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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2005 15:30:43 GMT -5
Any reviews for Never Wish to Fly: Part Five would be greatly appreciated!  ! Yay, I got the quote of the week! That's interesting, since last week it was someone ELSE in my guild... Ha, my guild has secret plans to take over the Neopi-*claps hand over mouth* I never said anything! Muaha. www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=131196&issue=213 |
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Post by Tiger on Oct 21, 2005 16:14:54 GMT -5
Those Nutty Neopians XD Nice joke! Good artwork too!!
Sanity Obsolete YAY SIBLING RIVALRY!!...I mean, be kind to your siblings. *Nods
wisely* Ahem. Nice color and shading! Good job!!
Lack Of Inspiration Well, first off, I'd like to say that I love your description.
The part where she's immaging the red for blood and purple for bruises was awesome. I'm
really confused about the Lupes, though, and I was surprised at how abruptly the story ended
,and with no real solution to the problem. Nice job!
Don't Eat Sloth's Fish! XD Awesome conspiracy! Everything fits! You're definatly
right about the sandwhichfish, and the FaerieQueenDollfish. Excellent article!
MORE Happy Home Hunting Well, this was a fun article! I think I read the other one,
actually. Anywho, I like Fox's pesimisim (I know I spelled that wrong...), and Fj0rd's
responses. NIce collab!
Now, review The Storm Cloud or Avalon, or...or...or ELSE!! PSHA!!!
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Post by Tashni on Oct 21, 2005 17:02:38 GMT -5
The Storm Cloud - Very nice. The imagery was good, but could have been better. I would have liked to be even more in Storm's place, particularly while he was on the ocean during the storm. The action was also written well. You wrote the pirate-speak well, it wasn't confusing. I just might start reading your series!
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Post by Tiger on Oct 21, 2005 17:10:37 GMT -5
The Storm Cloud - Very nice. The imagery was good, but could have been better. I would have liked to be even more in Storm's place, particularly while he was on the ocean during the storm. The action was also written well. You wrote the pirate-speak well, it wasn't confusing. I just might start reading your series! Yay! A review!!! Thanks! You get a lot more of Storm's pirate stuff in the series, btw  |
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Post by monarchistknight on Oct 21, 2005 18:25:16 GMT -5
I'll be writing a few article reviews later. Several great pieces this week!
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Post by hmlanden on Oct 21, 2005 18:30:45 GMT -5
Lack Of Inspiration Well, first off, I'd like to say that I love your description. The part where she's immaging the red for blood and purple for bruises was awesome. I'm really confused about the Lupes, though, and I was surprised at how abruptly the story ended ,and with no real solution to the problem. Nice job! This was one of my worst short stories ever.  There's going to be a sequel quite soon in order to remedy some of those problems....believe me, there's more to it than it sounds. |
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Post by Tiger on Oct 21, 2005 18:31:51 GMT -5
Lack Of Inspiration Well, first off, I'd like to say that I love your description. The part where she's immaging the red for blood and purple for bruises was awesome. I'm really confused about the Lupes, though, and I was surprised at how abruptly the story ended ,and with no real solution to the problem. Nice job! This was one of my worst short stories ever. There's going to be a sequel quite soon in order to remedy some of those problems....believe me, there's more to it than it sounds. Ooo, I look forward to it! It really was a good story, I just wasn't sure about some things. |
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Post by Nut on Oct 21, 2005 19:19:44 GMT -5
Thank you so much for the review, Tiger! ;D *gives cookies* To Tiger and Puppy: I reviewed your series on the Issue 212 board, if you're wondering. Sorry it took me so long!  |
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Post by Plushie on Oct 21, 2005 19:49:12 GMT -5
Any reviews for Never Wish to Fly: Part Five would be greatly appreciated! ! Yay, I got the quote of the week! That's interesting, since last week it was someone ELSE in my guild... Ha, my guild has secret plans to take over the Neopi-*claps hand over mouth* I never said anything! Muaha. www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=131196&issue=213Congrats on QotW! Humour and about world domination; that's my kind of quote of the week. *wink* |
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Post by actresstobe17 on Oct 21, 2005 19:54:53 GMT -5
Hey... Reviews for What started as a day on Terror Mountain greatly appriciated!!!!!!!
-xx
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2005 22:15:55 GMT -5
Thank you so much for the review, Tiger! ;D *gives cookies* To Tiger and Puppy: I reviewed your series on the Issue 212 board, if you're wondering. Sorry it took me so long! Thank you, I just saw that! Congrats on QotW! Humour and about world domination; that's my kind of quote of the week. *wink* Thanks ;D. Humor is always good, and so is world domination! Which I have never tried. *shifty eyes* I'll do some reviews tomorrow, but I'm tired now and have to get off.
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Post by Tiger on Oct 23, 2005 15:42:58 GMT -5
IWhat Started As A Day In Terror Mountain- Interesting observation! It's wierd that there're no other issues of our beloved NT. The article seemed very disconected, thought. One minute, you were talking about goals and the book award, so I assumed that was what the article would be about. But then you moved to Issue 3 stuff, and then it sounded like you were going on a tangent about your pets, and then the petpets. It was a good article, but try and keep it a little more focused next time.
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Post by Star on Oct 23, 2005 15:53:48 GMT -5
Lack of Inspiration by hmlanden
This was a good story - good descriptions etc. My favourite part was the bit where she imagined herself in different colours. It was a good story (as I've said before) but I don't really get the plot...or the ending...It wasn't really solved. And I got very confused with the Lupes - were they good? Bad? But it was a good story nevertheless. =D
The Storm Cloud by cpmtiger
This was very funny! Seriously!(I know I shouldn't be comparing to films and something outside of Neopets but it Captain Storm reminded me of Jack Sparrow from Pirates of the Carribean!) It kept me reading the whole story without once getting bored. I like Captain Storm's character! Everything was clear and I liked the imagery. The fight was really well described! I doubt I could've made a fight scene so exciting! =D
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Post by Tiger on Oct 23, 2005 15:55:29 GMT -5
The Storm Cloud by cpmtiger This was very funny! Seriously!(I know I shouldn't be comparing to films and something outside of Neopets but it Captain Storm reminded me of Jack Sparrow from Pirates of the Carribean!) It kept me reading the whole story without once getting bored. I like Captain Storm's character! Everything was clear and I liked the imagery. The fight was really well described! I doubt I could've made a fight scene so exciting! =D Yay! That's who I based Captain Storm on!! *Cheers* I'm glad it kept you from falling asleep  Thanks for the review! *Decides to write more short stories* |
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Post by Star on Oct 23, 2005 15:57:06 GMT -5
Yay! I'm glad you based it on him because it made it all the better and funnier! And yes you must write more short stories!!
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! Yay, I got the quote of the week! That's interesting, since last week it was someone ELSE in my guild... Ha, my guild has secret plans to take over the Neopi-*claps hand over mouth* I never said anything! Muaha.
There's going to be a sequel quite soon in order to remedy some of those problems....believe me, there's more to it than it sounds.
