Post by Deleted on Jun 28, 2013 19:15:54 GMT -5
Hi there! I don't mean to be a bother, Droplet, but I found a grammatical error in my story (But I Made Sacrifices) this week and kind of glaring in my humble opinion and I feel embarrassed that I missed it.
It is:
" No writers does until they feel a deep conviction."
should be
" No writers do until they feel a deep conviction."
There was also a tense issue, but maybe this could slide:
"They seem to be roving about somehow, even though they are locked within those cold metal irises"
Seem should be seemed here.
Sorry for the inconvenience, thank you!
Didn't realize I missed these!
EDIT:
"through the an inconspicuous crack in the ceiling,"
"The" should be omitted. How embarrassing. xD
It is:
" No writers does until they feel a deep conviction."
should be
" No writers do until they feel a deep conviction."
There was also a tense issue, but maybe this could slide:
"They seem to be roving about somehow, even though they are locked within those cold metal irises"
Seem should be seemed here.
Sorry for the inconvenience, thank you!
Didn't realize I missed these!
EDIT:
"through the an inconspicuous crack in the ceiling,"
"The" should be omitted. How embarrassing. xD