New Poem... Opinions?

[Alley]

I wrote a poem about one of Sloth's minions. What are your opinions on it?

At night as I lay,
My thoughts do stray,
To the one whom I call Lord.
I think of his might,
And smile so bright,
And how he must be restored.

‘Tis revenge he does seek,
To make all those weak,
Those who have done him wrong.
To conquer a land,
And make himself grand,
Grand ruler of the throngs.

I do ponder there,
For surely he will spare,
His loyal minions true.
Yes, for when he has come,
It sure will be dumb,
To have forgotten me and you.

Slothy, oh Slothy,
Come rescue me,
Your little Marky too.
I promise to be,
The best minion yet,
And I will always be true to you.

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