006 15:12:02 GMT -5
I <3ed 'Miss Earthwing'! It was so so cute and funny as well Well done Navy. Patjade's comic is also very cool. 8) |
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Ehhh, Dwennon's a guy....the EGSROD strikes in the NT! 
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