Your Last Sentence!

[PFA]

Tonight had been a great success on Auclay’s part.

Takeover successful.

*debates over whether to continue or to stop for the night*

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“You,” she started pointedly at the teenage boy, coughing a little and taking another breath, “you are never, and I mean never, cooking in this household again.”

He tried to tell you, Amber. You just wouldn't listen...

[PFA]

No one ever messed with Matryce Buro and got away with it.

Dum dum DUM.

[Shadaras]

“We know that you’ll want to come along, but I’d like to point out that Ri’s barely had any time away from your watchful eyes since he was orphaned.”

A surprisingly civil argument, this has been so far. I'm surprised.

[Bananas]

Perhaps there was some map that would show the way to the Well of Changes.

Unfortunately, there isn't. Too bad for them! They're just going to have to make their way through a magical and largely hostile forest. Hopefully there won't be too many casualties.

[Ebil]

She couldn’t hear anyone in the immediate vicinity – but perhaps they knew somebody was listening.

...no, actually, the person's unconscious :3 you have to go save her. Go, Seven, go! *prod*

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"He grabbed an apple and left."

Ooh, how menacing! >.>

[Kathleen]

They were like two halves of a whole: meant to be together.

It is not as cheesy as it sounds. It is speaking of a piano and its player. xD

[Omni]

They couldn't tell how big the range was, as they were viewing the mountains at an angle where they were lined up behind eachother.

Guess where they're going to go next.

[Rikku]

Right now he had to face a more complicated problem – namely, how on earth was he supposed to take an angry wolf onto a train?

How indeed.

[Jina]

And then afterwards and go out to his usual activities, the ones he enjoyed the most.

[Craig]

As Grant drifted to sleep to the sound of the pitter-pattering on the roof of the rail car, just a couple inches above his nose, he imagined the rainwater slowly joining into trickles and creeks and rivers, all of which, like the train that slid rapidly along its slick tracks, flowed into the endless sea of the unknown.

A rather long sentence to end Chapter One. ^_^ I'm really glad I finally got a reasonably good idea. Here's hoping it only gets easier from here.

[Tiger]

Nov 2, 2008 21:22:32 GMT -5 Kathleen said:

Nov 2, 2008 21:06:34 GMT -5 Tiger said:

...That's quite a run-on sentence. I'd like some fried chicken and mashed potatoes right now. Mm.

Ooh, someone named Tori? I find that cool. =D

XD It was the only name she'd take. My characters can be very stubborn at times.

Taking a probiotic yogurt break, so, this climactic little snippet:

Dimitri had picked up his fork and knife again; now he slammed the two against the plate, and shouted, “Mom, I can’t hide from people for forever!”

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And immediately she turned on her heels and sprinted for the other set of stairs.

Run, Birdie, run!

[Celestial]

Except this time there was nobody to force her to do something, no author to direct what way her life was going to go.

Little did she know. x3