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Post by poy222 on Feb 17, 2003 7:17:40 GMT -5
I feel abused or something... My "Behind the Scenes at Pet Spotlight" story didn't get in. I submitted it Monday. I think I'll go away and cry now or something....  Don't feel like that. I thought that story was very good and a great idea. |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 17, 2003 7:51:04 GMT -5
So many people volunteered to do this, I was kinda disappointed that only two of us did... anyway, you're welcome! Even if my art can't compare with yours... I felt the note at the bottom at least helped everyone know who it was SUPPOSED to be... Aww! Stone I LOVED the last pannel! |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2003 7:52:11 GMT -5
It was the funnyest!!!!
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 17, 2003 9:13:11 GMT -5
Rishy it's "funniest"...
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Post by sollunaestrella on Feb 17, 2003 9:33:28 GMT -5
Hmm...actually, I don't think I'm going to do article reviews this week. I think I'm going to try short stories...articles are getting slightly boring to do. I'll probably do short stories for a few weeks and then switch back to articles.
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 17, 2003 9:34:00 GMT -5
Hmm...actually, I don't think I'm going to do article reviews this week. I think I'm going to try short stories...articles are getting slightly boring to do. I'll probably do short stories for a few weeks and then switch back to articles. Hurrah for short story reviews Sol! |
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Post by aachewwthree on Feb 17, 2003 9:43:51 GMT -5
I'll do article reviews this week then. I'll start next post I guess...
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Post by sollunaestrella on Feb 17, 2003 10:22:15 GMT -5
Okay, here's the first part of my short story reviews:
The Anti-Battler in the Battledome by Carolina543—Well-written, but a little predictable. ‘Twas okay.
Beauty of Gold by rosey_the_bear—Eh, this was okay…it was just a little rushed and not altogether believable. Meh.
We’ve Been to the Lost Desert by poy222—Funny, but it could have used some editing. Overall, it was pretty good!
From the Case Files of Dark Night: Dark and Silver by 2hot4u181—Good, but it could have used some editing, and it seemed rather rushed.
Faerie Sorrow by rosella_destiny—All I can say is beautiful. A beautiful story…a wonderful description of the war from Illusen’s point of view.
Those Good Ol’ Smugglers by fly_guy7—Not particularly well-written. There was way too much dialogue and not enough description. This also didn’t hold my interest. This could have worked better as a two-part series if there was more description. This mostly told what happened rather than showing it, if you get what I mean.
Jelly World?! by gotenks_daughter—Eh, this was okay. I didn’t like it that much, especially because it wasn’t exactly truthful. You don’t need jelly bills or anything like that. Meh.
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 17, 2003 10:27:06 GMT -5
From the Case Files of Dark Night: Dark and Silver by 2hot4u181—Good, but it could have used some editing, and it seemed rather rushed. *blushes* Yeah it was kinda rushed. It was my pre exit thing... and when I felt I had to write once a week every week just to make deadlines. |
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Post by aachewwthree on Feb 17, 2003 10:41:12 GMT -5
Solutions to Lenny Conundrums 26 to 50:  Umm, No offense, but is there a real use for this article. I mean, since they are old solutions that won't be repeated. Jelly Chia, Destroyer of the Universe, Or Just Preservatives:  The title doesn't stay with the story. Zany Guide to Zurroball:  Very comprehensive guide to Zurroball. Very SPIFFY! $imply Garage $ale - The Rule$: Very helpful guide to IGS - The Game. Very SPIFFY! Hidden Tower Reviews 5:  Like I'm really gonna review my own article. Scamming In Neopia: How To Spot It, Avoid It, And What To Do After:   Very helpful, as long as the newbies read it. Heroes Of Neopia: Judge Hog: ;D Hilarious, simply hilarious. I'm still laughing. *Winner of the Golden SPIFFY* Love Is in the Air!: Very nice. Especially for those slackers who missed Valentines Day, *cough* me. An Ever Growing Neopia: This article makes it sound like Neopia is headed for Armageddon. Chill there noremac. Snow Wars Theories: Clobbering Santa The theorires are funny, but not much to do with Snow Wars Owning a Desirable Shop: Very helpful for those who need shop help The Troubadour's Guide to Writing The Perfect Poem It'd be helpful, if I had poerty ability. |
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Post by teghan62 on Feb 17, 2003 11:40:15 GMT -5
Hidden Tower Reviews 5: Like I'm really gonna review my own article. Okay then... Hidden Tower Reviews 5- Great for the people thinking about buying those items, it's really helpful! |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 17, 2003 11:45:52 GMT -5
It was good achew!
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Post by sollunaestrella on Feb 17, 2003 11:47:49 GMT -5
Last part of my short story reviews: No Peace at All! by unique377—Cute, well-written story. Star’s Dream by cuttie_pie1991—It was an okay story…a little rushed, though. It needed more detail and sentence variety. Super Chaos! by bluescorchio104—There were some typos, so it could have been edited a little more thoroughly, but overall, this was hilarious! "Muheeheeheeheehee!" Taniz the Vile Acara by battlesunn—This was good! It was original and well-written. Through the Forest by nyrhak—Okay. A little bit rushed, but well-written…overall, pretty good. What does Valentine’s Day Mean? by too_kule—Funny and well-written…but Neopets get school off on Valentine’s Day? Now, that’s not fair! _Viv_vindA_’s Story by halfling__elf—Unoriginal Pound story. Sigh. Well, it was well-written. |
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Post by TK on Feb 17, 2003 12:22:45 GMT -5
Last part of my short story reviews: What does Valentine’s Day Mean? by too_kule—Funny and well-written…but Neopets get school off on Valentine’s Day? Now, that’s not fair! Yeah, but in Neopia it isn't a commercial holiday made by Hallmark who are intending to destroy the world...It's funny that we're expected to buy flowers and chocolate the one day the stores jack the price up. And why can't we buy the flowers in June instead of January when it's so cold we have to get them imported from Brazil... |
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Post by aachewwthree on Feb 17, 2003 12:28:27 GMT -5
Okay then... Hidden Tower Reviews 5- Great for the people thinking about buying those items, it's really helpful! Cool! Glad that stuff is finally over though. |
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Umm, No offense, but is there a real use for this article. I mean, since they are old solutions that won't be repeated.
The title doesn't stay with the story.
Like I'm really gonna review my own article.
Very helpful, as long as the newbies read it.
