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Post by Crystal on Aug 22, 2006 12:16:59 GMT -5
Rider, that's just too much plot-holes. It's really going to confuse people, and I don't mean in a good way. And it doesn't tie in with the Lycos-Crystal-Mindy-Rider thing at all.
What about, Meowth wakes, askes for people, and sees that not many people around. She trots off. And gets killed with that silver dollar while in human form. Can still keep most of the werewolf conversation, but might have to get rid of the balcony bit. And if you want to, we have to do it before people read her post.
EDIT: Although it seems that there IS moonlight....
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Post by The Wanderer on Aug 22, 2006 12:18:41 GMT -5
Rider, that's just too much plot-holes. It's really going to confuse people, and I don't mean in a good way. And it doesn't tie in with the Lycos-Crystal-Mindy-Rider thing at all. What about, Meowth wakes, askes for people, and sees that not many people around. She trots off. And gets killed with that silver dollar while in human form. Can still keep most of the werewolf conversation, but might have to get rid of the balcony bit. And if you want to, we have to do it before people read her post. Tracy copy-pasted your profile to mine, you know... |
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Post by Killix on Aug 22, 2006 12:19:37 GMT -5
Rider, that's just too much plot-holes. It's really going to confuse people, and I don't mean in a good way. And it doesn't tie in with the Lycos-Crystal-Mindy-Rider thing at all. What about, Meowth wakes, askes for people, and sees that not many people around. She trots off. And gets killed with that silver dollar while in human form. Can still keep most of the werewolf conversation, but might have to get rid of the balcony bit. And if you want to, we have to do it before people read her post. I could always stand in a hole in the wall instead of a balcony XD |
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Post by Crystal on Aug 22, 2006 12:24:27 GMT -5
Rider, that's just too much plot-holes. It's really going to confuse people, and I don't mean in a good way. And it doesn't tie in with the Lycos-Crystal-Mindy-Rider thing at all. What about, Meowth wakes, askes for people, and sees that not many people around. She trots off. And gets killed with that silver dollar while in human form. Can still keep most of the werewolf conversation, but might have to get rid of the balcony bit. And if you want to, we have to do it before people read her post. I could always stand in a hole in the wall instead of a balcony XD Or you could do that XDDDD Since Rider mentioned there was moonlight coming through, but Nimras and Wandy searched the place for ways out earlier. Maybe it's like... FILTERED MOONLIGHT  Rider, that's just too much plot-holes. It's really going to confuse people, and I don't mean in a good way. And it doesn't tie in with the Lycos-Crystal-Mindy-Rider thing at all. What about, Meowth wakes, askes for people, and sees that not many people around. She trots off. And gets killed with that silver dollar while in human form. Can still keep most of the werewolf conversation, but might have to get rid of the balcony bit. And if you want to, we have to do it before people read her post. Tracy copy-pasted your profile to mine, you know... Why didn't it stay like that longer? D: My profile was TASTEFUL. XDDD |
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Post by Killix on Aug 22, 2006 12:26:31 GMT -5
I could always stand in a hole in the wall instead of a balcony XD Or you could do that XDDDD Since Rider mentioned there was moonlight coming through. Maybe it's like... FILTERED MOONLIGHT XDXD I'll change the balcony to a giant gaping hole in the wall if you're so concerned. I could also just describe the balcony as being very very high up, and even mention it would be dangerous if I stood there too long. |
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Post by Crystal on Aug 22, 2006 12:39:48 GMT -5
Or you could do that XDDDD Since Rider mentioned there was moonlight coming through. Maybe it's like... FILTERED MOONLIGHT XDXD I'll change the balcony to a giant gaping hole in the wall if you're so concerned. I could also just describe the balcony as being very very high up, and even mention it would be dangerous if I stood there too long. See, my problem is that Spot and Nimras (I think) earlier specified that we were trapped in the Catacombs, which are underground chambers. The reason we're all still in here is because we're trapped and it's caved in. And then, Nimras and Wandy made a point of going around to all the exits, CHECKING SO THERE WAS NO WAY OUT. Given the wide variety of magics and stuffu, I think we could get out of a highup balcony or hole XD and it's supposed to be underground. Plus, Lycos just went squirming through vents just to get to the first hint of natural breeze she's seen in awhile. Not to dampen the fun, but best if you could stick to the idea that it's underground. We need to make at least a LITTLE sense. Moonlight could get in through a crack in the roof maybe? |
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Post by Killix on Aug 22, 2006 12:41:26 GMT -5
XDXD I'll change the balcony to a giant gaping hole in the wall if you're so concerned. I could also just describe the balcony as being very very high up, and even mention it would be dangerous if I stood there too long. See, my problem is that Spot and Nimras (I think) earlier specified that we were trapped in the Catacombs, which are underground chambers. The reason we're all still in here is because we're trapped and it's caved in. And then, Nimras and Wandy made a point of going around to all the exits, CHECKING SO THERE WAS NO WAY OUT. Given the wide variety of magics and stuffu, I think we could get out of a highup balcony or hole XD and it's supposed to be underground. Plus, Lycos just went squirming through vents just to get to the first hint of natural breeze she's seen in awhile. Not to dampen the fun, but best if you could stick to the idea that it's underground. We need to make at least a LITTLE sense. Moonlight could get in through a crack in the roof maybe? Didn't Rider say something about using the building idea earlier?  Anyway, I changed the balcony to a hole. I don't wanna complete rewrite of my story just because I imagined the NTWF as a building/castle and not underground D= besides, if it were underground, we'd probably all be dead from the earthquake. XDXD |
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Post by Rider on Aug 22, 2006 12:59:03 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]We're in the Catacombs, 'cause we need an Underdeep. XD
But yes, sorry for that whole go-ahead thing, I guess I jumped the gun and junk...
Wandy- You mean you believed me when I said Tracy did it? 0_o[/glow]
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Post by Killix on Aug 22, 2006 13:01:33 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]We're in the Catacombs, 'cause we need an Underdeep. XD But yes, sorry for that whole go-ahead thing, I guess I jumped the gun and junk... Wandy- You mean you believed me when I said Tracy did it? 0_o[/glow] who said the forum couldn't be a building+catacombs? XD and uhh...you don't need to be in the catacombs to have an underdeep I always thought of it was a very deep basement. like the floors go: floor 1 basement 1 basement 2 basement 3 underdeep XDXD ah-well |
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Post by Rider on Aug 22, 2006 13:05:52 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]We're in the Catacombs, 'cause we need an Underdeep. XD But yes, sorry for that whole go-ahead thing, I guess I jumped the gun and junk... Wandy- You mean you believed me when I said Tracy did it? 0_o[/glow] who said the forum couldn't be a building+catacombs? XD and uhh...you don't need to be in the catacombs to have an underdeep I always thought of it was a very deep basement. like the floors go: floor 1 basement 1 basement 2 basement 3 underdeep XDXD ah-well [glow=red,2,300]XDD Ahh-well, next time, Rider doesn't plan these things.[/glow] |
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Post by Spot on Aug 22, 2006 13:54:46 GMT -5
Its kinda long ^__^;;; and not finished XD [glow=red,2,300]XDDD Post it when it is finished. You don't have to rewrite it. It's not like we don't already have plot holes out the wazoo, so no one's gonna notice.[/glow] I was writing as though it were daytime (refers to sun glare etc.). People were going to find out what the clang was from Lycos' vent exploration. And then suddenly it's nighttime with Meowthy being killed off? XD There's a complete time gap, and lacking closure on the prior events... ......WAITWAIT Lycos just went searching for a way out! Why does Meowth get a BALCONY? [glow=red,2,300]Because none of this really exists. ^_^ Now sit, fiendish ninja. EDIT: Moonlight = necessity, something I didn't factor in when we chose the Catacombs as a location.[/glow] Yes, and I was providing for finding a way outside with the vent thing ... gah. XD *smacks Rider senseless and back* |
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Post by Ikkin on Aug 22, 2006 15:17:39 GMT -5
...wow, so this is what happens when I'm not here. XDD
Well, I suppose we've got to work with what we have, so... For Spot's time issue with the clang in the vents, I suppose it can be done past-tense, either in thoughts or spoken to other forumers. For the hole in the wall, well, I guess I'll just pretend it's really small, 'cause if I can fit out, I can fly away, no matter how high it is (and I bet there's other magic that can allow for the same thing).
...who should find Meowthy, anyway?
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Post by Rider on Aug 22, 2006 15:28:14 GMT -5
...wow, so this is what happens when I'm not here. XDD Well, I suppose we've got to work with what we have, so... For Spot's time issue with the clang in the vents, I suppose it can be done past-tense, either in thoughts or spoken to other forumers. For the hole in the wall, well, I guess I'll just pretend it's really small, 'cause if I can fit out, I can fly away, no matter how high it is (and I bet there's other magic that can allow for the same thing). ...who should find Meowthy, anyway? [glow=red,2,300]You do. ^_^ 'cause you know you want to and Rider has to leave in a bit. [/glow] |
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Post by Killix on Aug 22, 2006 15:33:30 GMT -5
I was writing as though it were daytime (refers to sun glare etc.). People were going to find out what the clang was from Lycos' vent exploration. And then suddenly it's nighttime with Meowthy being killed off? XD There's a complete time gap, and lacking closure on the prior events... but my death HAS to take place during the night XDXD We can just assume a normal time gap of uninteresting stuff happens. |
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Post by Ikkin on Aug 22, 2006 15:34:17 GMT -5
...wow, so this is what happens when I'm not here. XDD Well, I suppose we've got to work with what we have, so... For Spot's time issue with the clang in the vents, I suppose it can be done past-tense, either in thoughts or spoken to other forumers. For the hole in the wall, well, I guess I'll just pretend it's really small, 'cause if I can fit out, I can fly away, no matter how high it is (and I bet there's other magic that can allow for the same thing). ...who should find Meowthy, anyway? [glow=red,2,300]You do. ^_^ 'cause you know you want to and Rider has to leave in a bit. [/glow] Well, now that you put it that way... XD I'll do that. And, now, I did it. ^^ Hopefully, I didn't dig any more plot holes... and casted some suspicion on myself. |
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Thanks, Leoness! ^__^
