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Post by starhamster on Jan 18, 2003 13:57:22 GMT -5
Would anybody mind taking a look at this and telling me what they think? It's just a short little piece making fun of Neoschools (and my school too, I guess); it's just the intro to this class and its teacher, so the sequels should be even more interesting. Thank you!  www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1185360 |
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Post by starchild1 on Jan 18, 2003 14:07:14 GMT -5
Read it. Loved it. Need I say more?
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Post by pichuthegreat on Jan 18, 2003 15:41:56 GMT -5
make it a little longer send it too the times and that one is going in
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Post by poy222 on Jan 18, 2003 17:16:16 GMT -5
I read it, and I'm excited to see how everything turns out for Enti. I'm also excited to meet more of the class-mates and their names. I'm working on a short story with a Flizzardo named Zeef as a secondary character. It's a story mainly about a white Pinceron named Whiss. But I'll be working on sequels with Zeef as the main character if the first "Introduction" gets in the times. I got lots of ideas for Zeef. |
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