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Post by sollunaestrella on Jan 12, 2004 19:13:18 GMT -5
Yeah... a random picture. As I said on the description there - it looked good to me on paper, but I noticed many more things wrong with it after I scanned it - such as the head being too big and not exactly the right shape (the curve of the cheek is different on each side... very odd....) But... yeah. Any sort of criticism is happily taken and very much appreciated!! www.deviantart.com/view/4674112/ |
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Post by ezrhide on Jan 12, 2004 20:46:57 GMT -5
Yeah, maybe th ehead is a tad bit too large, but not much. It looks really really good to me! Better than I could do anyway... lol, I go more with writing! Good job anyway!
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Post by sollunaestrella on Jan 12, 2004 20:49:42 GMT -5
Yeah, maybe th ehead is a tad bit too large, but not much. It looks really really good to me! Better than I could do anyway... lol, I go more with writing! Good job anyway! Thanks... heh, I'm actually much more of a writer. I sketch only as a hobby... I'm more serious about my writing because I think I'm much better at it. ^_~ I think.... |
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Post by Killix on Jan 13, 2004 0:12:35 GMT -5
Well...the head is kinda big....and her left eye is larger than her right eye...and her lips are kinda off center.
but that's just my useless opinion XD
Other than those very minor things, I think it's very good ^_^
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Post by Crystal on Jan 13, 2004 5:14:18 GMT -5
Well, you asked for my honest opinion, so here you have it.
It sucks. It really, truly does.
LMAO, just kidding. I've been playing that wierd joke in a lot of critiques lately...
So, actually it's quite good, but as you said, the head is a tad large, could use a little less of the top of the head, where the hair is. Also, work on the clothes and her right hand (the left is pretty good). The clothes look like silky, so should flow, the part she's holding up should be longer and be pulled down by gravity. Work on the skirt especially, a lot of the wrinkles look a bit out of place.
On the whole, though, it's very good. Keep on sketching and drawing, you'll make it someday.
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Post by aerisangel01 on Jan 13, 2004 7:50:18 GMT -5
Well, you asked for my honest opinion, so here you have it. It sucks. It really, truly does. LMAO, just kidding. I've been playing that wierd joke in a lot of critiques lately... So, actually it's quite good, but as you said, the head is a tad large, could use a little less of the top of the head, where the hair is. Also, work on the clothes and her right hand (the left is pretty good). The clothes look like silky, so should flow, the part she's holding up should be longer and be pulled down by gravity. Work on the skirt especially, a lot of the wrinkles look a bit out of place. On the whole, though, it's very good. Keep on sketching and drawing, you'll make it someday. Crystal, that's like not funny.. ¬_¬ I'm not able to see it yet, but when I'll be at home I promise I'll look at it! ^^ |
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Post by Crystal on Jan 13, 2004 10:23:54 GMT -5
Crystal, that's like not funny.. ¬_¬ I'm not able to see it yet, but when I'll be at home I promise I'll look at it! ^^ Were you being sarcastic or what? But yeah, my sense of humor is extremely warped. I don't think I'll do it again, though, it's getting a bit overdone. |
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Post by sollunaestrella on Jan 13, 2004 19:03:17 GMT -5
Thank you, everyone! ^^
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Post by Killix on Jan 14, 2004 0:34:59 GMT -5
But yeah, my sense of humor is extremely warped. I don't think I'll do it again, though, it's getting a bit overdone. I dunno, I found it quite funny XD....besides, you apologised and said it was a joke right after you said it....Or maybe it's just that we both just have a crazily warped sense of humour *shrugs* |
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Post by arti on Jan 15, 2004 13:33:03 GMT -5
thats very good! I like the clothes, the head is a little bit big... Other than that its fine. ^_^ I also have a crazily warped sense of humour  *points to left up corner* *GASP! Fold!* |
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