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Post by Killix on Apr 29, 2009 12:17:13 GMT -5
If anyone's bored they can write up a critique for this.  Though I guess since no one has posted anything yet, that answers my question 'is it interesting'. XD In depth review/critique isn't my thing. XD; One thing that caught my eye was that you used a capital after an ellipses... and it looked odd. Not sure if that's improper, or not, though. XD but I will comment that I'd like to read more, it sounds pretty interesting. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 12:39:14 GMT -5
If anyone's bored they can write up a critique for this. Though I guess since no one has posted anything yet, that answers my question 'is it interesting'. XD In depth review/critique isn't my thing. XD; One thing that caught my eye was that you used a capital after an ellipses... and it looked odd. Not sure if that's improper, or not, though. XD but I will comment that I'd like to read more, it sounds pretty interesting. I understand. ^^ Mmm you're right. I'll try it with a lowercase. :3 Thank you! <3 I have a great plot idea, I just hope I execute it well. X3 This baby isn't just for fun, I'm hoping to get it published. =D Mmm maybe I'll type up some sort of summary like they put on the back of the book. And post it above the beginning. |
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Post by PFA on Apr 29, 2009 13:46:10 GMT -5
These 'bloids seem a bit on the dead side. XD;
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Post by Zylaa on Apr 29, 2009 15:27:40 GMT -5
Yes.
*shot*
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:36:38 GMT -5
Pretty much.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:40:16 GMT -5
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:46:13 GMT -5
*is messing with her siggie* How are you Sarn?
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Post by Andrea on Apr 29, 2009 15:47:55 GMT -5
Hey guys. ^_^
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:48:04 GMT -5
*is messing with her siggie* How are you Sarn? Drowning. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:50:19 GMT -5
Hey Drew. ^^ @sarn: Drowning?! Well let me fix that for you. We'll take out of the 'ro' and replace it with 'a'! Sarn is...dawning. =D |
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Post by Andrea on Apr 29, 2009 15:51:09 GMT -5
Hey Drew. ^^ @sarn: Drowning?! Well let me fix that for you. We'll take out of the 'ro' and replace it with 'a'! Sarn is...dawning. =D Hi Recklace, how are you? |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:51:58 GMT -5
Hey Drew. ^^ @sarn: Drowning?! Well let me fix that for you. We'll take out of the 'ro' and replace it with 'a'! Sarn is...dawning. =D Har-de-har-ha. How very amusing. *gurgles* |
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Post by Zylaa on Apr 29, 2009 15:53:04 GMT -5
EEEEE I has cute baby signature dragons! *tacklehugcuddles them all* <3
And I almost have a boat in VPN!
And I'm about to go home IRL!
And, um, YAY!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 15:53:52 GMT -5
Hi Recklace, how are you? Dandy. ^^ Just writing and eating and cleaning and bloiding. How are you? |
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Post by Andrea on Apr 29, 2009 15:55:28 GMT -5
Hi Recklace, how are you? Dandy. ^^ Just writing and eating and cleaning and bloiding. How are you? Great. Trying to find a new avatar  |
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