Plans for a new comic(The Neo Frontier)

[evil]

I've already made several strips of a comic I call "The Neo Frontier" It has somewhat of a cowboy atmosphere, and takes place in a vast wasteland of Neopia that has yet to be created into a new world. There lives wide variety of awkward characters. It stars a mangled plushie Buzz by the name of Boo trying his best to uphold a steel cold mercenary attitude.. But when you have a pint-sived owner living in your mouth, a vast amount weapons stuffed withen your body, and tendency to trip over everything. Boo is also tends to have a habit of meeting some bizarre characters such as this lupe with his "Broken image" weapon.
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Zannibar(sorry if this pic is a little too tiny)

[calvinseviltwin]

It's cool though. The style's unique.

[evil]

I want it to be in black and white..But also colored in panels where action things or shock is displayed..I tried it with the firs issue www.imagemagician.org/images/wesker/art/acomix.gif
(yet to have colored the others)

[Lappi]

Those are cool!

[Tdyans]

It's an interesting idea and nice artwork. I just found that comic a little difficult to follow, and also the lettering was kind of hard to read.

[evil]

gonna postpone so I can approve upon the lettering

[Lappi]

Okay, good luck!

[evil]

I'm gonna explain whats going on
What's happening is that two neopets..A Kyrii and a moehog are having a conversation about the neopet who is walking past the first two panels.

Kyrii: So your saying he went after the scum brothers?

The moehog answers him in the next panel which shows the Scum brother threatening our hero.

Moehog: the one and only

Kyrii: All by himself?

Moehog: yup

The next panel is in complete orange mode showing Boo beating up the scum brothers. While the kyrii and the moehog are still mocking him back at the tavern

Kyrii: I suggest a toast to this couragous yet very stupid neopian

Moehog: agreed!

the next panel shows boo draging the brother through the frontier while in the same time the kyrii is starting the toast

Kyrii: to the fool

Moehog: to the fo--(he is cut off by our heros entrance because everytime we open doors in frontier it goes Whoooosh!)

In the next panel you can see a couple of kids messing with the tied up bandits.

Boo: So are these guys worth anything or am I just gonna have to let them go?

Final panal is colored to show the shock expressed by the near-speechless neopets. (On a funny note you can see the moehog is spilling his drink)

[Deleted]

HE HE, cant wait to see the rest.

[evil]

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enjoy..