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Post by tango on Feb 18, 2003 5:31:56 GMT -5
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Feb 18, 2003 9:00:08 GMT -5
Hmm... It's a tad cliche imo... the story has been done before... and you need to make it longer.
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Post by thenoveliststrikes on Feb 22, 2003 17:32:51 GMT -5
[glow=cyan, cyan, cyan]I like your story. I think it's a very interesting idea. [/glow]
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