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Post by Ikkin on Jan 14, 2007 18:03:55 GMT -5
I'll give them maw, though it's not really a muzzle. If you want to use it once or twice for effect, it'll work, but not all the time. Optics and Orbs for eyes, though, just don't flow.  *grump* fine, fine, I'll give 'em maw... *grumbles* Optics always makes me laugh though XD I always think "glasses!" They still overuse/misuse it, though. Most of the time when I've seen it used (outside of wolfspeak) it's usually when someone's practically looking down the throat of an animal who wants them for dinner. |
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Post by Scar on Jan 14, 2007 18:04:18 GMT -5
I'll give them maw, though it's not really a muzzle. If you want to use it once or twice for effect, it'll work, but not all the time. Optics and Orbs for eyes, though, just don't flow. *grump* fine, fine, I'll give 'em maw... *grumbles* Optics always makes me laugh though XD I always think "glasses!" Actually they DO mean glasses. Or binoculars, whatever |
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Post by Ebil on Jan 14, 2007 18:05:47 GMT -5
*grump* fine, fine, I'll give 'em maw... *grumbles* Optics always makes me laugh though XD I always think "glasses!" Actually they DO mean glasses. Or binoculars, whatever I know, that's why I find it hilarious when someone's using them to refer to their character's eyes. |
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Post by Fj0rd on Jan 14, 2007 18:06:09 GMT -5
Hiii.
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Post by Thundy on Jan 14, 2007 18:09:07 GMT -5
Hello all ^__^
*is writing the design brief for the Airship*
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Post by Tirilia on Jan 14, 2007 18:11:50 GMT -5
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Post by Scar on Jan 14, 2007 18:12:08 GMT -5
Actually they DO mean glasses. Or binoculars, whatever I know, that's why I find it hilarious when someone's using them to refer to their character's eyes. Y'know, I'm pretty sure Fj0rd and the other good writers out there use eyes too -__- Being descriptive doesn't mean you need a thesaurus *nods* |
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Post by Dan on Jan 14, 2007 18:15:35 GMT -5
No takers for the concrit? XD Didn't think so. ^_^
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Post by Ebil on Jan 14, 2007 18:15:48 GMT -5
OH YEA! ITSY GOT PUBLISHED. Finally! I knew she'd do well in the times. I loved her plot spoofs sooo much ^^ she was nice, too.
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Post by Scar on Jan 14, 2007 18:18:24 GMT -5
No takers for the concrit? XD Didn't think so. ^_^ Heh, I've done worse but no thanks, Dan xD Unless the parts are around 2k each x3 |
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Post by Fj0rd on Jan 14, 2007 18:19:35 GMT -5
I know, that's why I find it hilarious when someone's using them to refer to their character's eyes. Y'know, I'm pretty sure Fj0rd and the other good writers out there use eyes too -__- Being descriptive doesn't mean you need a thesaurus *nods* ... yeah. I use 'eyes' to describe eyes. Whodathunk. |
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Post by Dan on Jan 14, 2007 18:19:56 GMT -5
No takers for the concrit? XD Didn't think so. ^_^ Heh, I've done worse but no thanks, Dan xD Unless the parts are around 2k each x3 They're actually less. XD I didn't plan very well. ^_^; But it's ok. I understand y'all are busy and I think I need to edit it first anyways. I'll ask around later. |
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Post by Fj0rd on Jan 14, 2007 18:19:58 GMT -5
No takers for the concrit? XD Didn't think so. ^_^ The which now? >.> ...I'm sure it's beautiful whatever it is. |
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Post by Tirilia on Jan 14, 2007 18:21:02 GMT -5
:* Well done dan, its great! *only read the first few paragraphs*
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Post by Dan on Jan 14, 2007 18:21:16 GMT -5
No takers for the concrit? XD Didn't think so. ^_^ The which now? >.> ...I'm sure it's beautiful whatever it is. No, I wanted someone to read my series that I've just finished. But I decided it needed my editing first. ^^ |
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