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Post by Fj0rd on Mar 22, 2007 18:05:05 GMT -5
I wonder if I took out enough of the violence...  I wish it was a little more concrete than "your story has too much violence." I need to know WHERE! The first part was pretty violent, I thought. >.> |
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Post by Killix on Mar 22, 2007 18:05:23 GMT -5
*smooches the next person to post*
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Post by Dan on Mar 22, 2007 18:06:10 GMT -5
I wonder if I took out enough of the violence... I wish it was a little more concrete than "your story has too much violence." I need to know WHERE! The first part was pretty violent, I thought. >.> I think I took out the whole part where they're chased, so that cancels that out, and I kept Gormos alive at the end, so...*ponders* Meowth--*smacks* >O |
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Post by Killix on Mar 22, 2007 18:07:00 GMT -5
I think I took out the whole part where they're chased, so that cancels that out, and I kept Gormos alive at the end, so...*ponders* *smooch* ^_^ *runs off to pick flowers* |
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Post by Huntress on Mar 22, 2007 18:07:16 GMT -5
I wonder if I took out enough of the violence... I wish it was a little more concrete than "your story has too much violence." I need to know WHERE! I usually make mental notes about scenes that are possibly hanging on the edge while writing. Actually, I recently started using the Comments option in MS Word. Useful in long series where you need to keep track on which day it currently is x3 True that they really need more concrete rejection letters though. We have the advantage of tormenting Droplet in person, but people who don't come here, don't. And I updated the collab ^^ |
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Post by Killix on Mar 22, 2007 18:07:31 GMT -5
 </3 |
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Post by Fj0rd on Mar 22, 2007 18:08:40 GMT -5
The first part was pretty violent, I thought. >.> I think I took out the whole part where they're chased, so that cancels that out, and I kept Gormos alive at the end, so...*ponders* Meowth--*smacks* >O Hmm. I vote you send it in again and see. *really should write something tonight* >.> |
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Post by Dan on Mar 22, 2007 18:08:52 GMT -5
</3 ^____^ |
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Post by Killix on Mar 22, 2007 18:09:38 GMT -5
I am proud to know that you are happy in witnessing (and causing) my pain.  |
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Post by Dan on Mar 22, 2007 18:10:24 GMT -5
I think I took out the whole part where they're chased, so that cancels that out, and I kept Gormos alive at the end, so...*ponders* Meowth--*smacks* >O Hmm. I vote you send it in again and see. *really should write something tonight* >.> I'll reread through it now and then send it in. *sigh* This whole thing's taking forever. I started writing this last November! *throws hands up in frustration* |
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Post by Huntress on Mar 22, 2007 18:10:48 GMT -5
That was a good spork >> But that was a good german sentence too, this coming from She Who Nitpicks Too Much, so it's all well =3 What's the reason for teh happiness? *gnaws on it happily* =D It was SUNNY today. And warm. Sunny warm days make Fj0rd happy. .... one of my friends was all, "Today is horrible! Yesterday was beautiful!" Pfft. Yesterday was overcast and gloomy and euuulch. She's a silly. *hi-fives* T'was sunny here as well. And warm. Waaaaarm. I could walk around without wearing my good olde cap, and it was such a free and summery feeling. Now you made me happy by reminding me =3 GROUP HUG! |
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Post by Dan on Mar 22, 2007 18:11:02 GMT -5
I am proud to know that you are happy in witnessing (and causing) my pain. I don't get happy when causing pain to just anyone, my dear. ^_^ |
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Post by Killix on Mar 22, 2007 18:12:32 GMT -5
I don't get happy when causing pain to just anyone, my dear. ^_^ Well, good. Glad to be of service to you, however much pain I may feel. ^_^ |
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Post by Fj0rd on Mar 22, 2007 18:13:50 GMT -5
*gnaws on it happily* =D It was SUNNY today. And warm. Sunny warm days make Fj0rd happy. .... one of my friends was all, "Today is horrible! Yesterday was beautiful!" Pfft. Yesterday was overcast and gloomy and euuulch. She's a silly. *hi-fives* T'was sunny here as well. And warm. Waaaaarm. I could walk around without wearing my good olde cap, and it was such a free and summery feeling. Now you made me happy by reminding me =3 GROUP HUG! Yaaaay! ^___^ *hugs* |
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Post by Dan on Mar 22, 2007 18:14:32 GMT -5
I don't get happy when causing pain to just anyone, my dear. ^_^ Well, good. Glad to be of service to you, however much pain I may feel. ^_^ Did you just give me carte blanche for pain? o-o! =D |
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I wish it was a little more concrete than "your story has too much violence." I need to know WHERE! 
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