A couple of 55-fics.

[Dream]

Two 55-fics I wrote. If you don't get the point of either of them, feel free to say so-- I want to know how good they are or aren't.

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The Betrayal


Liaisons without consequences, the advert screams.

After your night of romance at our agency, we'll scientifically erase your memory of it completely, for a guaranteed guilt-free morning.

Intriguing concept… though of course I'd never...

No. These liars need telling not to scam the public.

I stride in. The receptionist glances up.

"Oh, hello, Mr. Jackson!"

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Hope Lives


From heaven, he wondered what had become of her, that rebel student the Leader'd ordered killed. Until, one day, he saw her.

"You're dead, then," he said regretfully.

Disobeying was meaningless… after all.

"You speak my language?" she asked, delighted.

"Yes…."

"Tallal Nevia." An outstretched hand.
"President of the New Democracy. When I was alive."

[Torey]

I love your style of writing, but I don't understand these 55 fics. Perhaps you could tell me more about them on MSN ^^

[Ice]

I think they've got to be 55 words or under, is that right?

[Dream]

55 words exactly is generally the done thing.

[kittygirl]

I loved the second one. The first one I don't get the last line.

[Dream]

Kitty:

SPOILER: Click to show

How does she know his name? Unless...

[Elcie]

They took a couple read-throughs for me to fully understand, but I like them a lot. ^^ Especially the first.

[Dream]

Oh, thank goodness, the second one actually made sense to someone?

[kittygirl]

rainbowdaydreamer said:

Kitty:

SPOILER: Click to show

How does she know his name? Unless...

Oh. XDD I like it. But a little too subtle.

[Dream]

Bumped after almost a year!

Whiteout


The correction fluid bottle seemed to glow in her withered hand. The first spilt drop on the autobiography was accidental. Then, though, she felt a compulsion to keep erasing.


His death. Children. Their marriage.


"Grandma? It's Tony..."

Who was...?

The last words faded. The little girl flapped her wings playfully, stepping into the dazzling sunshine.

[Dan]

I like these! The first one you posted (from a year ago) and this new one, are really nice. ^__^ Cool concept, maybe I'll give one a try one day.

[Dream]

Thanks for the kind comments, Dan.

Another one.

Liebestod

She writes unimaginably beautiful murder mysteries with her friends as characters.

Ben took the world's most exquisite bullet to the heart. Lucy's final flame burnt brightly. Nothing could have been more bittersweet than the poison in the glass Rachel drank willingly.

Her talent thrills my soul.

But I remain alive. Because she'll never notice me.