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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2004 21:55:32 GMT -5
 I have a minmni story to this, but it's on DA, and as DA is acting up currently, this will do for now. Anyways, it's a sitharian male who has the magic of a priestess inside him, so he claims the title of the first sitharian priest. This took forever and a day to complete >.< well more like two full days. |
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Post by herp14 on Jan 22, 2004 21:59:55 GMT -5
That look very cool... you seem to have gotten the water refraction of a bit, though it dousn't realy mater... I like the 'peacefully in thought' look you gave him. By the way.. arnt sitharians suppost to have translusive wings... but I guess since you invented them you realy don't have to worry about that  |
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Post by thegreenmooseofdoom on Jan 22, 2004 22:04:47 GMT -5
Looks good! Nice atmosphere, good solid inkwork, pretty good coloring- though I think it could have a tad more contrast and some more dark areas... it IS night, after all.  Your anatomy is improving, but you're still relying on the crutch of full-profile shots. While they do have their place in certain instances, for the most part, you want to avoid these as much as possible. It's not interesting, it's not engaging, and your viewer will get bored. Don't be afraid to try out some new angles! The hands are little off, and are also a tad too small. Another quick suggestion- maybe have the bottom of his robes darker to indicate wet fabric? Sorry, I had to type this quickly because I hafta go, so it might not be totally coherent... Anyways, hope it helps, and great job on the water reflections! I'm impressed! |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2004 22:06:40 GMT -5
Yeah. I was going to give him the translucent wings, and then I shrugged it off, because I wanted to try this... yeah.
I've never attempted water reflections before, so, this was just a test...
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2004 22:07:27 GMT -5
oooh, that's really helpful moose XD thanks!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2004 22:17:08 GMT -5
 I did a bit of touch ups quickly, but it really made things better ^^ Thanks again. |
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Post by herp14 on Jan 23, 2004 8:05:03 GMT -5
Yeah. I was going to give him the translucent wings, and then I shrugged it off, because I wanted to try this... yeah. I've never attempted water reflections before, so, this was just a test... It still looks very cool ;D By the way I was talking about water refraction not reflection... there very diferent....but I dousn't matter anyway |
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