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Post by Kat on Sept 4, 2004 19:28:28 GMT -5
Coltzan: Death By Cheese by chocolateisamust and precious_katuch14 [/b] First, I must comment both of you and the article's title (that definitely caught my eye and my funny bone ). The introduction introduced the readers to the late King Coltzan in a humorous way, and I couldn't stop laughing when I read the acronym for the word cheese. All of the reasons were clever, and (no matter how crazy they sound) made sense as well; for all we know, cheese could've killed King Coltzan. Very unique topic since I'm darn sure that I've never seen an article like this before (especially since the list goes on to the negatives *chuckles* That sure made me laugh). [/quote] YAY! Thanks CT! ;D CHEEEEEESE SHALL PWN J00 ALL... Coltzan: Death By Cheese by cheeseisamust and precious_cheese14 (MWUHAHAHAHA!)From the moment I heard about this article, I knew I just HAD to read it. The sheer thought of Coltzan being killed by cheese is...stupifying and hysterical. Well, let me just say that waiting FOREVER [nudges Carrie and Kat] was so worth it. You have no idea! ;D The introduction was funny, the list was funny, and the conclusion was diabolically funny! Some of the reasons why Coltzan died were a bit repeated and simply re-worded, but most of them were just so unique and hysterical! Awesome job! Nice substitution of our usernames, Blub...that made me laugh! Anyhoo, thanks for the review! I'll review the Blurfs article and the Beaching article... ;D and more to come after that, hopefully...
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 4, 2004 19:29:05 GMT -5
=takes out broom= You'd better, Kat!
Just kidding! ;D Thankies!
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Post by Ginz ❤ on Sept 4, 2004 19:32:13 GMT -5
The Day When Nobody Wrote
by imogenweasleyThe overall idea and theme of the story was quite cute. I noticed quite a few grammatical problems and typos which chopped up your story considerably, but other than that I noticed no other problems. Good job coming up with an authentic idea...it's always wonderful for me to see something new insted of another pound story. And again, congrats on winning the Quote of the Week. Yeah... grammar is not one of my strenghts, I'll have to work more on that, I'm really glad you liked the theme. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 4, 2004 19:34:50 GMT -5
Yeah... grammar is not one of my strenghts, I'll have to work more on that, I'm really glad you liked the theme. Thanks a lot for reviewing! Not a problem! I really enjoyed reading it!
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Post by Patjade on Sept 4, 2004 19:59:19 GMT -5
Uhm..^__^ I don't remember my password to my Covergirl Tanemura account on here, but I figure since I got back into the Neopian Times I should rejoin! <3 Until my email isn't on the fritz, I wont be able to get an account here.. But, while I'm still in random-osity phase, would anybody mind reading, "Wings of Change."? Comments are appricated. Yes, I know..the plot is a BIT overused. But, I think I did it justice quite nicely. Email with the account info has been sent.
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Post by Patjade on Sept 4, 2004 20:02:47 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments on Frolics. I guess people actually GOT this one...
Izzywizard has been playing with different artistic styles lately, and also has been doing strips as she finds time. I may only have a strip every month or so, but I am not completely out yet...
On other news, the NTMI (Neopian Times Master Index) is now up to date through issue 156. Scriptfox has set it up so that I can upload the issue stats directly to the site, once I glean them from the issues. If there are any mistakes or corrections, though, I still need to contact him for that.
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Post by covergirltanemura on Sept 4, 2004 20:17:34 GMT -5
Email with the account info has been sent. Thank you! <33 You probably think I'm a total dork, considering I didn't see the 'REQUEST PASSWORD' button.. Haha. ^^; Another round of thank yous!!
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Post by Pooh on Sept 4, 2004 20:26:24 GMT -5
Anyone mind doing another comic review?..
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Post by Bitsy on Sept 4, 2004 20:35:19 GMT -5
Sorry, I don't mean to drag attention to myself, but I've only gotten one review for my story and NO fan mail! I'm so sorry to be acting like this, but I really need some motivation for my next story!
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Post by char on Sept 4, 2004 20:46:40 GMT -5
Review for Daughter of a Star Part One by shadih_temporary All I can say is... WOW! That is such an original plot! I only choose one series to start each week, and I'm glad I chose yours. One major flaw was that the nding part where Jane goes into her room was really rushed. Why would she go into her room and how did the photograph get there? Well, whatever, I still love your story anyway! Thanks much! ^^ And, the photograph has been under her pillow since, um, I dunno, forever, I guess.
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Post by redpen on Sept 4, 2004 20:49:52 GMT -5
ARGG! Char, I am really mad, I wrote up a whole long reveiw for you on Neomail and then I forgot to include a subject and the whole thing went buh-bye!
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Post by char on Sept 4, 2004 20:55:28 GMT -5
The Day When Nobody Wrote
by imogenweasley
I loved this story! It was excellent! Very nice imagination! I know exactly Yarellie felt. I would hate to live in a world without writing... that would stink... a lot... O.0;
Once again, great job!
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Post by char on Sept 4, 2004 20:55:42 GMT -5
ARGG! Char, I am really mad, I wrote up a whole long reveiw for you on Neomail and then I forgot to include a subject and the whole thing went buh-bye! Eek, that stinks...
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 4, 2004 20:56:22 GMT -5
Reviews for my article are yet again appreciated.
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Post by Bitsy on Sept 4, 2004 20:57:16 GMT -5
Reviews for my article are yet again appreciated. Uh, yeah...same here......Ok, I'm going go and read the Times for some inspiration.
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