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Post by Deleted on Feb 23, 2006 19:45:49 GMT -5
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Post by Kat on Feb 23, 2006 19:51:58 GMT -5
GASPETH. EGADS.
Heh, part 8 of "A Hero's Journey" is in need of reviews, and they would be so appreciated. ^_^
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Post by Psycho on Feb 23, 2006 20:01:47 GMT -5
Yes, the news has been coming out a day earlier all this week. If I weren't so lazy, I'd do the math and tell you what time zone TNT is trying to accomodate this time. I'm taking review requests, that is, if you want them from me  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 23, 2006 20:02:45 GMT -5
What is THIS then?  www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=187264&issue=229Should I be honoured or outraged? Or should I just say "Alas - I have no patent on the name "Mootix Madness"" <_< >_> I think I'll just feel happy ^^ happy that someone noticed my comic enough to make a comic about my comic xD Anyways - I'll review comics for those who wish a review  |
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Post by Kat on Feb 23, 2006 20:10:50 GMT -5
COMICS! Wh00t!
Spooky by Ghostkomorichu
As usual, the art is not too flamboyant and yet very well-done, and the joke was funny, even though it took me a while to get it. *slow XD*
Typing Terror - Literally by aimeilee
The Grundo looks a tad too round, but the punchline is simple and straight to the point, as any one-paneled comic is supposed to be.
Any more comics? I give short reviews though. ^^;
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Post by Ginz ❤ on Feb 23, 2006 20:16:47 GMT -5
I searched the username in the NT and it seems the artist does like existing comics parodies (that's the best name I can think of) They did "Disadvantages of a Pink Lenny" before, which looks like immortalmina's The Missadventures Of A Pink Lenny. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 23, 2006 20:18:24 GMT -5
I searched the username in the NT and it seems the artist does like existing comics parodies (that's the best name I can think of) They did "Disadvantages of a Pink Lenny" before, which looks like immortalmina's The Missadventures Of A Pink Lenny. I just noticed that as well. I just got all.... well... my pulse excelerated a bit, because I didn't know what to think xD But now I just feel honoured ^^ ... but he could've asked. Y'know? |
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Post by Kat on Feb 23, 2006 20:45:54 GMT -5
I searched the username in the NT and it seems the artist does like existing comics parodies (that's the best name I can think of) They did "Disadvantages of a Pink Lenny" before, which looks like immortalmina's The Missadventures Of A Pink Lenny. I just noticed that as well. I just got all.... well... my pulse excelerated a bit, because I didn't know what to think xD But now I just feel honoured ^^ ... but he could've asked. Y'know? True, the artist could've asked for your permission, or let you know. |
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Post by Belle on Feb 23, 2006 20:51:16 GMT -5
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Post by Belle on Feb 23, 2006 20:53:38 GMT -5
And, I am so loving the custom pic my story got. ^^ Meh Xweetok is so pretty.  |
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Post by Belle on Feb 23, 2006 20:56:12 GMT -5
What is THIS then? www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=187264&issue=229Should I be honoured or outraged? Or should I just say "Alas - I have no patent on the name "Mootix Madness"" <_< >_> I think I'll just feel happy ^^ happy that someone noticed my comic enough to make a comic about my comic xD Anyways - I'll review comics for those who wish a review I kind of liked it. It would've been nice if the author asked beforehand, though, and did something like "Inspired by...". *shrug* |
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Post by Strife on Feb 23, 2006 22:20:03 GMT -5
Wow, the NT is out a day early this time...
Anyhoo, reviews of my friend's story, The Kreludan Conspiracy by Azellica would be appreicated. I really enjoyed the sudden plot twist at the end of this latest chapter.
I have a question though... recently, Azellica's accounts were unjustly frozen. Will the rest of her story be published despite this fact?
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Post by Psycho on Feb 23, 2006 22:26:09 GMT -5
Aw, that story made me feel so warm. Clean, pure, altogether refreshing. Good feelings - great work Belle! I especially liked the limited third person POV of the petpet. Aw, and the love of young neopets - *sighsmile* |
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Post by Belle on Feb 23, 2006 22:49:53 GMT -5
Aw, that story made me feel so warm. Clean, pure, altogether refreshing. Good feelings - great work Belle! I especially liked the limited third person POV of the petpet. Aw, and the love of young neopets - *sighsmile* Thank you so much for the review. ^^ *glomps* More reviews still appreciated. |
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Post by Retired Blub on Feb 24, 2006 1:57:05 GMT -5
The Tale of a Petty Thief: Part One by shadowcristalTo be honest, I enjoyed the first part of this interesting series, but it had its apperent flaws. The first is the rapid pace of the introduction. When we are told that the Kougra's parents left him, I didn't feel any sympathy for him, simply because I knew nothing about him, so there was no connection. The reasoning for his parents departure is also very confusing, and I found myself scratching my head at some points. As well, his meeting with the 'dangerous beauty' was very bizarre. We are never told what species she is, so it's like a blank image in your mind. The first encounter with Astralis was interesting and I felt the friendship that these two had and almost felt like this was a mother figure for the Kougra. It was very sweet and touching. When they were in the library, I found it odd that you said, 'She was even nice enough to show me a secret story that was hidden in one of the pages.' I don't really understand. How is it secret if it's in the book? I love the way that you potray Astralis. You can tell she's wise for her age and has wonderful qualities about her, such as patience and kindness. You take the time to show her personality and I'm looking forward to determine her outcome. The Kougra, however, was someone that I didn't care too much for. Like I said before, I just don't know a lot about him. Even though his life is supposed to be all mysterious, we should at least have a feeling of his personality, which is something I felt you were lacking. The Kougra's break-in seemed unbeliavable to me. It seems too contrived that there was Space Station security system at the time. And I somehow found myself doubting that anyone would leave such expensive valuables on a table for anyone to take. The realism just wasn't there. A thing that I do admire about your submissions is your writing. Even though there are flaws in your plot, your descriptions and choice of words never cease to amaze me. You have the talent to make images flow effortlessely in the mind, which is why I look forward to reading your pieces. Overall, this was a good, solid first part. It's not near any of your great pieces, but it's an interesting read, and I do plan on reading the second part to see the outcomes of the characters. There's room for improvement, so hopefully with the constructive critiscm, you can write an excellent series that I'll be waiting for.
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