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Post by pichuthegreat on Jan 30, 2003 18:37:47 GMT -5
Hello have you ever wondered why there are so many chias in neopia. Now I bet you are thinking "What is this guy talking about" well you're right thats what you should be thinking but when this article is through you'll understand what I mean. Now for the conspiracies.
1.Mike and carrasa the game
Now have you played this game. You most probably have
Will right more later pressed on time bye.
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Post by Lappi on Jan 30, 2003 19:43:39 GMT -5
Lol. =P Goodluck.
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Post by pichuthegreat on Jan 30, 2003 20:56:20 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by pichuthegreat on Jan 31, 2003 7:20:38 GMT -5
Hello have you ever wondered why there are so many chias in neopia. Now I bet you are thinking "What is this guy talking about" well you're right thats what you should be thinking but when this article is through you'll understand what I mean. Now for the conspiracies.
1.Mike and carrasa the game
Now have you played this game. You most probably have right? Well if you really look at the game look at what Carassa drops things such as potions, dubloons, bombs, and pianos. Could this be an attempt by neopets to kill a chia, or could it be worse could Carassa be a mad murderer who wants to kill mike.
I have to go more posted later.
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Post by Lappi on Jan 31, 2003 8:32:59 GMT -5
Hello(,) have you ever wondered why there are so many Chias in Neopia(?) Now I bet you are thinking(,) "What is this guy talking about(?)" Well(,) thats what you should be thinking(,) but when this article is through you'll understand what I mean. Now for the conspiracies. 1. Mike and Carrasa the game Now have you played this game(?) You most likelyhave(,) right? If you really look at the game look at what Carassa drops things such as potions, dubloons, bombs, and pianos. Could this be an attempt by neopets to kill a chia, or could it be worse could Carassa be a mad murderer who wants to kill Mike(?) I have to go more posted later. Good, just stop using "well", okie?
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Post by felabba on Jan 31, 2003 13:08:27 GMT -5
Well if you really look at the game look at what Carassa drops(.) Things such as potions, dubloons, bombs, and pianos. Could this be an attempt by neopets to kill a chia, or could it be worse(?) Could Carassa be a mad murderer who wants to kill Mike(?)
You need to break the sentences up more. It sounds like you're saying everything in one big breath. Slow down.
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Post by Lappi on Jan 31, 2003 13:10:14 GMT -5
Hehe, yeah. And more punctuation.
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Post by peachifruit on Jan 31, 2003 14:39:53 GMT -5
Have you ever wondered why there are so many Chias in Neopia ? Now , I bet you are thinking , "What is this guy talking about ?" Well , you're right --that 's what you should be thinking --but when this article is through , you'll understand what I mean. Now for the conspiracies. (This is a bit of an awkward introduction. You may want to make it run a little smoother.)1. Mik a and Carrasa the Game Have you ever played this game? You most probably have , right? Well , (Lapin's right. Try to cut back on the 'well's) Take a closer look at this seemingly innocent game. Look at what Carassa drops --things such as potions, dubloons, bombs, and pianos! Could this be an attempt by neopets to kill a Chia, or could it be worse? Could Carassa be a mad murderer who wants to kill Mik a? (This has nothing to do with the topic of how many Chias there are in Neopia that you mentioned earlier, though.) There's my editing. All in bold, and commentary in italics.
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Post by pichuthegreat on Feb 1, 2003 7:52:02 GMT -5
thanks everyone
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Post by Lappi on Feb 1, 2003 11:22:06 GMT -5
Uhh . . . Arigato, then comes . . . O.o You're welcome. I've lots my Japanese, and I've been holding this post for HOURS. Seriously.
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Post by Rin on Feb 1, 2003 17:07:48 GMT -5
It is actually called Igloo Garage Sale - The Game
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Post by pichuthegreat on Feb 13, 2003 16:15:37 GMT -5
I'll work on this friday
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Post by Random on Feb 13, 2003 16:35:43 GMT -5
1. Maybe you should consider researching the topic before you start on it.
2. Calm down, dont just start a million stories- you'll get bored quickly (I've seen your posts)
3. ^^ Why dont you have a relative/friend help you with errors before you post- so you can give people like Peachi a break.
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Post by pichuthegreat on Feb 13, 2003 18:30:04 GMT -5
random I did research it.
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Post by Random on Feb 13, 2003 19:12:06 GMT -5
Doesn't really look like you did- you spelt their names wrong, and you called it, ' 1. Mika and Carrasa the Game', that's not the real name..
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