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Post by aerisangel01 on Dec 12, 2002 15:42:31 GMT -5
I have a little idea for a comic! Here it is:
Pannel 1: A neopets(Any kind, but not the color green) give a dung furniture to Illusen, Illusen give him an Illusen cream cookie.
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Illusen: Thank you very much!
Pannel 2: The neopets eat the cookie.
Text:
Neopets: That's nothing, but what did you do with these dung furniture?
Illusen: Well... Herm.. you see...
Pannel 3: The neopets look inside the home of Illusen and see that all the furniture are dung furniture, he also saw cream cookie in a dung table.
(no text)
Pannel 4: The neopets(who are green now) run aways.
(No text here also)
Pannel 5: Illusen, looking at the neopets.
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Illusen(thinking): I'm better to change my furniture....
What did you think of it? And can anyone will draw it? I only draw by hand and I don't have a scanner so... I had the idea when she asked me a Dung Reclining Chair! ^^
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Dec 12, 2002 16:25:52 GMT -5
It's OK...
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Post by Deleted on Dec 13, 2002 11:53:53 GMT -5
its cool, butv the gramar is all wrong.
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Post by Lappi on Dec 13, 2002 12:07:48 GMT -5
Yeah....... sorry, I'm not really in the mood to talk, but yeah, I agree with richiy, but it doesn't really matter. We can edit it some other time
Guess wut? I'm in the mood to talk!! HI!! HOW ARE YOU ALL!? ^^ I'm sooo happy!! Happy, happy!! Happy, happy! Happy, happy, happy, happy, happy, happy, happy!! ^^
Alright! Let's edit it!!... later.
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Post by aerisangel01 on Dec 13, 2002 18:41:46 GMT -5
its cool, butv the gramar is all wrong. It's because my first language is french.. or at least I think! |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Dec 13, 2002 20:23:42 GMT -5
We americans will help you edit
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Post by Killix on Dec 13, 2002 20:56:11 GMT -5
We americans will help you edit *throws a banana at you* not all of us are American... |
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Post by bludragn3 on Dec 13, 2002 22:08:50 GMT -5
I'm Forcastian!
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Post by spectrum on Dec 14, 2002 1:47:54 GMT -5
Well I've got heritage from five different countries but that's not the point. The point is his comic idea. Personnaly, I think it's alright, but it probably could be better. But, that's my opinion, not a fact. Besides, I prefer comedy more......... shall we say, slapstick in type. It's all up to you to send it in or not. Not us. (You like my little saying? I thought it up myself. Just an observation, really.  ) |
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Post by streamingblue on Dec 14, 2002 2:00:17 GMT -5
it is good, although if you want to get it in the times, you should try to do yoiur own artwork. i think readers appreciate the artist more than the writer
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Post by aerisangel01 on Dec 14, 2002 11:49:50 GMT -5
Yeah, but I can't draw it. As I said, I only draw by hand, and I don't have a scanner. So if one of you want to take this idea to draw it, I will love that.
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Dec 14, 2002 12:27:09 GMT -5
Yeah, but I can't draw it. As I said, I only draw by hand, and I don't have a scanner. So if one of you want to take this idea to draw it, I will love that. Do you know someone who HAS a scanner perhaps? |
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Post by aerisangel01 on Dec 14, 2002 12:35:19 GMT -5
No, I don't.
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Post by spectrum on Dec 15, 2002 23:08:36 GMT -5
i have an idea. Do either of your parents have a scanner at their office? if not, maybe there's one at your local library.
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Post by aerisangel01 on Dec 16, 2002 15:51:01 GMT -5
My father is a mechanic(I don't think it's the right word... darm French/english dictionary!), and my mother, well, do not have a job. And no, my local library don't has(?) a scanner.
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