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Post by Kiddo on Jan 10, 2004 21:29:32 GMT -5
Sims + Kiddo.
That's just not right.
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Post by Plushie on Jan 10, 2004 21:37:06 GMT -5
I thought Wolf because you let her see and edit the whole thing.
I never saw it coming, Patjade would be the kidnapper. That was a unexpected twist, I must say.
Excellent job, Roxy! *pats on back* I really liked it. Can't wait for a sequel!
I have dibs on being the love interest in the sequel. heheh.
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Post by Cheshil on Jan 10, 2004 22:01:43 GMT -5
100% AWESOME!
I like being a sheild... Although the boxes... Didn't you see them?!
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Post by staltoo lazy to login on Jan 10, 2004 22:49:14 GMT -5
READ! Murder Mystery Intermission: -Now I want you to think hard and long...who is it? Please make a guess before reading the next part and please post your guess and your reaction to who the actual kidnapper is! Let me know if your guess was right or wrong! I really want to know so please reply! Was the actual kidnapper hard to figure out? Too easy? Let me know, all feedback is appericated! Thanks! Are you sure want to know? All these months of waiting, are you sure your ready? Couldn't you just wait another day? I refuse to torture you anymore the kidnapper is.... Okay, knowing nothing about who it is, I will go with what I've said from here-on. It is Lady Wolfina. *goes back to reading* |
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Post by Stal on Jan 10, 2004 23:13:30 GMT -5
Okay, knowing nothing about who it is, I will go with what I've said from here-on. It is Lady Wolfina. *goes back to reading* Patjade! I thought she was too obvious a choice! Argh! Good story, Rox! Mwahahah. There going to be a sequel? ^_^ |
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Post by Roxy on Jan 11, 2004 0:08:30 GMT -5
Patjade! I thought she was too obvious a choice! Argh! Good story, Rox! Mwahahah. There going to be a sequel? ^_^ Possibly...I haven't decided. I think it would be a lot of fun to write I think there might be a possible one down the road, but we'll see ^__^ Awesome ending! Heh, you actually got my character perfect until the end, but I'm not complaining since the story was a thrill and awesome by itself anyway. =P Good job! Kick butt girls can dance, too as well, as kick butts! Sims + Kiddo. That's just not right. It doesn't mean your a couple, you just finally caved and danced with him haha I should have added you darted away after |
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Post by teghan62 on Jan 11, 2004 0:42:39 GMT -5
Kick butt girls can dance, too as well, as kick butts! I'd probably end up kicking more butts when dancing. XD I suck. ^_^ |
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Post by Crystal on Jan 11, 2004 1:39:30 GMT -5
Would anybody be surprised to learn that my aim in real life is horrible? XD Actually, I love the part where Sims continued to court Kiddo even while swimming in freezing waters...  |
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Post by Random Cameo Neotomi on Jan 11, 2004 1:58:36 GMT -5
Gee, thanks a lot rox, I was so into your story I missed english class.
To teach you a lesson, I'm going to ask if I can do my book report on this! muwahahahaha
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Post by Matt on Jan 11, 2004 10:00:03 GMT -5
I'm glad you all enjoyed it! Actually you got dissed by Lady Wolfina...she disses you a lot haha *goes to kill Lady Wolfina* I showed the story to Lyss and she isn't letting me live down the nail thing. ;D |
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Post by Stal on Jan 11, 2004 11:00:06 GMT -5
I'd probably end up kicking more butts when dancing. XD I suck. ^_^ Hah hah. That's funny, Tegh. I do, too. ^_^ I'm somewhat good at slow dancing, but anything more than that. Psh... |
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Post by wolfofthewoods on Jan 11, 2004 14:40:30 GMT -5
;D;D;D;D;D
You all thought I was the napper o' kids? Dahhlings, don't be so thick. *pulls out her compact* ^_~
AWESOME ending, Rox. *huggles to death*
Sorry I couldn't finish up the editing... But, hey... Maybe we could collab. on the next one...? xP Yeah, I know. I'm finished with Times writing. But this won't be for the Times, so we can break ALL the rules. *cackles*
;D;D;D;D;D;D
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Post by Crystal on Jan 12, 2004 6:26:38 GMT -5
;D;D;D;D;D You all thought I was the napper o' kids? Dahhlings, don't be so thick. *pulls out her compact* ^_~ AWESOME ending, Rox. *huggles to death* Sorry I couldn't finish up the editing... But, hey... Maybe we could collab. on the next one...? xP Yeah, I know. I'm finished with Times writing. But this won't be for the Times, so we can break ALL the rules. *cackles* ;D;D;D;D;D;D Intresting idea, Wolf... *sneaky grin* |
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Post by Random Cameo Neotomi on Jan 12, 2004 7:50:39 GMT -5
I thought Yado did it o.o
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Post by Kiddo on Jan 12, 2004 9:10:57 GMT -5
I had no idea who did it. I'm the eternally surprised reader, the perpetual Dr. Watson, sitting there and waiting for the ending where everything would be made clear.
Altough I was secretly hoping that Sims would somehow be the kidnapper. Somehow.
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