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Post by Kat on Feb 17, 2006 21:36:15 GMT -5
It's...out? XD
Reviews for "A Hero's Journey: Part Seven" would be appreciated. ^_^
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Post by silentbutterfly on Feb 17, 2006 21:51:09 GMT -5
 I never got a chance to do reviews last week, so I'll try extra hard this time around (grrr...stupid tests) Any feedback, reviews, advice, etc. for The Search for the Tooth Faerie, any of the three parts, would be appreciated.  |
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Post by oddhatter on Feb 17, 2006 21:51:50 GMT -5
I would appreciate reviews for Sheep of Doom because I feel rusty and old and I'm not sure if I can actually write a joke any more(not that I'm asking anyone to tell me that I can)!
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Post by Dan on Feb 17, 2006 22:29:46 GMT -5
My shot at a comedic short story is out this issue. Any reviews for Of Rainy Days and Board Games? I've got cookies! EDIT: And while I'm at it: I would appreciate reviews for Sheep of Doom because I feel rusty and old and I'm not sure if I can actually write a joke any more(not that I'm asking anyone to tell me that I can)! I thought this comic was great. I loved the art and especially the coloring! Very different and unique. The joke was good too. More please! |
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Post by Kat on Feb 17, 2006 22:36:27 GMT -5
I would appreciate reviews for Sheep of Doom because I feel rusty and old and I'm not sure if I can actually write a joke any more(not that I'm asking anyone to tell me that I can)! Well, I must say that you haven't lost your touch.  Hilarious. And yes, funneh. Someone pinch me. I see a several NQII-related pieces in the NT. *pokes AHJ* IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! And three parts to go before I can wrap that up. *cough* Never mind. Not your fault. *pats her series* And I'll be posting some short story reviews. Pinch me before I forget again. |
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Post by Dan on Feb 17, 2006 22:37:57 GMT -5
I would appreciate reviews for Sheep of Doom because I feel rusty and old and I'm not sure if I can actually write a joke any more(not that I'm asking anyone to tell me that I can)! Well, I must say that you haven't lost your touch. Hilarious. And yes, funneh. Someone pinch me. I see a several NQII-related pieces in the NT. *pokes AHJ* IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! And three parts to go before I can wrap that up. *cough* Never mind. Not your fault. *pats her series* And I'll be posting some short story reviews. Pinch me before I forget again. Well, my story has a NQII picture, but it isn't about NQII. It only has a small mention of it. Kind of odd, really. Oh well. |
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Post by Kat on Feb 17, 2006 22:45:35 GMT -5
Well, I must say that you haven't lost your touch. Hilarious. And yes, funneh. Someone pinch me. I see a several NQII-related pieces in the NT. *pokes AHJ* IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! And three parts to go before I can wrap that up. *cough* Never mind. Not your fault. *pats her series* And I'll be posting some short story reviews. Pinch me before I forget again. Well, my story has a NQII picture, but it isn't about NQII. It only has a small mention of it. Kind of odd, really. Oh well. Never mind. >_>; Oh heck, before I forget...KAT'S UBER-NEARLY-FORGOTTEN REVIEWS! Of Rainy Days and Board Games by dan4884Ahaha, love the ending. XD *cough* Anyway, I found the idea to be quite a unique one, and even though I didn't exactly find it to be very funny, it was very entertaining. It wasn't too rushed, although the part with the persona suddenly deciding to take a walk was somewhat abrupt. All in all, an interesting read. (Y'know, your pic was the one that could have been used for my series.) The Fallen Faerie by rebornluthiaGood Lord, I grammar-checked this thing before you submitted, did I? XD Well, I'll just repeat what I've told you before. I liked the concept, and even though there were a lot of jumps from one scene/event to another (those '***' things), it's a great first piece. I look forward to reading more pieces from you, Cara. There's always room for improvement, especially on the pacing and flow of events. |
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Post by Dan on Feb 17, 2006 22:55:13 GMT -5
Well, my story has a NQII picture, but it isn't about NQII. It only has a small mention of it. Kind of odd, really. Oh well. Never mind. >_>; Oh heck, before I forget...KAT'S UBER-NEARLY-FORGOTTEN REVIEWS! Of Rainy Days and Board Games by dan4884Ahaha, love the ending. XD *cough* Anyway, I found the idea to be quite a unique one, and even though I didn't exactly find it to be very funny, it was very entertaining. It wasn't too rushed, although the part with the persona suddenly deciding to take a walk was somewhat abrupt. All in all, an interesting read. (Y'know, your pic was the one that could have been used for my series.) Thanks very much! The idea came from a family experience, if you can imagine what that was like. XD |
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Post by Huntress on Feb 18, 2006 12:56:13 GMT -5
The fourth part of my series, Treasure of the Caves, is out. Will I be stuck with no to one reviews again this week? >.> *pokes your conscious* I'll start reviewing as soon as teh List is out...
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Post by Ikkin on Feb 18, 2006 13:22:54 GMT -5
The fourth part of my series, Treasure of the Caves, is out. Will I be stuck with no to one reviews again this week? >.> *pokes your conscious* I'll start reviewing as soon as teh List is out... It kind of seems as if most reviewers prefer to wait until the entire series is out before reviewing... I kind of gave up asking for reviews because of that... But, now that my collab series with Schefflera is over, I think I can ask for reviews on it. Does anyone want to review Hubrid's Attempted Hero Heist? |
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Post by Star on Feb 18, 2006 15:19:21 GMT -5
Of Rainy Days and Board Games by dan4884
I really liked this story! It was a short, light read and was an unusual idea but you carried it off well. I found their characters perfect and made the story so much more entertaining. I liked the idea of a five volume instruction book and the ending was perfect!
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Post by Cara has gone insane again on Feb 18, 2006 16:18:03 GMT -5
Actually I will be happy to have reviews of "The Fallen Faerie"...since I have to try my second in story, Face Behind the Dancer.
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Post by Retired Blub on Feb 18, 2006 23:06:12 GMT -5
I'd love reviews for Shadows of the Sea. Please.
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Post by Star on Feb 19, 2006 15:18:49 GMT -5
The Fallen Faerie by rebornluthia
I got quite confused in several parts of this story and I didn't feel much understanding of the characters. It was mostly reporting what was happening, with not much feeling. And the story was quite long with a lot happening. However, you managed it and it was quite good.
Shadows of the Sea by blubblub317
I liked this! It was a easy read but I still managed to get the full effect of the characters and I really felt sympathy for Caylis! It had a sad but good ending as well!
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Post by Strife on Feb 19, 2006 16:50:11 GMT -5
Hello all. Sorry I haven't been active. Anyway, I was both suprised and proud when Azellica, the co-owner of my guild, successfully published her five-part story The Kreludan Conspiracy into this week's issue of the Times. Reviews for this story would be greatly appreciated; in the meantime, i'll see if I can get her to stop by here and say Hello. Anyway, two short comic reviews coming right up... Cloning for Dummes 101 by 0riginal_sin Heheh, the poor Grundo... That's what you get for trusting the Master. The comic as a whole looks really neat and professional, despite the use of pre-existing Neopets images. Why Sloth "Loves" Usukis by spongebobfan484 I had a feeling something like this would be done to poke fun at the Master. It's pretty clever and funny nonetheless. |
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I never got a chance to do reviews last week, so I'll try extra hard this time around (grrr...stupid tests)
neo username - dan4884 
