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Post by smudgeoffudge on May 31, 2003 20:22:30 GMT -5
www.neopets.com/~smudgeoffudgeI keep trying to get a story in the times. The first time I wrote it, I called it Dr Sloth meets Skarl and it was about how Skarl was so grumpy because of something that happened when he was a baby. And with the help of Sloth and Boochi, he figures out what his problem is. This time I rewrote part of it and just put my krawk in it instead of Dr Sloth, but boochi is still there, and it is basically the same story. I am guessing that the problem with the story is Skarl becoming a baby. I thought maybe the problem was because I had Sloth in it, and I guess that Sloth is waaay overused in the times, so I thought I would put my krawk in it instead. But I guess krawks are kind of getting overused too maybe. But lots of people use their own pets in storys, so I didn't think it would be a problem for me to use my own pet.
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Post by TK on Jun 1, 2003 10:22:06 GMT -5
I don't think Felicia would reject something simply because it included a Krawk. And if any pet is over-used in the Times, it'd be Aishas...
The story is pretty long. Why don't you break it up into smaller pieces and make it a series? Or post it on the Work Reviews and Advice board?
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