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Post by Sirius on Jan 25, 2004 14:14:42 GMT -5
She made this pic that I'd like you to review for her. Do you think a drawing she could make can get into the Art Gallery or even a comic? It's not colored and it's a quick sketch (she can do much better). What do you think? angelfire.com/ab7/jmr/images/sadgelert.jpg |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2004 15:32:00 GMT -5
It's pretty good! Nonetheless, the Art Gallery is dominated by colored pictures. Comics must have a good punchline and good art to be published in the NT. If your friend can make a nice colored picture, I'm sure she can create Art Gallery-caliber material!
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Post by Sirius on Jan 25, 2004 16:09:06 GMT -5
It's pretty good! Nonetheless, the Art Gallery is dominated by colored pictures. Comics must have a good punchline and good art to be published in the NT. If your friend can make a nice colored picture, I'm sure she can create Art Gallery-caliber material! My friend says thanks. She can color in the pictures, which she is working on now.  She's very appreciative of constructive critisisim. |
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Post by thegreenmooseofdoom on Jan 25, 2004 17:00:49 GMT -5
It's not bad, but it's an exact copy of an already-existing Neopets pose. If you wanted exactly what's on the site, then you might as well just print out the official pic.
The fun of drawing is coming up with your own stuff, your own poses and expressions and settings and character quirks- not falling back on 'safe' things that have already been done.
Don't be afraid to try new things!
And keep drawing, the more you draw, the more you'll improve, but don't be limited to just one style, pose, or subject matter. You also have to expand and try new things once in a while, it's a part of artistic growth.
There's really nothing here to critique, as none of it really represents how YOU draw. Come back with some original stuff, and we'll be able to help you much more.
So don't give up, and keep drawing!
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Post by Crystal on Jan 26, 2004 11:33:19 GMT -5
Well, Moosey said it all.
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She's very appreciative of constructive critisisim. 
