Post by moonandsun211 on Jul 16, 2003 13:22:54 GMT -5
I've been working on a story lately have been feeling sort of doubtful. In this story a staff member is a charecter (minor charecter... says about 2-3 sentances)
The basic plot is four kaus want revenge because of kau tipping and the used-to-be game kau korall. They want try to break into the Neopets HQ using a clever disquise (I won't give away the main details) but are discovered by none other than Mister Pickles. I don't want to give away th entire plot. Mister pickles would only say a couple words as he finds these odd kaus. Should I rework the story so it puts a neopet in the place of Mister Pickles? Or, may I leave it as is?
The basic plot is four kaus want revenge because of kau tipping and the used-to-be game kau korall. They want try to break into the Neopets HQ using a clever disquise (I won't give away the main details) but are discovered by none other than Mister Pickles. I don't want to give away th entire plot. Mister pickles would only say a couple words as he finds these odd kaus. Should I rework the story so it puts a neopet in the place of Mister Pickles? Or, may I leave it as is?
