Your Last Sentence!

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Sammy, I know the feeling! XD

"Why's Beckinsale calling?" Sereni asked. // Pryce stared at the phone. "I have no idea, but I am about to find out."

[PFA]

And so it would rage on long into the night.

Rambly drama is good for your wordcount. :3

[Kathleen]

“I like your shirt,” Kanza said abruptly and smoothly, for lack of anything better to say, and because for once, he actually got it.

I do believe I just contradicted myself there. xD

[Omni]

Omni soon followed.

Yay, informative. </sarcasm>

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Sereni glanced back at his mother, his heart shaking inside him, but with the very next step, he turned away.

Ooh, late-teen angst!

And racist homophobia, but that's beside the point. :P

[Avery]

Nor would she until January 1st.

Fragment-y, I know! =D

... I wonder if a fragment-y sentence tastes MINTY! =D AHAHAHA.

*shot* Kay, it's past 2am, I'm gonna sleep now. >>

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From behind them, Richard looked up and smiled. "Would you care for that tea now?"

I'm not sure how they saw him look up if he's behind them, but that's okay!

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Everything fell to the floor in an orchestra of virtually every form of onomatopoeia.

The only time I will ever be able to use "onomatopoeia" in a sentence. XD

[Kathleen]

Not to mention the iron plates of the demon on the left (that was the one that got the full force of the oven mitt, and it looked extremely confused; fighting off oven mitts wasn’t in the job description).

It generally isn't. *nod*

[♥ Rain]

Instead of the pure innocence of youth, it was more whimsical and fanciful, the sort of smile that reminded Elizebeth of Alice in Wonderland.

People smile a lot in my novel. I sort of have to describe the different types. ....and um. >_> My lack of vocab is distressing.

[PFA]

“I mean, granted, it’s not like this journey will be all sunshine, lollipops and rainbows. But we can always take the time to remove our focus from the dark storm clouds and look at the silver linings, no matter how bad it gets.”

Whoa, rambly optimism instead of rambly angst for once. @_@

[Dice]

Really, though, I couldn't tell why Lust disliked her so much.

Alex, dear, you are just a little oblivious xD Jealous Lust is fun to write. Especially since he's not even the envious Sin.

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He smiled, turning away and waving for Lucien to follow. "Come now, let's get you dressed. You must be freezing."

I should probably give him something to wear during revision. He'll probably thank me for it. xD

[Trilly (18426 words)]

It was difficult to seem in control when you weren’t wearing any pants.

I'm sorry. I just had to post this one up.

Poor Emmet.

[Kathleen]

It was like…like a fish without water.

I'm.. I'm sure it was. o.O