aisha in wonderland!

[broadwayangel]

The clock on the mantle struck five.... Ailsha the Aisha woke up with a start.
She looked frantically around the room for Dinangel, her angelpuss.
"Dinangel, Dinangel?" Ailsha called "where are you?"
Suddenly she felt a soft rub on her ankles. She looked down and saw Dinangel, sleeping.
"Oh, you sleepyhead!" she giggled.
Ailsha,for the last two hours, trying desperatly to play solotaire without her sister helping her. It was ever so hard, and very confusing without the aide of her dear older sister.
"IM LATE!" a voice called
She looked around the room, scanning for the source of the voice. When she realized there was nothing in the room with her, she went back to playing solotaire.
"IM LATE!" the voice called again, only closer.
Ailsha turned around and in the looking glass above the mantle she saw a pure white Cybunny with a funny looking vest and hat on!
"Ohhh.... where are my paw covers?" she exclaimed frantically," I need them this instant or the Queen will NEVER forgive me for being late!"
Ailsha looked wide eyed upon to the mantle. She couldnt belive there was a creature INSIDE the mirror!
She looked back up at the mirror and saw the white bunny, gazing at her himself
"Excuse me, miss but what ARE you doing?" he asked her.
"My question is the same to you," she answered wearily
"but what exactily do you mean?"
"I MEAN,"the bunny remarked," what are you doing over there? The Queen will be most upset if she finds you arent attending the games! Speaking of the games, I must be off! Farewell strange one!"
Then the funny thing ran off.
"What does he mean the Queen will be most upset if I do not attend?" Ailsha thought in wonder,"why is he even in MY mirror? That's just silly!"
She pulled a chair up to the mantlepiece and gave a quick look around. Dinangel was awake but that was all.
The aisha pulled her skirts up and climbed up on the chair, and then to the mantlepiece. She stared at the mirror and remarked, while putting her hand out,
"Why, its perfectly solid I dont know what that silly rabbit is talking abou...ou ou ou out....."
Ailsha had fallen through the mirror and into a dark hole.
"DINANGEL! HELP ME! I DONT KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENED! HEEELLLLLLLPPPPP MMMEEEEeeeeeee......"



That's it so far! I know spelling and punctuation might be rough in some spots, but hey, i think its going along pretty well! SOOOOOoooo....any suggestions on how i should change it? any character relation suggestions?
(as in cybunny=white rabbit
aisha=alice)
i need these people.....
mad hatter
march hare
queen and king of hearts
cards should be?? faeries??
tweedledee and dum
caterpillar
dormouse
cook
duchess
chesshire cat
dodo
duck
gryphon
turtle
(ok the last characters are NOT from the movie ...they are from play and book version)

[lupe]

Do you need like-- OUR neopets? You can use my lupess if thats what you mean...

[aztecarcher]

Queen of Hearts = Fyora the Faerie queen

King of Hearts = Coltzan..couldnt think of anyone else.

Duck = A Lenny or a Mallard

Turtle = Turdle or a Turtum

Dormouse = a Miamouse

Cook= The Chef from Mystery Island or Jhuidah the Island Faerie from the cooking pot.

Cheshire cat = a Kadoatie

Caterpillar = a Zumagorn, Blibble or Wadjet

Tweedledee and Dum = Mike and Carassa from the Igloo Garage Sale.


I hope this helped give you some ideas

[broadwayangel]

wow those are really smart, i espessaly like mika and carrassa that's a good idea!!!

[Princess Ember Mononoke]

This thread would probably go better under "Works in Progress".