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Post by PFA on Nov 1, 2008 20:30:36 GMT -5
She's got a point there.
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Post by Celestial on Nov 1, 2008 20:34:15 GMT -5
The ravens are not what they seem. xDDD
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 1, 2008 20:56:17 GMT -5
I like the line before that better, though. "We can always go back to the kidnapping idea, after all."
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Post by PFA on Nov 1, 2008 20:58:26 GMT -5
Little kids are always fun to write. :3
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Post by Omni on Nov 1, 2008 21:05:58 GMT -5
Eh, might as well.
…I think I punctuated that correctly.
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Post by Goosh on Nov 1, 2008 21:17:38 GMT -5
I know, I know, you can't stand the sheer amount of drama. XD
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Post by Kathleen on Nov 1, 2008 21:19:42 GMT -5
Epic, isn't it? =D I think my grammar's wrong. >.>; Must.. resist.. editing.. *slaps self*
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Post by Tiger on Nov 1, 2008 21:23:19 GMT -5
...Talking about the other MC's scar.
I can think of a better way to word that sentence...BAD TIGER! NO EDITING!
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Post by PFA on Nov 1, 2008 21:30:09 GMT -5
War games.
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 1, 2008 21:30:45 GMT -5
I wish I knew why Tuan referred to Adrian as Ri. Other than it being easier to type and say.
Edit:
That sums up most everything that has to do with Lucifer, honestly.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 1, 2008 22:56:04 GMT -5
I like this one even more than the last.
Ah, romance is so sweet five minutes shy of midnight....
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Post by Craig on Nov 1, 2008 22:58:30 GMT -5
One of three sentences I have written so far. At least I've finally started! ^_^
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Post by Avery on Nov 1, 2008 23:36:49 GMT -5
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 1, 2008 23:46:09 GMT -5
Not dialogue, for once. And that's the end of a chapter, too.
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Post by Zylaa on Nov 2, 2008 3:07:47 GMT -5
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