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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 2:51:25 GMT -5
It's... descriptive. XD
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 2:52:39 GMT -5
yeah. I was in a ... descriptive mood. XD. I was all "I like this word. It goes here now. Ooh. more descriptive words! =DDDD Yay!"
I'll probably change it later. xD.
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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 2:53:46 GMT -5
 I get into moods like that, too. I end up head-banging later when trying to figure out which descriptions to keep and axe. XD |
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 2:55:28 GMT -5
I get into moods like that, too. I end up head-banging later when trying to figure out which descriptions to keep and axe. XD I somewhat like it, but only because it's a bit out there, which my character is supposed to be like. xD. But it needs srs. revision. |
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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 2:58:08 GMT -5
The bones of it are good, though. <3 Just trim it a little so it loses the melodramaticness, and it's a nice descriptive paragraph. ^_^
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 2:59:31 GMT -5
The bones of it are good, though. <3 Just trim it a little so it loses the melodramaticness, and it's a nice descriptive paragraph. ^_^ xD. I wrote it jsut after I had been rambling madly. >.> How do you suggest I get rid of the melodrama xD. |
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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 3:02:04 GMT -5
Um, just trim down the adjectives a bit, maybe, and the similes? Except don't take my word for it since its 1am and I'm tired. XD
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 3:04:19 GMT -5
Um, just trim down the adjectives a bit, maybe, and the similes? Except don't take my word for it since its 1am and I'm tired. XD eh, I'll do when I'm more awake, ( and when there are more peoples to harass =D) |
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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 3:07:21 GMT -5
<3 HARASSMENT IS FUN.
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 3:09:51 GMT -5
Did I ever tell you about the skit I did on harassment?
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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 3:10:56 GMT -5
... maybe? XD *doesn't remember*
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 3:15:01 GMT -5
Um so I had to portray physical harassment (I was choosen, because no one thinks I can possibly hurt anyone. xD) and I was supposed to shove someone out of a doorway, but instead I ended up smashing myself into the door >.<;
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Post by Avery on Apr 29, 2009 3:15:47 GMT -5
That sounds lovely. Reminds me of something I would do. >_> |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 3:22:00 GMT -5
I found my pebble but didn't end up buying a tablet. The only one they had was way out of my price range so I'll try another store tomorrow. YAY FOR PEBBLE!
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Post by Tk ∆ on Apr 29, 2009 3:26:40 GMT -5
pebble?
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I get into moods like that, too. I end up head-banging later when trying to figure out which descriptions to keep and axe. XD