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Post by TK on Feb 16, 2003 19:15:32 GMT -5
Lol. My mom loves action movies. You should have brought us along! All I need is a Time Machine. *starts looking* The NT is out, that's good. I'm surprised I got those reviews from calvin and teghan. Seriously, I was expecting a lot less...but I think a lot of comic writers are. 45 minutes until Simpsons 300th episode!!!
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Post by Linnen Malfoy on Feb 16, 2003 19:18:45 GMT -5
...Okay, typed up my FIRST review and it died! Lets try this again... Best Stuff on EarthA cute idea, but I just didn't find it all that funny... Pets In The 'BoroHOORAY! MUtant Cybunnies ARE the cutest! And no, I'm not biased in ANY way! Not even for the fact that I own a mutant Cybunny! Nope! Bucky the BabaaHehe! I liked it! ^_^ Busy BabithNo bad, I liked it. ^_^ *L*O*V*E*Cute idea. ^_^ Faeries and Foes #17*Kicks her stinky comic away*Blarg! >P Got Neo?I once was reading up on layouts of comics when someone said that iuf you ever need to use arrows for the direction, then you've honestly done something wrong... It's to be continued, so I can't say much... Home Spun TailsI loved it when I saw it a while ago, Tahara and I still do! ^__^ Ig-no-rantI liked it! Simple and funny. Very nice! Just For KicksIt was cute, but possibly would have been better served it you saw the ball acutaly shatter the wall instead of just the after effect of it... Little Known Neopian FactsGreat one, Karma! ^_^ Look Ma, No ConscienceJack and Fnar! HOORAY! Great job, I can't wait to see what happens next! ^___^ Lupe CompanyI sort of got it, but just didn't see the humor in it. X-x; Maybe NOT!Already commented on it. ^_^; Neopia's TroublesIt was a good idea, but the last panel seemed a bit unnessiary... Pant Devil's Bad DayIt took me a few seconds to realize it was the Chia's hair, but it was funny. I thought that the part about Lisha's wand was a bit unessiary thu... Pteri DaysHehe! I liked it, I liked it a lot! Really ConfusedStoneman, I love this comic! I was so honored when you wanted to do mine! ^__^ Thanks a bunch! Shadow of a DoubtGood idea, but I just though that it could have been done..better The text was a bit hard to read on the something has happened part. Something Has HappenedHooray! Wonderful as always! ^__^ Travels In NeopiaHehe! Iliked it! Rowzez Are YummyWonderful art and punchline! I liked it! ^___^ Also, since Mister Pickles has been so nice to all of us lately. I though I'd review the news brief. ^_^ This week was very funny. The joke about the Esophagor stamp was corny, but so corny I was just laughing uncontroably (I think thats a bad sign..). The Lenny Day review was just funny, just great! I liked the jokes/total beatings. They were all in good fun. ^_^ Those were some of my favorites. I reallyed found this section the best. I pitied the Lennies after that. ^_~; (I found the note on the bottom the best. "Now the Lab Ray, on the other hand, well... ". Pure gold!)I like the part about the t-shirt! I need one of those now.. The author asides were nicely done in it. Not disrupting the flow and adding humor to it. ^_^ I really enjoyed the News Brief this week!
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Post by TK on Feb 16, 2003 19:48:07 GMT -5
Heheh...El Pickleitus really out did himself! It was hilarious, I hate Lennies so much. A new reason to read the news breif: written by a fellow lenny hater! Actually I was hoping Lennies would get a new look on that day, but since they were available in orange....curses.
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Post by tahara on Feb 16, 2003 19:55:37 GMT -5
Here go my comic reviews! Home Spun Tails: This is great! Coloured pencils Tahara? I used very light watercolors for this one. For a while there, I thought my comic didn't make it in.
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Post by Battlesunnn on Feb 16, 2003 20:03:11 GMT -5
Okay, here's what you've all been waiting for! Battlesunn's short story reviews! ;D As usual, they're given a score out of ten along with some comments. (Please bear in mind that I am a very hard marker, and I rarely give higher than 8.9. So, if you 7 or higher, it means that I liked your piece! I also rarely give anything lower than a 6.5) The Anti-Battler in the Battledome: I liked it! It was very cute and well written, and I would reccomend it to anyone who wants to read a good, original story. 8.7/10 Beauty of Gold: Kind if cliched', but overall it was pretty good. 8/10 We’ve Been to The Lost Desert: It was good! Nicely done, Poy. I particuarly liked the way that you did Coltzan. Very cute! 8.5/10 From the Case Files of Dark Night: Dark and Silver: This was, without a doubt, one of the best Dark Night stories to date. It was extremely well-written and engaging, it sucks you right into the plot! I loved it! 9/10 Faerie Sorrow: I've seen enough of these "Meridell Sadness" stories, and this one didn't really stand out for me... Still worth a read, though. 7.9/10 Those Good Ol' Smugglers: It was pretty good! Nice and original, anyway. Well done! 8.5/10 Jelly World?!: Nice! It was witty and fun, a good read for a rainy day. 8.5/10 No Peace at All!: Heehee, not bad! Very cute and fun to read. Nice work! 8/10 Star's Dream: A little confusing here and there, but overall it was pretty good. 8/10 Super Chaos!: It was great! Full of fun and the usual brand of Bluescorchio104 craziness. 8.9/10 Taniz The Vile Acara: Only two typos in this one, that's got to be a personal record. I was rather proud of it, though. So I'll change it's score from negative ten thousand to negative nine thousand, nine hundred and ninety nine. Through the Forest: Pretty good, a little tedious here and there, but overall it wasn't bad... 8/10 What Does Valentine's Day Mean?: Awwww! It was quite cute. Nice work, TK! 8.5/10 _Viv_vindA_'s Story: Great. Another one of these. Pretty cliched' and predictable, it didn't do much for me. 7.5/10 Hope I haven't offended anybody with my reviews, but if I gave everyone ten then it wouldn't really be a review, now would it?
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Post by sollunaestrella on Feb 16, 2003 20:06:10 GMT -5
I'll do article reviews tomorrow, probably. (Thank goodness for school vacation!!! ;D) Yep....
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 16, 2003 20:10:31 GMT -5
From the Case Files of Dark Night: Dark and Silver: This was, without a doubt, one of the best Dark Night stories to date. It was extremely well-written and engaging, it sucks you right into the plot! I loved it! 9/10 Woah... I was skimmin and I thought it said 'it sucks'... I had to do a double take. I had sort of forgotten about this story really. o.O The original idea before ending the series was dark to get a girlfriend... but I just need to be able to write about dark theway i wantt to. Oh well
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Post by evil on Feb 16, 2003 20:10:49 GMT -5
maybe someone should write a story about a young draconain not feeling right about what he's doing in the raid..or maybe this has been already done?
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Post by Battlesunnn on Feb 16, 2003 20:12:43 GMT -5
maybe someone should write a story about a young draconain not feeling right about what he's doing in the raid..or maybe this has been already done? Now that's an idea! Are you going to do it or do you mind if I run with it? I don't want to take an idea that you're planning on using, it wouldn't be very honest...
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Post by evil on Feb 16, 2003 20:14:58 GMT -5
naw you can take the idea Sunn..I'm sure it will be very good.
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Post by Battlesunnn on Feb 16, 2003 20:18:47 GMT -5
I would never say that a story sucked! Well... I might word it rather differently, heheh. Thanks Corpsie! I'll get on it later this evening. I'll also commemerate you in an author's note, what's your neo-usernane?
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Post by evil on Feb 16, 2003 20:20:07 GMT -5
evil__sakura its not really my main account but it's my account non the less
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Post by TK on Feb 16, 2003 20:45:43 GMT -5
Hey! Battlesunn, what did you think about The Ultimate Time Twisters Adventure part two? Expect two new characters next week...
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Post by Battlesunnn on Feb 16, 2003 20:56:55 GMT -5
Hey! Battlesunn, what did you think about The Ultimate Time Twisters Adventure part two? Expect two new characters next week... It's brilliant! ;D THe plot thickens... I like Methalius almost as much as I like Yoigo. Oooh, new characters? Give us a hint! What species are they? Evil or not evil?
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 16, 2003 20:58:12 GMT -5
I would never say that a story sucked! Well... I might word it rather differently, heheh. I said I was skimming... bad bad skim!
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